FF: Destination Called Love *Chapter 7 on Page 69 - Page 50

wow! what an update, loved it.. p.s. i love twilight!

Originally posted by: ss374

Thank you!!
I really appreciate ur opinion!!
I will make sure to that in the future!!😊

Thank u for taking d suggestion seriously...:)

i had a strange feeling throughout reading, damn that was so passionate! it was so natural for them yet thoroughly sensuous! their feelings for each other, their inexperience, nervousness were portrayed beautifully😳 eventhough it wasn't erotic( thanks for that!) i managed to blush till end☺️ this arnav is so loving and deserve khushi. continue sooon...

Loved the update! The new style is brilliant! Please continue soon!

Thanks a lot for the update dear! 😃 Edited by pixielove29 - 11 years ago

awesome beautiful update 

AWESOME UPDATE LOVED IT

loved it! i like how you switched back and forth. you beautifully described their emotions...thanks for the PM. please continue soon.

awesome update that was so beautiful and sexy loved how you described the emotion well done loved how you can switch back and fort blending the scenes with out distracting from whats going on at that moment loved the update thanks for the pm
 

NO it's not cheesy at all..it's beautiful..specially the way u dealt with flashbacks...loved it a lot🤗.Thanks for the update and pm me the next tym as well😊.