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Posted: 13 years ago
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will surelp update tomorrow...
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Chapter 2


Kriya - excuse me guys...

Neha - now where going u r?

Kriya - main bas thodi der mein aayi neha...

Abhig smirked...

Abhig - ya ya take ur time...

Kriya - tu toh chup hi reh...

Kriya went to fireexit and called her dad (she dont want anyone to know about this)

Kriya - thank u soo soo soo much papa...

VP - itni khush? kya hua beta?

Kriya - main jaaanti hun aapne hi mom ko manaya hoga...

VP - kis baat ke liye?

Kriya - dont act papa pls...

VP - nahi beta mujhe bilkul bhi nahi pata tum kya bol rahi ho...

Kriya - aapne mom ko convince nahi kiya promise waapis lene ke liye?

VP - nahi...

Kriya - toh phir kisne... wait a min abhig!!!! sh*t im such a fool... sorry papa bye...

VP - bye...

She cut the call and went back towards the gang... but she didnt found abhig over there...

Kriya - umm guys tum logo ne abhig ko dekha?

Vish - hey dude ye abig kaun hai?

Shivam - he had gone home...

Kriya - main tumse nahi pucha hai!!! 😡

Shivam - im...

Abhig - na tujhe kabhi maafi mili thi aur na hi milegi...

Kriya - abhig!!!! omg thank u sooo much...

She gave him a brotherly hug...

Abhig - thanks kisliye?

Kriya - as if u dont know...

Abhig - ok ok fyn... waise bhi iski saari galtiyan mujhe hi suljhaani padti hain toh ye kaun si badi baat thi...

Kriya - badi baat hai abhig... u dont know how much it matters to me... these 2 things r my life... i can never live without them...

Abhig - hmm... matlab treat pakki...

Kriya - pakki!!!

Vish - koi mujhe batayega ye sab kya ho raha hai? and who the hell r u dude...

K - opps sorry guys i forgot to introduce u all with him... well guys hes abhigyan or u can say abhig... my cousin... he's my bua's elder son and unfortunately...

Sw - unfortunately?????

Abhig - shivam's brother...

All - what!!!!!!!!

Kriya and abhig looked at eachother...

K - um guys but he isnt like him even 1%

R - and how did u knew this...

It was the first time when he spoke with her... she looked at him and could see the pain in his eyes clearly...

K - i knew it b'coz i am with him from the day i reached dehradun and this much time is enough to knew someone...

R - I dont think so... kisi kisi ko toh pura ek saal ho jaata hai par phir bhi wo dusron ko samajh nahi paate...

And he left from there... all the while taani was listening everything quietly and was hell confused...

Taani - bhai ye sab kya ho raha hai?

K - bhai?

T - haan swayam bhai... kyun?

K - oh nahi kuch nahi...

Abhig - hey dont run from that haan...

K - oye mister... kuch bhi kar aayega toh ghar hi na... toh phir kyun tension le raha hai... teri treat pakki hai

Ne - wo sab leaving... kriya telling why she left huh?

K - neha wo actually...

Again abhig phone started ringing and a smile crept on his face... kriya too checked the caller id and smirked...

K - ahem ahem... uthao...

Abhig - chup reh

K - kyun? and she burst out laughing... u know sometime i think that shes really mad...

Abhig - haha very funny...

Ne - kriya telling r u?

K - kuch neha bas wo ma...

Vish - aunty kya kriya?

K - kuch nahi guys bas maa ko mere dance karne ke baare mein pata chal gaya tha...

All except abhig (he was attending the call) - what!!!!!

K - woah guys calm down... she had given me the permision to dance now so chill...

Ne - really... good news is this...

Abhig - what?

K - she means its a good news...

Abhig - oh... chal maami ka phone aaya tha... she called us back home...

K - but abhig abhi toh aaye the... aur...

Abhig - i cant help it K... maamu se baat kar...

K - and u think wo maan jayenge...

Abhig - toh phir to nikalna chahiye... chal kal aayenge...

K - theek hai... bye guys

Ne - Kriya going neha sad...

Vish - ya dude tum abhi toh aayi ho... aur jaa bhi rahi ho...

K - sorry guys... maa ko mana nahi kar sakti... bye will meet u all tomorrow


Sorry guys jaanti hun boring hai but pls sorry maaf kar dena
Edited by abhiyakreya - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#63
nice start...continue it!n thanx 4 da pm!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#64
Amazing Update .
It was cute one.
But Rey ko kab manege yeh sab.
Thanks for pm.
Update next part soon.
Loved abhig-Kria's relationship.


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Posted: 13 years ago
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superb update konpal
waiting for next update😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: unnipgc

superb update konpal

waiting for next update😊


Maine toh kar diya lekin tu kab karegi?
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Posted: 13 years ago
#67
bohat short hey
asa nahi karna chahiye
but i love this please update soon ha
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Posted: 13 years ago
#68
Awesum updt...
Luvd it!!!

Abhi rey ko maana padega..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#69
Nyc update!!
Thnx 4 the pm..



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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesum update..
ty fr da pm

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