'THE FIRST RAIN'updtd-chap14 AUG Note pg:153 - Page 36

hey always write amazing ...why u think u bored us??😭😭

i always love to read  it..and when u last add this line "u bored us" mera pura mood bigad jata he,,,,😭😭

dont do this again...

continue soon..😳

Originally posted by: hema_rawat

Very beautiful update indu blkul borng ni ti
ahh kate she is so irritatng ,abhay jhelta kaise h
anik is so sweet nd carng
u describd deir emotns nd pain very well
cntinue soon

Originally posted by: cccppp

hey always write amazing ...why u think u bored us??😭😭

i always love to read  it..and when u last add this line "u bored us" mera pura mood bigad jata he,,,,😭😭

dont do this again...

continue soon..😳

aww...thanks dear!! 🤗 so sweet of u to think so!! 😳

amazing update

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma

amazing update

i luv anik's character..he is so sweet and caring..

i wonder what is wrong with abhay if his sister is also not talking to him because of kate what does he see her in then?

u depicted their pain so well both abhay's and pia's...

plz pm me nxt time when u update

 thanks a ton dear! 😳  Edited by lost_in_love - 12 years ago

nice update Indu👏 and I m liking Aniket he really loves Pia alot 😊 and Kate I think she is with Abhay only bcz of his money 😡 and Abhay loves Pia but don't realise it himself anyways nice update 😊

Aniket is really a sweetheart but why is Abhay acting like Kate's personal naukar😡

nyc update indu 👏
kate is only after abhay's money...huh!!
anik is so sweet and caring 😃
acha hua risa abhay se bat nai krti hai... 😡
hope abhay realises his mistake...
continue soon and thanx for pm 😊

Very nice update...👏 Aniket is so sweet...and Abhay-Piya's past memories were very sweet 😳and what important has Haseena got to say to Abhay??😕 And Kate...ufff...she's so weird...never repeats any dress...🤢 ..freaky...😆...anyways...really nice update..🤗 Continue soon...😳

Lovely update!!! Not boring at all...