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Indu @Paint.It.BlacK. IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 12 years ago

😳THE FIRST RAIN

Suddenly it started raining...she was sitting in her car...strange kind of sadness n lonliness was surrounding her...she was in deep pain...no, nothing wrong n her love life...name,fame,money,friends,loveable family and a supportive bf...she had all...but...yes,there's a big but..!!! ...inspite of all this she was lonely...there was a hollowness inside her...like something precious was missing...she loved rain..and today it was the first rain of the monsoon...n rain droplets kissing the ground..looked divine as always...but...she left a deep sigh...it wsn't reaching her heart...the ethereal smell..the droplets..the entire beauty gave her immence pain instead of pleasure...it reminded her of something...perhaps someone...dear to her...and suddenly her eyes caught the sight of a tall handsome figure standing afar..nd her heart overcame with agony..she looked away nd drove away...leaving the blue-eyed figure standing...getting drenched in the first rain...

Guys this is going to b a joint ss written by me and abhiora aka tora and my first ss as well...this is my very first attempt on writng sumthng abut our most sweetest couple abhiya..so guys plzz tell us wether we should continue this ss or nt..and plzz press the like button if u lyk...awaitng ur responce...😊

and special thanks to ayesha,tanzie..they have been a great inspiration to me😳

p.s. those who want pms plzz send a buddy request to me...😊

For chapter Index please scroll down. 😊

Edited by Bleak_House - 10 years ago

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tamoha(tora) @..tora.tangled. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 12 years ago

res!!
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finally u strtd:-)congo shongo..great start:-)nd u 4gt 2 mention da the whole idea is urs:-)i applied no brains!!
nd yay'!!!me first!!ugh'!!i want 2 write mre bt handicappd by my cell!! Edited by abhiora - 12 years ago

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Indu @Paint.It.BlacK. IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 12 years ago

Chapter INDEX-

An Abhiya Joint SS- The First Rain

(written by Tora & Indu)

Link to Book 2-

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3922483

BOOK 1-

Prologue- Pg 1

Character Sketch-

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2932061?pn=8

Chapter 1- Remembering The Past

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2932061?pn=14

Chapter 2- Echoes Of Joy And Tears

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2932061?pn=22

Chapter 3- Hidden Emotions

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2932061?pn=28

Chapter 4- So Near Yet So Far

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2932061?pn=34

Chapter 5- Good Old Memories

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2932061?pn=42

Chapter 6- Rekindling Relations

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2932061?pn=51

Chapter 7- A Night To Remember(part-1)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2932061?pn=60

Chapter 7- A Night To Remember(part-2)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2932061?pn=68

Chapter 8- Closer Together

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2932061?pn=79

Chapter 9- Moving Towards Light (part-1)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2932061?pn=91

Chapter 9-Moving Towards Light(part-2)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2932061?pn=101

Chapter 10-Unknown feelings-Unspoken words

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2932061?pn=110

Chapter 11-Phone calls and Sweet talks

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2932061?pn=120

Chapter 12- Just You & Me-(part-1)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2932061?pn=127

Chapter 12- Just You & Me-(part-2)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2932061?pn=133

Chapter-13-The Aftermath

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2932061?pn=142

Chapter-14- Facades and Masquerades

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2932061?pn=149

My Other Works -

Abhiya FF's -

My First FF : The First Rain

[written jointly with tora aka tora.tangled] Ongoing

My Second FF : When Both Worlds Collide

[written jointly with tora aka tora.tangled] Ongoing

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2961084

My Fourth FF : Tell Me your Dreams

[Jointly written with Mansa Aka Mandy] Currently on hold

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3033270

Fifth FF : Where Your Road Leads

[Writer tora-Concept by Me] Currently on hold

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3028284?pn=7

~~My Solo Works~~

Abhiya One Shots

First OS-The journey of a lifetime

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3246163

Second OS-I am with you forever

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3258523

Third OS- Show me the Light

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/78262806�

Fourth OS - And i feel scared

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3534613

Fifth OS -"Was it raindrops or i just heard my heart beating ?"

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3595079

Sequel to the Fifth OS- 'I Accept i do Love You!'

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3626503

Abhiya SS's

What lies beneath(currently on hold)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3052582

The Forbidden(ongoing)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3297673

The Last Confidante(ongoing)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3581398

Edited by Paint.It.BlacK. - 10 years ago

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..juhi.. @..juhi.. IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 12 years ago

yes of course u shud continue nd plz add me to ur pm list...

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chandni @TeDylove IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 12 years ago

wow nice start pls add me pm list and continue soon!!😃

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Nikvi29 @Nikvi29 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 12 years ago

its awesome continue it soon
loved it
please pm me when you update.

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Mandy @BeyondHorizon IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 12 years ago

Gr8 start Indu 👏 Loved it 😊 Good to know u n Tora r coming up with an SS. Title sounds good too. Waiting for character sketch n 1st chap n plz no sad track for Abhiya plz 😭

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Indu @Paint.It.BlacK. IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by abhiora

res!!
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finally u strtd:-)congo shongo..great start:-)nd u 4gt 2 mention da the whole idea is urs:-)i applied no brains!!
nd yay'!!!me first!!ugh'!!i want 2 write mre bt handicappd by my cell!!

it dsnt matter whz idea is it dear..coz u hav equal contribution in it...nd.i wud hav never been able to do this alone!!!😳

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