ABHIYA ff-MY DESTINY COMPLETED

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Posted: 12 years ago

hello friends,this is my first attempt as a writer on abhiya.i m not good writter.so any mistakes please forgive.my ss name is my destiny.so give your opnion to whether continue or not
CHARACTER SKETCH

ABHAY RAICHAND/ AKASH MALTHORA
 HE IS A TALL, HANDSOME MAN CAN MESIMERSE GIRL THOUGH HIS
CHARMS.A YOUNG VAMPIRE YET VERY SPECIAL AND STRONG VAMPIRE WHO HAS A POWER TO SHEILD HIS THOUGHTS AND EVEN THE SUPERIORS CANNOT BREAK THROUGH AND POWER TO HEAL ALL SUPERNATURAL CREATURES .HE IS A PART OF VAMPIRE FAMILY AND LOVE THEM MORE THAN HIS LIFE.BEING THE YOUNGEST SIBLING, THE MOST PAMPERED AMONGST ALL.HE IS A JOVIAL AND NAUGHTY PERSON.HE HAS A FAMILY YET LONELY AT HEART
PIA DOBRIAL-
SHE IS A BEAUTIFUL AND INTELLIGENT GIRL OF 24 YEARS,AN
MBA HAS INVOLVED HERSELF IN DAD BUSSINESS TO TRYING FORGET THE BIGGEST LOSS OF LIFE i.e. her love .SHE IS YOUNGEST DAUGHTER OF DOBRIALS.SHE IS LIVING IN MUMBAI.

THE RAICHANDS-

THE STRONGEST AND RESPECTED VAMPIRE FAMILY EXISTING IN AMONGST THE SUPERNATIONAL WORLD. A BUNCH OF SUPER JOVIAL VAMPIRES.THEY BELIEVES
IN UNITING SUPERNATURAL WORLD AND HUMANS.RAICHAND EMPIRE IS KNOWN IN THIS WORLD TO HELP SUPERNATURAL CREATURES TO SETTLE IN HUMAN WORLD AND PROVIDING A NORMAL LIFE.IT IS TRUSTED AMONGST SUPERIORS YET NOT LIKED FOR WAY OF LIVING AS THEIR TRUST FOR WEREWOLFS.

CHAND RAICHAND-HE IS A 500 YEARS OLD VAMPIRE.HE IS VERY RICH INFLUENTIONAL PERSON AND OWNER OF RAICHAND EMPIRE.HE LOVES HIS CHILDREN.HE BELIEVES IN CO-EXIST OF ALL CREATURES OF SUPERNATURAL WORLD AND WORKING TOWARDS
THIS CAUSE.

HASEENA RAICHAND-

SHE IS 400 YEARS OLD VAMPIRE WIFE OF CHAND RAICHAND.A LOVABLE MOTHER AND FRIEND TO HIS CHILDREN.SHE LOVE HIS CHILDREN AND HOLDS
SPECIAL PLACE FOR YOUNGEST SON ABHAY

SIDDARTH RAICHAND-

HE IS A 200 YEAR OLD VAMPIRE TURNED BY CHAND.HE IS
JOVIAL VAMPIRE LIKE OTHER RAICHANDS .HE HAS WAITED FOR CENTURY FOR HIS BROTHER RETURN .HE IS VERY CARING FOR ABHAY.HE HAS A SPECIAL POWER TO SEE THOUGHTS AND GET A VISUAL PICTURE OF WHAT PERSON IS THINKING.

MAITHALI RAICHAND

SHE IS A 2OO YEARS VAMPIRE AND WIFE AND SOULMATE OF
SIDDARTH.SHE IS LIKE HIS HUSBAND WAITING FOR HIS BEST FRIENDS RETURN.SHE HAS
APOWER TO SHIELD HERSELF FROM SUPERNATURAL ATTACK.

KABIR RAICHAND-

HE IS A 180 YEAR OLD VAMPIRE.HE IS JOVIAL AND FLIRTOUS
PERSON IN SEARCH OF HIS SPECIAL PERSON.HE CARES FOR ABHAY AND CANT SEE HIM
LONELY.HE ALWAYS TRIES ARANGES DATES FOR HIM.

