Well hello there pretty thang! so someone decided to update π. Well now I have decided to comment.
NANAV! he is confused and protective eh? I love it, the development between both of them isn't going fast and is taking time which I love. Your pace increases the suspense. I love it π The way she let him hold her at the end was magnificent, it shows that they both trust each other already, And Nanavs temper needs to take a simmer! Also they were on the brink of mwah mwah? why did you stop it? π But now he has realized that he can't mess with both of them. Well I can't wait for khushi to find out, there will be a whole lot of spice added to that, dhall mein to kuch kala ho na chahiye! I love it. Also the way Arnav didn't go for the chase but stayed put I love. It just means that he is protective and caring. He isn't shut off which I like, and if in khushi's presence he didn't go for the chase that menas when he is knows he is in love he would stop a lot of things? π Loved the structure of that chapter. Especially at the end when Nanav left, it will leave her desperate for more ππ
See you at the next update
-Aashifa
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