OS: His Memories - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
#11
wow  wounderful loved it ...keep on writting...
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#12
Really emotional! I like how you portrayed Khushi's feelings! <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
Beautifully written OS!πŸ‘ although very Sad.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
brill... loved the way u have captured her emotions
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A bit depressing, but hey! It's an emotion! Thanks for the pm!
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πŸ‘πŸ‘thanks...great...amazing...πŸ‘πŸ‘
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Posted: 12 years ago
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that was hella good!looved it! I loved the way you potrayed khushi's feeligns and rlly good use of figurative language!
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very beautifully written...each and every emotion of khushi just captured amazingly...loved it...thnx 4da pm dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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heya

sad but very beautifully written...

many thanks for the pm...: ]
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow, just one word: beautiful...

i love how you have captured khushi's emotions, feelings, thoughts... 

the os was peaceful, serene, soothing, dark, sad.. every feeling mixed together... 

will there be another part or will you leave it just to this??

i felt calm and i could actually see the grey sky... 

xxx