ALISHA RAICHAND-

SHE IS 170 YEARS OLD VAMPIRE AND A BRATT.SHE IS ONLY
DAUGHTER OF RAICHANDS.SHE HAS FOUND SOULMATE IN JEH.SHE IS CARING FOR ABHAY

DOBRAILS

ARNAB AND MADHU DOBRAIL

THEY ARE A RICH AND INFLENTIONAL FAMILY OF MUMBAI.THEY
ARE PARENTS TO THREE DAUGHTERS PANCHI,MISHA AND PIA.BOTH ARE CONCERNED ABOUT YOUNGEST DAUGHTER PIA.

PANCHI DOBRIAL

SHE IS THE ELDEST DAUGHTER TO DOBRAILS,SHE IS TOO INVOLVED IN FATHER BUSSINESS

MISHA DOBRAIL-

SHE IS TOMBOY AND BRATT.SHE IS A FUN LOVING AND
CAREFREE PERSON.

JEH KHURANAHE IS 160 YEAR HYBIRD, A HALF WICCAN AND HALF
WEREWOLF.HE HAS FOUND SOULMATE IN ARCH RIVAL VAMPIRE ALISHA.HE TRUST RAICHANDS AND A PART OF FAMILY AS RAICHANDS SUPPORTED AND SAVED HIM AND HIS SISTER ALINA FROM EVIL WITCHS WHO WERE AGAINST UNION OF WEREWOLF AND WITCH.
ALINA KHURANA-SHE IS SISTER OF JEH KHURANA AND HYBIRD LIKE HIS
BROTHER.SHE IS BEST FRIEND TO KABIR AND ABHAY.

NEIL KHURANA-

A WEREWOLF.HE IS COUSIN TO JEH AND ALINA.HE LOVES HIS
COUSIN.BUT DOESN'T LIKE THE IDEA OF THEM LIVING PEACEFUL LIFE TO ARCH ENEMY
VAMIRES.HE DOESN'T LIKE RAICHANDS AT ALL.

MAYA-

 
SHE IS A POWERFUL WITCH.SHE HAS HELPED SIDDARTH IN
PRESERVING SOUL OF BROTHER .SHE RESPECT RAICHANDS AND ALWAYS READY TO HELP THEM
TANUSHREE

SHE IS SELFISH VAMPIRE WHO WANTS ABHAY AT ALL COST.

THE REST CHARACTERS WILL BE REAVEALED WITH STORY.
chapter 2:pg 11
CHAPTER 3 PG 16
CHAPTER 4 PG 21
chapter 5 pg 27
chapter 6 pg 33
chapter 7 pg 38
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2932947&TPN=38
CHAPTER 8 PG 47
CHAPTER 10 PG 61
Chapter 11 PG 67
CHAPTER 12 PG 73
CHAPTER 13 PG 78
chapter 14 pg 85
CHAPTER 15 PG 91
CHAPTER 16 PG 98
chapter 17 pg 105
CHAPTER 18 PG 114
CHAPTER 19 PG 120
CHAPTER 20 PG 127
CHAPTER 21 PG 135
CHAPTER 22 PG 145
                  
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Posted: 12 years ago
awsome...!!!! 👏
continue soon...😊
n pleeez pm me...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing cs dear. Pls continue and thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: abc123chiti

awsome...!!!! 👏
continue soon...😊
n pleeez pm me...😊

thnxx for liking...defiently i will pm u
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Rmuk

Amazing cs dear. Pls continue and thanks for the pm.

thnxx for valuable comment romita...u r welcme..thnxx 4 aspiring to write
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice start dear
Your character scetch is mind blowing
Wow abhay is special in your ff
And pia has lost her love
Please continue your ff
And pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls... pls     PM me when you update

Edited by lmonilly-- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet_neetu


thnxx for valuable comment romita...u r welcme..thnxx 4 aspiring to write


U are welcome dear.
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Posted: 12 years ago
interesting cs dr:-)cntnu soon:-)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: lmonilly--

nice start dear
Your character scetch is mind blowing
Wow abhay is special in your ff
And pia has lost her love
Please continue your ff
And pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls... pls     PM me when you update

thnxx for liking..definetly pm u dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: abhiora

interesting cs dr:-)cntnu soon:-)

thnxx for valuable comment...will soon update