MG FF - Piya Tose Naina Lage Re ON HOLD TILL 19/6 - Page 7

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Posted: 12 years ago
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part 4
lovely part...
cont soon dear...
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Originally posted by: halemakhan



I will update Satrangi Re over the weekend... but i'm new to IF i dont know how to update the title etc... *feeling dumb*



thanks dear will wait for that and comment...fikar not dear...u can always ask me or others and we all will help u...and u will enjoy on IF so much...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Main kal tak update maybe de dungi gi... Keep your eye out for this thread 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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                                   thanx dear for link of 4 parts----- SOODKAVITA
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Hello Everyone! Good news my exams have ended and I'm back to updating for you guys!! 😃

EVERYONE PLEASE TAKE THE TIME FOR THIS NEW FF

"SARGOSHIYAN - WHISPER OF LOVE" WRITTEN BY SAM DI FROM FACEBOOK, congrats dear on writing your first ever FF on Maan/Geet 😃

ALSO ON GEET - BEGINNING OF A NEW ERA PAGE ON FACEBOOK

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Posted: 12 years ago
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gosh it was beautiful

luv
Tich
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He panted heavily after kissing his 'lady-love' (though they have never expressed it in words!)... She turned around now facing him... she raised her hand and touched his face taking in all his love... Maan sealed her lips with his in an eternal kiss...




PART 5


A New dawn brought new events and thoughts of old memories... There still was one who could not sleep the whole night... the restlessness made it impossible to feel sleepy.. just stuck in their thoughts. Maan could not sleep all night, all he could think of was his 'lady-love' and how passionate they could get sometimes. He smirked at his impish thought. Now he was desperately wanting to see Geet... he wanted to see her angelic face before anyone else's face... Only by seeing her, his day and work will go well... only she can do that to Chhote Nawab Maan Singh Khurana... He decided to get up and get dressed... a cunning plan ran through his mind... He wanted Geet desperately and he knew he could get her in any second... He stepped into the bathroom without his iron clothes or towel... He shouted from the bathroom... "Koi hai? Humari madat karo?" Badi Rani Saheba heard his screams and came into his bedroom "Kya huwa bete, chila kyu re ho?" she inquired... "Maa, wo humare kapde nahi istari huwe... ab hum kya kare.. kaun istari kare ga?" Badi Rani Saheba knew she was not able to iron due to past injuries... "Beta, ruko hum istari kar dete hai.." She said unconfidently... "NAHI! nahi, Maa aap kisi aur ko bulaye... you are not ironing my clothes.. end of!" he said promptly... "Maa, Geetanjali ko bulaye, wo kar de gi humara kaam... sirf wohi humara kaam kar sakti hai" he said coyly. Badi Rani Saheba did not realise his sons flirty behaviour and went to call Geetanjali from the Kitchen.




Rani Saheba, on the other hand, was making Geet knead the flour to make chapattis... Having an injured hand/arm limited her working pace and Rani Saheba kept scolding her repeatedly.. Badi Rani Saheba walked in just before she was about to slap Geet... she paused for a second seeing her elder sister-in-law coming in the Kitchen. "Geetanjali, humare saath aye... kuch kaam hai..." Geet saw this as a golden opportunity and ran off with Badi Rani Saheba leaving a fuming Rani Saheba... She walked behind Badi Rani Saheba through the Courtyards of the Mehal, up to Maan's room. She opened the doors of his room and instructed her to iron his shirt carefully and to make sure there are no creases on his clothes. "Hum samaj ge Badi Rani Saheba, aap fikar math kejiye" She smiled back at her and wished she was not treated so indifferently within the Mehal. Badi Rani Saheba walked out the room closing the doors and Geet began ironing his shirt, trousers and waistcoat. Then Maan walked out the bathroom, looking at his 'lady-love' preparing his clothes for him...









He grabs Geet from behind are twirls her in his arms leaving no gap between their bodies... Geet was flabbergasted at his sudden behaviour but he knew how to butter her... he dug his head into her neck and started giving her deep wet kisses... he knew how to instantly melt her against his actions. He decided to leave a mark of his love and bit in to her flesh, not only arousing himself but his 'lady-love' infront in his arms. She gasped with pain and passion... he went down onto the collarbone and gave sensuous kisses arousing her further to the peak of ecstasy... she could not hold it much longer and moaned a loud and audible "MAAN!" he stopped kissing her and looked at her flushed face... her eyes were shut and he was panting heavily... her chest was moving in and out rapidly... she slowly opened her eyes to see Maan staring at her with his big passionate eyes... "Wo aap hume aise math dekhiye.." she managed to utter a sentence whilst being in his strong embrace... He smirk was wide enough for Geet to get annoyed.. "Kyu? hum aap ko aise kyu nahi dekhe?" his hot breath was fanning over her lips... "Agar aap hume itni shararat badi ankhon se dekho ge, to hum seedhe mu bhol nahi paiye ge" Maan smiled inwardly at her little confession... without any further adue Maan pinned Geet to the nearest wall... leaving no gap between them and crushing her petite body against his masculine body.









