ArHi FF: The Shackles Of Love. Removed. - Page 5

Wow this is FF is awesome
Update sun
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wow! wut a great start! totally dhamakedaar!

Removed. Edited by appy_12 - 11 years ago

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YAY! i am first :D
i Loved the title! ;)
OMG! dont tell me her brother is SHYAM? that would be awesome :P
and arnav in kurtha? i can totaly imagine him in kurth, he will look sizzling *faints *
they are already attracted to each other na? i cant wait to c the love blooming!
awesome chap dear! LOVED IT <3
update soon !!Edited by crazy44 - 12 years ago

loved the update...hahaha i like this arnav...he atleast smiles!!xxx

interesting! do continue =)

Reserved for Now.

Its not just eh, its a nice set-up for the story
Khushi's nameless brother seems a little over-dominating in regards to her.
And Arnav too seems a bit skittish

Yuks

i loved it! i like how he is immediately attracted to her but then again he just left jail but she is pretty! i hope the brother gets these two married! nice title!

wonder what arnav was jailed for...killing a person called shyaam perhaps? 😆 Edited by indy12 - 12 years ago