It was...FANTASTIC. You explained every emotion really well . Loving the track. And m telling u plzzz cont soon yaar can't wait for the next part
When someone grabs her and hugs her close their body and pushes her out of the car's way. Maanvi is tucked in the person's arms and doesn't even have the energy to look up to see who it is. The person hugs her tighter and kisses her forehead scared that he may lose her. He strokes her hair. It seems like this person is giving her all the love that exists in the universe. They are so close to each other. He is holding her so securely against himself. Maanvi is shivering in his arms and he is warming her, comforting her and loving her. Maanvi eventually gathers the energy to look up to see that it is none other than Virat standing in front of her eyes. The two of them stand their staring into each other's eyes in the rain. The boys have run off by now seeing Maanvi safe inside someone's arms. Maanvi is shivering cold. She is soaked. Her hair is dripping wet as are her clothes. Virat takes his jacket off and wraps it around her. He lifts her up into his arms and takes her back into the car. Maanvi is crying. He wants to get her home as soon as possible. He starts the car in a hurry but finds it has ran out of petrol after all the driving of the day. He immediately calls Viren. Viren tells him to wait so he can come and collect them but then he finds that the other car which he was driving in has been affected by all the rain and there has been a break fail which while take quite some time to fix. Viren suggests that they spend the night in Hashok Hotel which Maanvi had mentioned. Virat agrees but is unsure whether Maanvi will feel comfortable for this. After all, they don't have the same relationship as they did a while ago when they were last together in a hotel. He sees that Maanvi is shivering cold despite the warmth of his jacket which is now soaked. He sees her getting sicker by the minute. He grabs some spare clothes of himself that he always leaves in the car. Warps his arm around Maanvi and takes her into the hotel. There is only one room left quite a way up the stairs in the hotel. The electricity is gone due to the heavy rainfall therefore they can't use the lift. Maanvi begins walking up the first few stairs but is out of energy. Virat lifts her in his arms and carries her up. Because of the electricity failure when they get in the room everything is dark. A cleaner comes up with some candles and a matchbox and then leaves. Virat lays Maanvi down on the bed and lights the candles. Maanvi is so restless'so cold'so freezing.
Virat: Maanvi'Maanvi'tum theek ho? Tumhey patha hai meri jaan nikalgayi thhi. Tum theek no Maanvi?
Maanvi can't respond. Virat pulls her into his arms and hugs her tightly.
Virat: Accha vo sab choro. Yeh merrey kuch kaprey hai. Tum jaakey nahaalo aur inhey pehenlo. Bukhaar hai tumhey. Araam sey.
Maanvi goes to freshen up. She has a shower, comes out and puts on Virat's clean clothes. Virat's clothes are way to lose for Maanvi but she has to make do with them. She comes out too see that food has been placed in the room. Maanvi feels very sick. Virat comes to her. He places an arm around her waist and takes her to the table where the food has been placed. She is not willing to eat but he feeds her and makes her do so. Maanvi looks so sick. After eating Virat lays her down on the bed and lets her sleep. He makes space on the floor for himself. Maanvi is only half asleep and Virat can tell. She seems to be getting sicker and sicker by the minute. In her dreams Maanvi is remembering all the negative of her life. Finding out about cancer, bua ji telling her off, what she said to Virat and how the boys were chasing after her. She remembers the feeling of isolation. She remembers how scared she was when no one was with her and she was alone being misbehaved with from those boys. The only person she had remembered then was virat. The only hope she had was that Virat would come and save her and that is exactly what happened. Maanvi continued to relive the moments of her life but in her dream this time no one came to save her from those boys chasing after her. There was no Virat. Suddenly Maanvi started calling Virat's name in her sleep.
Maanvi: Virat'Vi-vi-vir..virat'bacho'choro'.chordo mujhey'Virat bacho na'Virat mujhey maaf kardo'please Virat'.I love you '.
Virat was not asleep. As soon as he hear Maanvi's voice he crept up on the other side of the bed beside her to see that she was shivering. He could tell what she was remembering in her dream. He understood everything.
Maanvi: Virat'please bachao'.Virat!
Virat put his hand under Maanvi's back and pulled her up into his arms.
Virat: Kuch nahi hua. Mein hoon na tumharrey saath. Kuch nahi Maanvi. Kuch nahi.
Maanvi has now woken up from her dream. She is crying. She has lost all hope.
Maanvi: Virat'Virat math jao please. Virat'.vo mera saath'mujhey chua unhonney'Virat please math jao'Virat.
Virat pulls Maanvi closer into himself.
Virat: Kuch nahi Maanvi mein yahi hoon. Kuch nahi hua'kuch bhi nahi. Hu na mein yaha. Sojau Maanvi bohoth raath hogaya hai. Mein hoon na jaan'
Maanvi: Virat please math jaana'VIrat please'
Virat: Nahi Maanvi'kuch nahi'dekho mein yahi hoon.
Virat lays himself down with Maanvi tightly secured against his chest tucked inside his arms. He kisses her forehead and warms her pulling her closer to him.
Maanvi: Math jao Virat'.
Precap: Virat takes Maanvi in his arms. It seems like everything was going on the wrong track but now it's all right. It seems like the puzzle pieces have finally fit together.
Quote: Don't be afraid to tell someone you need them because you never know, they might need you as well.Please forgive any spelling/grammar/punctuation errors. Suggestions, ideas, feedback and criticisms are most welcome-don't hesitate to post! Hope you enjoyed it :) x
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