ArHi FF: Colors of the Wind; Th-1 Prologue - Ch-6B

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pheonix24

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Posted: 13 years ago

#801

Very emotional update...The dialogues were amazing

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hari93

@hari93

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Posted: 13 years ago

#802

Just one word - Beautiful....

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CravingKhana

@CravingKhana

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Posted: 13 years ago

#803

meera a very emotional chapter and well done...you rode the line carefully and did not make it cheesy and there was no fall in his arms forgive him...nor turn into ASR and belittle his words...just a khushi n overaught khushi hurt and needing to heal...

ASR too did a forgive me still keeping in charactor...loved it...

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Ovi_Tanni

@Ovi_Tanni

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Posted: 13 years ago

#804

Amazing update...loved the way he said every sorry to her,his emotion,his pain and her pain...u described their emotion very well...loved it...

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Wah_taj

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Posted: 13 years ago

#805

so beautifully written;) loved it n thnx for d pm!1:)

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Sultan_Of_Swing

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Posted: 13 years ago

#806

Meera, the apology was beautiful and heartfelt. Arnav owes this to Kushi not just for the cruelty of their sham marriage but for treating her the way he did right from the day he met her.
Also the apology carried on to his confession of love. But he is still pragmatic of where Kushi stands and her needing all the time in this world to accept him and his love.

Thanks for the PM.

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inspiringstars

@inspiringstars

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Posted: 13 years ago

#807

Oh wow, what an apology! I am so thrilled to actually read through the apology! I so wish the show also shows something like this, becos it will be a treat to watch Barun and Sanaya act out this part!!

I completely understand Khushi's "I cannot", but if I was in her place and I loved him so much, I guess I would have given him a chance right there and then. But I agree she needs time and am happy Arnav has the patience for it.

You are fabulous girl, I am a fan of your writing!!

I think it must be the hardest for you to write this one, as you have to get in the shoes of Khushi and then Arnav according to the scenario, which I think is quite difficult.

Thanks for the pm, continue soon!

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Sona

@mistyrains

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Posted: 13 years ago

#808

Heart-tugging chapter 😭

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barunxoxo

@barunxoxo

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Posted: 13 years ago

#809

i had tears in my eyes by the end of this chapter..beautifully written..
the Cvs should totally read what you write..I'm sure they could learn a thing or two..
thank you for the PM:)

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Yellow.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#810

meera! this is so BEAUTIFUL... ❤️

i was having tears reading this... brought all the memories back... its heart wrenching to read how arnav was accepting his all deeds he done in the past with a sorry 😭

poor khushi she is been through so much... i liked that arnav excepted that she needs time to compose herself to forgive him..

perfectly written 👏