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Posted: 12 years ago
This was so well written!!

It made me remember the Diwali scene!!

Is the old man also important part of the story or is he just a cameo??



RatiKoni thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved the update! Story is getting more exciting by each update! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
dat was an gr8  update..
carry on..
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update..
the way the story is moving...
loving every bit of it...
 
 
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Posted: 12 years ago
                                 This was soo good...i loved it totally...πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘...fantastic job...keep it up love...
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow...
a beautifully written update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg!!! what intensity but then dundunduhhh he has found out now. 
xxx
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Posted: 12 years ago
now this is going to be interesting...really loved this part...their turmoil and everything was so beautifully expressed!
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Posted: 12 years ago
READ the entire lot in one!
Thanks for the PM. :D
WAS AWESOME;)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Well hello there pretty thang! so someone decided to update πŸ˜†. Well now I have decided to comment.

NANAV! he is confused and protective eh? I love it, the development between both of them isn't going fast and is taking time which I love. Your pace increases the suspense. I love it πŸ˜ƒ The way she let him hold her at the end was magnificent, it shows that they both trust each other already, And Nanavs temper needs to take a simmer! Also they were on the brink of mwah mwah? why did you stop it? πŸ˜† But now he has realized that he can't mess with both of them. Well I can't wait for khushi to find out, there will be a whole lot of spice added to that, dhall mein to kuch kala ho na chahiye! I love it. Also the way Arnav didn't go for the chase but stayed put I love. It just means that he is protective and caring. He isn't shut off which I like, and if in khushi's presence he didn't go for the chase that menas when he is knows he is in love he would stop a lot of things? πŸ˜‰ Loved the structure of that chapter. Especially at the end when Nanav left, it will leave her desperate for more πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†

See you at the next update

-Aashifa