As expected back at Jeevika's sasural everyone (except Maya and Swamini) of course were the most concerned about Maanvi. Especially Virat and Beeji knowing about her illness. Viren had sent Virat off to go and look for Maanvi is one car while he and Jeevika went from another car. Jeevika and the other family members were constantly calling Maanvi but she wouldn't pick up the phone. Virat looked everywhere for her but couldn't find her. Where could she possible be? Viren and Jeevika have also searched basically every corner of the place they can. They are constantly in touch Virat to see if he has found out anything but the answer on the both sides of the phone has always been a *no.* Virat was so worried. Never had been concerned about someone this much in his life yet he was today. Today he was madly concerned. If something happened to Maanvi he thought he may lose his life.
It was pouring and pouring. The would not stop getting heavier. There was even thunder and lightning but Maanvi was oblivious to it. She did not care nor did she want to. All she wished for was to lose herself amongst the darkness of the night and the wetness of the rain. She did not know whether she would see anyone again. Not even her di' Maanvi was now walking along the pathway of a very busy road. She wasn't feeling any better however this time she surprisingly heard her phone ring. Obviously it was her concerned Jeevika di on the other side. Jeevika was shocked yet glad that Maanvi had finally picked up the phone.
Jeevika: Maanu! Maanu! Tu kaha hai? Maanvi bol na. Maanvi kaha hai tu? Theek hai na? Kuch bolthi kyu nahi'bol na!
Maanvi: Di mein theek hoon.
Jeevika: Kaha hai tu'ha?
Maanvi: Di'pathanahi'
Jeevika: Patha nahi? Maanu aas paas ke dekh aur batha kaha hai tu?!?!
Maanvi looked around hunting for a sign or something that would tell her where in the world she was. She saw a sign reading Hashok Hotel.
Maanvi: Di'yaha ek hotel hai: Hashok Hotel. Mein vahi hu di.
Jeevika: Maanvi tu waha sey hilna math! Hum abhi aarrey hai! Abhi! Maanu dhyaan rakhna-han?
Maanvi: Han di.
Jeevika puts down the phone and tells Viren the details.
Viren: Likin Jeevika'vo jaga tho yaha sey kamsey kam ek, derh ghanta dur hai.
Jeevika: Kya?
Viren: Tum ruko'mein Virat ko phone karkey puchtha hoon ki woh kaha hai. Shayad vo uss jaga key paas ho.
Jeevika: Han Viren ji'jaldi please'
Viren calls Virat.
Virat: Bhay'ha kuch patha chala?
Viren: Ha Virat. Maanvi ne phone uthaaya.
Virat: Kya'kaysi hai vo? Theek hai na'kaha hai'kya-?
Viren: Baath tho sun. Virat abhi vo Hashok Hotel ke paas hai. Likin hum waha sey dur hai aur itna der intizaar nahi karsakthey. Tu kaha hai?
Virat: Bhay mein bass vaha sey duss-beess minute dur hoon'.aap ek kaamkijye'aap ghar jaaye'ghar aapkilye bohoth nazdeek hai. Bhabhi ki tabyath kharaab hogayi hogi Maanvi kilye. Mein Maanvi ko jaldi le kar aatha hoon.
Viren: Ha Virat jaldi.
Viren tells Jeevika what happened. Jeevika is extremely hesitant to go home without her sister but Viren says that Virat will handle it. The couple go home and tell everyone what has happened.
Maanvi is standing in front of the hotel freezing in her soaked clothes. The rain is getting heavier and she is beginning to feel sick. She waits there for 15 minutes and there is no sign of her di or Jigu. Suddenly these batameez boys come out of the hotel she is standing next to. They begin to chase her. Maanvi is scared. She does not have the courage to defend herself. The guys crowd around her and grab her chunni. Maanvi makes a run for it but loses energy and begins feeling weak because of cancer. She is in the middle of crossing the road still being chased by the boys when a car suddenly comes speeding towards her out of nowhere. Maanvi is about to be hit when... READ THE NEXT PART TO FIND OUT !!!
Precap: No precap! You have to wait and read to see how the story line unfolds this time!
Quote: When all seems dark a candle will find its way into your life. It will be up to you to gain strength and light it up filling your life with hope and a new reason to live.
Please forgive my mistakes in spelling/grammar/punctuation. Suggestions, ideas, feedback and criticisms are most welcome-don't hesitate to post! Hope you enjoyed it :) x
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