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dancedanceRR

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

this portrayed their confused emotional state perfectly! amazing job!

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Hunnybunny3

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

My word!! That was heart wrenchingly beautiful. A fabulously penned OS 👏Their emotions were palpable from the start. Thanks for the pm.xx

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Asma!! 🤗 You made my Tuesday dear by writing this OS...😊 Thanks for the PM sweets and yeah, definitely wasn't expecting you to write something this soon.

Needless to say, as always, this was so beautiful. Thoroughly enjoyed reading it. You know that this is truly your forte. The best of you comes out when you write about the inner thoughts and conflicts of the characters. I have always loved how well you narrate their thought processes. Believe it or not, I had noticed this way back when you used to write about NivRen but I just realized that I have never mentioned it to you...😃

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Asma

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: Scintillating
Asma!! 🤗 You made my Tuesday dear by writing this OS...😊 Thanks for the PM sweets and yeah, definitely wasn't expecting you to write something this soon.

Needless to say, as always, this was so beautiful. Thoroughly enjoyed reading it. You know that this is truly your forte. The best of you comes out when you write about the inner thoughts and conflicts of the characters. I have always loved how well you narrate their thought processes. Believe it or not, I had noticed this way back when you used to write about NivRen but I just realized that I have never mentioned it to you...😃

Hi Payal🤗 Aww ur sweet to say that I made ur day, I wasn't planing to write anything really but I'd written a few paragraphs of the Arnav part last night randomly and after today's episode I just couldn't help myself and it fit with the precap too somehow! I'm glad u enjoyed reading it and thanks for the compliments, I enjoy writing about their thoughts and emotions and also used to enjoy it with NivRen, it seems to come naturally when I write so I'm happy you love that aspect😊

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queenie11

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Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Beautiful, especially that part about Khushi feeling that she's not part of Arnav's special people. Sometimes I prefer the angst and thoughts and perspective over the naughty stuff - wonderful writing!

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Asma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: queenie11
Beautiful, especially that part about Khushi feeling that she's not part of Arnav's special people. Sometimes I prefer the angst and thoughts and perspective over the naughty stuff - wonderful writing!

Thank you😊 The angsty stuff takes more out of you but it tends to flow easier - well for me anyway! Glad you liked it and thought it was beautiful x

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sRistee

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Posted: 13 years ago

#27

it was beautiful dear! u penned down their feelings brilliantely!
loveD it :)

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mali

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Posted: 13 years ago

#28

you captured their thoughts perfectly. It's beautiful.

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farfar319

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Posted: 13 years ago

#29

totally loved it ! I think you've captured their feelings quite well !

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Gunjan Mukherjee

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Posted: 13 years ago

#30

Very real n very beautiful..u wrote dwn their thoughts so accurately..felt like a film reel is goin on infrnt of..n i cud c evry scene..evry emtion etched on their face,emanating out frm their eyes..
luvly asma! it was a treat!

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