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Maya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#61

Very nicely written.. your way with words is amazing..really makes me feel as distraught as Khushi or as confused as Arnav, as I read :)

Thanks for the PM..

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asdfgh456

@asdfgh456

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Posted: 13 years ago

#62

It was sad, but I think an accurate depiction of how they're both feeling, v. bittersweet. You were right I was surprised to find another PM so soon, but definitely a good one 😊 i love your OS's, are you planning on writing another SS or maybe a FF? If you do, trust me you already have one reader lined up! x

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kpk1002

@kpk1002

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Posted: 13 years ago

#63

Beautiful👏 Loved it❤️❤️

Thanks for the PM too😛

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SankaDevi20

@SankaDevi20

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Posted: 13 years ago

#64

Wow, this was lovely! I love how youve described both of their feelings about eachother in such depth.. How they feel so strongly for eachother but keep denying it to themselves and eachother! And that if the hindrance would be moved, whatever it was, there is something so beauftiful underneath! Something that had survived every aukat crap and Laad governor! Love how he scooted closer to her at night! You wrote this very beautifully!

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robin999

@robin999

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Posted: 13 years ago

#65

beautiful 👏 , like u put heart and soul back in ipk , i wish cv can take few tips from this, so that we can c and feel our old raba ve back. 😭

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GoBananas

@GoBananas

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Posted: 13 years ago

#66

TOO WELL WRITTEN !! just beautiful!! :D :D

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aamina

@-aamina-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#67

Hey asma,
🤗
I'm so behind with reading your updates, and I am really very sorry. I've been dead busy for the last few months and have hardly been online! hope u can forgive me.
K coming back to ur update, as usual it was beautifully written. I hardly watch the show so don't really know what's happening but it sounds heartbreaking. There is so much love and pain both expressed in ur writing 👏 and I loved it.
Thanks for the pm hun
Mwah

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Aarti

@aartipartyy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: .Euphoria.
Omg Asma..This was amaaazing. Like seriously. So heartbreaking, no wonder it took a lot out of you! And even though like you said it's mainly their thoughts- you penned it down so accurately and beautifully 🤗
Awesome.

ok even though this is completely off topic.. can i just i love your signature. That is exactly how i feel whenever he comes on. 😆

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minu2011

@minu2011

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Posted: 13 years ago

#69

Asma, loved it. Thank you for writing and sharing...

Sorry it took me so long to see this :)

Keep writing dear Asma. you are so talented.

love,
Minu