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Originally posted by: napstermonster
I asked four different Indian friends and cross checked that line. They were helpful, though they now think I'm nuts, since they don't know what the dialogue is supposed to be for! The dialogue attempts in this OS is all mine, so its probably curling your toes in horror as we speak, since I'm sure I butchered grammar and syntax every where! Thanks for reading this, and Perfection! and for ALWAYS always commenting-i love reading your critiques!
LOL okay, that explains it. 😆 No worries, even with the incorrect grammar & syntax, I LOWWWED every line of this OS. It was downright hilarious and C.U.T.E. I am so waiting to see this lovesick Arnav on the show now. 😆
This line seriously cracked me up, "DI!DI! SERIOUSLY? Now, at this moment you've forgotten where you've put your puja thali? Isn't it always glued to your hands? Well, I had a thali ready for you, in case this happened. Here it is. Now come to the door!" 🤣 🤣
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