Originally posted by: Oneandall
This was very well written! I REALLY LIKED HOW YOU INTEGRATED THE SONG IN TO THE STORY.
You are a very good writer, i also liked how you wrote about his imaginations and then Rishab wakes him up, i really thought it was an actual scene n not his imagination.
Very Nice, Keep up the good work! π
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