OS:Azaadi...shayad(freedom...perhaps)part8 pg17 - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
good part...waiting for the next one
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reali reali reali nyce want to hear the next part plzz updat sn...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thnx fr all ur motivation guyz..im really thnkful..😃...
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PART-3
Everyone at MM was confused and hetal said...
"lekin aisa kaise ho sakta hai ki aap sab ghar aajayiye aur ahem..."
Chhirag replied..
"hetal,ahem ne to mujhse khud aakar poochha tha ki wo jaa raha hai.Aur maine ijaazat de di kyunki office ka saara kaam to ho chuka tha bas..."
Kokila sank down on the sofa and mourned that...
"ye ahem ko ho kya gaya hai?..abhi tak ghar nahin aaya aur upar se kisi ko kuch bataaya tak nahin..."
Hetal assured koki..
"kokila,tum chinta mat karo ahem jahaan kahin bhi hoga wapas aajayega...bhagvaan par bharosa karo wo sab theek kar denge.."
Gopi all the while stood there as if hypnotised.She was all broken.She had no words.Her ahemji was suffering till now.But now the whole family is...all because of her.She thought she has to clean what she has messed up these years today at once and for all.She engulfed all the tears which were protesting to come out of her eyes,lost in thoughts.She came back to the world when she heard her MIL say...
"jigar tum ahem ko phone lagaakar poocho ki kahaan hai wo...kya kar raha hai itni der raat ko?"
Jigar nodded a yes and tried on ahem's cell which was unanswered.Chirag soon gave the idea that they should inform the police,as it may be a great help.Everyone agreed at once.While all the time rashi enjoyed the show,soon she started to feel sleepy and began to yawn which didn't went unnoticed by gopi and koki.Koki gave a glare which made her shudder but she began to hetal...
"Mummyji...ermm...wo hum do ghanton se aise hi intezaar kar rahen hain.."
Everyone glanced a disgust at her especially gopi, and she continued..
"nahin mera matlab hai ki..wo sab hi log thak gaye honge to kuch kha kar aaram karlenge to shayad achha lage...aur mujhe poora vishwas hai ki ahem jijoo aaj hi ghar wapas lot aayyenge...police bhi to unhain khoj rahi hai naa..."
Hetal quickly agreed and everyone else also got swayed at her idea and after dinner everyone retired to their rooms.
 
                       It was really dark and moonless night,especially for ahem and gopi.Ahem stood at the cornish which was deserted and his car parked nearby,he liked the place.He had been here for only about 4 hours but developed a homely feeling...but it was incomplete as the peace and eternity only had the face value without gopi.He had come here to yell out his feelings which were buried in his heart since really long.But actually fell in love with it's peace.He has now decided to sort out his messed up life.Actually his life gopi.He hated her tears but hated them more when they tricked down her rosy cheeks...all because of him.He couldn't erase the hrsh moments...when he carried anita in his arms to his car while gopi his wife just followed him numbly.She was supposed to aquire that place a long ago...but unfortunately his ego got him there to express his feelings for her.He had fancied her a lot but because of his ego could only fulfill his desires in his dream.
                         But now he is not going to look back and be a ahem modi and fight with his ego for his wife and that he is going to do it today.
 
                Here in MM the lights were already out and everybody in there room except gopi.She sat by the stairs of the temple and prayed hard,asked questions to her kanhaji and at times made promises about her life and ahemji.Meanwhile anita needed water and there was nobody around and didn't wish to disturb theirs peaceful sleep for just a glass of water.So she quitely sneeked down the stairs and came back with a glass of water,this was when she nticed gopi to be by the temple and she then she went nearer and heard...
"kanhaji..aap aisa kyun kar rahen hain ahemji ke saath...kyun.."
gopi wasn't able to complete her sentence well and choked.Anita noticed that she was crying and was all broken hearted for some reason so she just eaves dropped..
"Kanhaji..aap ahemji ko ek baar sahi salamat ghar wapas le aayi ye ...phir main ...main ahemji ki zindagi se hamesha hamesha ke liye nikal jaongi..nikal jaongi.."
and she cried some more.Anita stood there dumbstruck and speechless..
"Ahem abhi tak ghar nahin aaya?"
 
                      Here ahem reached back to the car and sat on the driver's seat to drive back when he noticed that he had left his phone in the car itself.He quickly checked for the missed calls and there they were.Two from jigar and five from gopi's cell.He panicked as he knew that gopi would be crying her heart out all alone by the side of her kanhaji.He quickly drove to MM and reached in no time at all.But how would he get in everyone would be bananas over him and start to ask questions as he would enter,so he messaged gopi to open the door quitely.
 
                     Here anita was all astonished at ahem's adverse behaviour annd thought that it was all because of her.Since she has come to MM nothing is going the right way they should especially ahem and gopi's relation.Gopi got the text from ahem and was elated and thanked her kanhaji and ran towards the door.Anita hid behind the pillars and just stood their with a heavy heart...
 
PRECAP:
gopi was serving food with plane expression while everyone was in there room except anita secretly watching them.Ahem questions gopi..
"gopi kya tum mujhse nahin poochhogi ki main kahaan aur kyun gaya tha?"
gopi just stands there gaping him and dumbstruck at his question..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
guyz now...(panting)...
am all bushed...gotta take rest..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
lovely cant wait 4 the nxt part...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
awesome os ..👏!eagerly waiting for the next update..!pls update it soon..!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
will try n update tomarow...
coz skool starts tomarow and again in the heck of works...
but try my best...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
Liked anita overheared gopis talk with kanaji. Eagerly waiting for next update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
Lovely as far as I am able to understand. Please continue. But is it possible to write the dialogues in English? I don't know Hindi :(
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
sorry for ur inconveneince...
i will try and write the next part translated in english..