Kriyaansh OS- 'Is dis love??'

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So welcome us back wid dis OS..

This is d combined work of Meow n Poppy..

Hope u'll lyk it..

We truely want to giv dis OS as a birthday gift to trios-Shonu(May 1st), neethu(Apr 24) n Aromakriyaansh(Apr 29) whose birthdays r in dis week...


~~~~~~~Introduction~~~~~~


This is d very strange friendship story of two persons who havnt met each other but r still in touch wid msgs n cals from d past few months.Kriya knows rey bt rey knows her only by her cals n msgs.

Wat wil b deir reaction if he comes to know her??

Is it just a strange relationship??

Do they feel anything beyond d friendship??

If so how wil they confess??

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This OS consists of two parts-dis is d first n d beginning part.


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Rey n Kriya r left in d college.Rey calls her keeping his gaze in each n every spot of d college.He doesnt hear d noise of d cell ringing but as he walked further he cud hear d voice on both sides, on d phone n on d way.He followed d way until d voice was so clearly heard.

Kriya heard his foot steps nd became alert as there was no one except thm she knew that it was rey she has already covered herself by scarf she now heard the foot steps clearly her heart started beating fast.She started walking Rey to followed the foot steps.(P.S- they can only hear the foot steps they cannot see each other).Kriya rushed to girls locker room, rey now was standing outside.

Call convo


Rey:Baatcutter, pls ek baar toh samne aao.



"Tum aisa bina batkiye rakthi toh mujhe kaisa patha chalega tum kya soch rahi ho.."



K : Rey aap... aap kya bol rahe ho mujhe samajh nahi aa raha hai.



R : plz maine abhi tumhe dekha hai girls locker room mai jate hue plz ek baar samne aao.



K : Rey mai to ... mai to apne...apne ghar par hu.



R : agar ye sach hai to tum ghabra kyu rahi ho?


K : vo...vo..meri maa yahaan hain isiliye..mein phir se cal karthi hun rey.bye..



R:Bye??Wat...disconnect kiya.


*Ended*



Rey now was standing outside the locker room he saw around there was no one he was becoming desperate to see her,he again looked around nd after conforming that there was no one he went in without making a pity sound, he scanned the entire room but culd not find anyone but he knew tat she was still there so acted as if going out.Kriya heard his foot steps nd thought that he went away so she came out but she felt herself sticking to the wall he pinned her to the wall nd kept his hand on right side of her face so that she cant move he looked into her eyes.Those beautiful brown eyes which were attracting him more towards her.She makes an effort to go, he keeps his another hand beside her blocking her from d both sides*LLHH spell for 2 mins*.


She looks down unable to bear dose questioning eyes which indirectly where asking her many qs.

"Phone par ithne baate karte ho aur abhi..."

"...Kithna wait karvaogi mujhe"




Her skin was severely prickling as his breath hits her soft skin, her heart starts its beats more faster. Kriya could not speak anything only 1 thing was running in her mind "No rey should not see me now" she kept thinking how to escape from here but she felt someone touching her scarf .

Rey caught the end of the scarf with his left hand, looking at her eyes. Her eyes popped out she didn't want this to happen as Rey took one of his hand she got the opportunity to run away she pushed him as he was not expecting this his grip on scarf loosened..He struggled to maintain a balance.To his utter disappointment he did one good thing, he holded on to her scarf n pulled it. She stood startled to his reaction.

He loved dis chasing game, his anxiety to see her was leveling more as d tym was passing by.He cud feel her fragrance thru her scarf which was smoothly textured.He held dat soft piece of cloth in his hands n followed her.He never knew wat d way lead him but he was sure of only one thing-to see her n feel her essence.Her sweet voice which wud wake up him up tenderly every morning.He was eager to see her graceful face which he was only dreaming every night.He wasn't sure abt any of his feelings for her, still she was a special person for him.He cud feel her affection thru her words, he cud figure out dat she was a person who was very close to his heart.At a tym, there silence cud easily narrate their words.How strange it felt to d others but yet their endless talks always made their days.

His steps directed towards her, she cal feel his intense gaze on her back.Her legs weren't listening to her mind.She stayed glued to her position until she felt his hand on her.Her heartbeats take a high position.

"What if he sees me??Wat wil be his reaction??"

One, two n so many qs. formed in her fury mind without a mere clue for d answers.She stepped forward n paced away wid her jet speed.

He follows her upto a distance until she completely disappears.He gets a message from her,

"Come to atrium"

As directed he went to atrium, he can feel her perfume widely spread in d air, she was here, near by to him but she was hiding.He looked around n found a small box on d staircase, he took it in hands, it was a wrapped gift.He was unsure whether to open it or not to.

Another msg, "Open it".

An unmissing smile curves on his face as he opens it.There was a just a piece of paper with something written on it lyk, "Hcaeb ru prahs em ta 8 etiruovaf ta teem mp".

"????", he msgs her a bit confused.

"Puzzle!!!Unlock it n then msg me .C u soon'bye...

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So this part ends here, for d final part there shud be a mini hard work for d readers.

The ending part wil b posted as soon as d puzzle is solved by any one of you.

Readers having xams pls dnt try n waste ur tym, n others who wanted to read d next part try upon it..it is a very easy one!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Happy Birthday Neethu...
Though v kno u very less..hav to admit d fact..
U r really a gud friend...
V talked very lil but still v wil remember u..
Happy Birthday!!!





Happy Birthday Shonu..
Our greatest n best buddy on IF..
Luv u for ur works..
N dnt u dare to 4 get us...
Waiting for ur so many works...
Luv u alot!!!
N promise v'll surely try for another OS on ur bday!!
Happy Birthday in Advance!!!





Luv u for ur all comments..
V dnt ur name...
Thought of asking you...but u r nt ol...
Loved all ur comments on our FF's!!!
Esp. "Kya baat.."
Happy Birthday in advance!!!!



It sounds too funny to wish lyk dis dat too in advance..

We'll b busy wid our xams preparation dats y advance wishes..

Luv u all a lot!!!

N Neethu...happy birthday!!!(Ryt on ur day)-But u r nt ol..



Edited by snigdha_arsha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesoeme plz do pm me the last part
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Posted: 13 years ago
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its smthing lyk...meet me at sharp 8 pm at ur favourite beach...sorry i think a "ur "is left...and update its awesome shravs and sweetu...luv u both 4r this
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thoda samjha...
Meet me at 8 pm sharp at ur favourite...
Ageka tu bol de na mat na tadpa ab...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nyc OS sissy and shivs :)
loved it and waiting for the next part...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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meet me at ur favourite beach at 8 pm sharp
asaan tha rey
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: kriyansh24

meet me at ur favourite beach at 8 pm sharp
asaan tha rey



Vaishu im gng to kill u..

I told its an easy one n also mentioned ppl having xams can stay away but still...😈
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hey nc os...waitng 4 nxt update nd tryng 2 mk a mngfl sntnc out of da pzl...
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Awesome update but what is the meaning of that..!

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