He moved the strands of hair off of her face and looked at her adoringly... "Chhote Nawab Sahib, hume bohot kaam hai, hume jaane dejiye... dekhiye aap ki kadpe bi istari ho gai hai" She was trying to confused Maan and with no further thought she started tickling Maan and tried to run off... Maan grabbed her wrist and brought her back roughly against his bare chest... She hid her face in his chest... her lips touching his chest gave a burning sensation within him... "Geet? Miss SHAIRNI? (he tried melting her further to make her stay with him) Shona? (that immediately melted Geet and she looked up into his eyes) Please math javao... Humari yahi iccha ti ki hum aap ka chehra sabse pehle dekhe aaj... taaki humara din aaj beethe" Geet smiled at his cute gesture... she involuntarily snaked her hands behind his neck and pulled him closer to her... Maan raised his eyebrows, almost asking her kya huwa? Geet raised her eyebrows back in response... Maan flicked her nose lovingly and did it as a love-filled gesture, whereas Geet saw it as an offence and flicked his nose back harder... Maan held his nose in 'pain' and Geet suddenly caressed it and with giving notice kissed his nose ever so lightly, absorbing his 'pain'... Maan encircled his arms around her little waist and pulled her up for a full desire-filled kiss... he wasted no time and leaped in to her lips and took them into his dominant ones. The two jolted with passion... it seemed as if someone had awoken there inner devils which were dying to come out. He kissed her repeatedly devouring every millimetre of sweetness... He is in love... YES! He knew how to 'express' it (Maan we all know how you love to 'express' your love for Geet 😆) YES! He wanted to tell her what she does to him every time she is infront of him... erm nooo, that's a big challenge!



He unknowingly slid off her dupatta and Geet gave into his actions with full trust... He slightly slid off her kameez kurti from her shoulder and kissed her shoulder with deep and immense passion and starting biting into her delicate skin with ecstasy... she moaned a loud "MAANU!" OOPS Geet! Maan immediately stopped and looked at her face which was covered with her palms... "Kya kaha aap ne... Maanu?!" His frustation was evident and she was blushing at what she said... Buddhu Jhalli Stupid Idiot!!! she muttered under her breath... "Phirse kaho na!" He demanded impishly... she was surprised at his order, but an order was an order and had to be obeyed (because she knew what would happen 😆) "Maanu..." she hid her face in his chest and Maan wrapped his arms around her, hugging her tightly...





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Geet was working in the Kitchen cutting up sabzi for tonights dinner... She was singing a love song... Surprisingly she was singing a love song instead of some Desi Punjabi song which everyone got the giggles for 😆... She placed the sabzi in the pan and was stirring it adding the necessary spices...

(you must of heard this song, Tere Mast Mast Do Nain - Dabangg)


Takte rehte tujhko sanjh savere
Nainon mein Haye
Nainon mein Haye


She was cutting up the vegetables and dreaming about her passionate times with Maan!

Takte rehte tujhko sanjh savere
Nainon mein basya jaise
Nain yeh tere


Nainon mein basya jaise
Nain yeh tere

Tere mast mast do nain 
Mere Dil ka le gaye chain
Mere Dil ka le gaye chain
Tere mast mast do nain


Her sweet and melodious voice was chiming through the corridors of the Mehal and one was standing shamelessly in the Kitchen door... MAAN! (lag jaow kaam pe Chhote Nawab Sahib!)


Phele pehal tujhe dekha to dil mera
Dhadka haye dhadka 
Dhadka haaye

Jal jal utha hoon main
Shola jo pyaar ka
Bhadka haaye bhadka

He stood directly behind Geet and was eyeing her every word and taking it in as if taking in the melody of his life...

Neendon mein gaul gaye hai 
Sapne jo tere
Badle se lag rahe hain
Andaaz mere

Badle se lag rahe hain
Andaaz mere

He grabbed her from behind and started nuzzling her neck, almost wanting to revisit their act of passion right in the kitchen... But then Maan started singing to Geet, she was unaware of this trait of his... It made her fall more him.. ❤️

Tere mast mast do nain 
Mere Dil ka le gaye chain
Mere Dil ka le gaye chain
Tere mast mast do nain 


Mahi beaab sa
Dil yeh betab sa
Tadpa jaye tadpa
Tadpa jaye


Geet was getting restless at where his hand were going... he lifted her kurti and started caressing her waist tightly leaving his mark on her... to show her only he has the authority to touch her like this..

Naino ki jheel mein
Utra tha yun hi dil
Dobaa jayee dobaa jayee
Dobaa jayee
Hoshso hawas ab to 
Khone lage hain
Hum bhi deewane tere hone lage hai
Hum bhi deewane tere hone lage hai


Geet joined in with him and sang the feelings in her heart out..

Tere mast mast do nain 
Mere Dil ka le gaye chain
Mere Dil ka le gaye chain
Tere mast mast do nain

The food was done and Geet turned off the gas and turned into his embrace and pecked his lips and ran off before he could catch her...

"Humari Shona..." he thought to himself and walked off looking for her...



PRECAP (1): Ghazab Bhaiyo Rama! Jhulum Bhaiyo Rama! (not the song 😆)
PRECAP (2): Dinner mein ek problem 😕 Bade Nawab Sahib ka Ultimate Dusht Danav wala roop!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome dear.
Loved it.
Continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome update... Maan is too much ... Precap wooo...kya maan dekha gadbad ho gayi...