Originally posted by: Crystalx
another fantastic story by neeme and GD i am seriously adicteted to your stories this one is the best really nice even i think that person is Daya not Samar. what did ACP mean that col ranawat wanted to kill Samar or did the terrists wanted to kill him, anyway what a lovely story you two should became proper writers and sell your books as combine production i bet you will sell a lot as i will be the first person to buy it. just totally in love with your stories the suspense in the story and way that Abhijeet remembered daya was so emotional
Woow!! Great story GD and neeme 👍🏼 👏 Brilliant concept and narration! 👏
Please please continue and conclude it soon. This suspense is killing me 😛
Here He met RAHUL and Ask Him to give Some of His Police Training Academy Pictures, Heads Name… He wants to check SAMAR with refrence of that… RAHUL shock after hearing this Demand from ABHIJEET so added..
RAHUL: ABHIJEET usay Tum nay apnay hathun say jalaya hay?
ABHIJEET (point on his Heart): tou yahan kyun nahi sukun aata… (low tone) RAHUL mujhy khud nahi malum… per mera Dil iss baat ko manta he nahi, Do maheenay ho gayey, ab tou is Dil ko sukun aa jana chahyey… pata hay ab Mujhy dar lagta hay… buht… SAMAR ko dekh ker… Khauff aata hay… (RAHUL look n hear him in Shock) (ABHIJEET added in Dreamy tone) Main us kay Qareeb ho raha hun… aadat parti ja rahi hay Us ki… Dekh leta hun tou Sakun mil jata hay… aur jub say is Mission ki baat chali hay na… Meray ander buht Bechaini hay… agar ye sub sach hua tou kya Hum log Dubara DAYA ko Khony ka Dukh seh payein gay… (teary tone) Main tou Mar jaon ga Yaar…
RAHUL: haan… magar ABHIJEET Reports aur phir agar SAMAR DAYA hota aur koi Drama ker raha hota… kisi bhi wajah say tou Tumhein Zarur batata… Wo Tumhari Takleef ko kesay nazarandaaz ker sakta hay?
ABHIJEET: yehi wo Sawal hay jis ka Jawab Meray pass Nahi hay… (after a second) wesay Tumhein kuch feel nahi hota… matlab kabhi koi cheez…
RAHUL: us kay kharay honay ka andaaz, dekhnay ka… sub DAYA jesa hay… aur Shakel aur Height/Built ka kya kahun, wo bhi, aur Awaaz bhi.. per Tum logun nay Usay Train kiya hay na??
ABHIJEET: haan magar itna nahi… zahir sii baat hay bus Ek had tak he Train kiya hay… magar kuch cheezein bilkul DAYA jesi hain… DAYA jub khara hota hay tou Thora Left ki taraf Tilt aur jub kisi cheez ko Focus say dekhta hay tou Us ka Retina Converge ho jata hay kyunkay Wo Lens use krta hay tou Focus kay waqt Saara Power us point per aa jata hay… ye Mujhy khud DAYA nay bataya tha jub Mian nay Us ssay poocha tha kay wo Dur ki Cheez ko aisay kyun dekhta hay…
RAHUL: tou Tum nay us say poocha nahi kay wo aisay Khara kyun hota hay ya Dekhta kyun hay?
ABHIJEET (murmur): hr baat ka jawab hay us kay pass… (to RAHUL) haan kehta hay wo Pehlay bhi aisay hee Khara hota tha… ab yaar ye koi hairut ki baat nahi kyunkay Hum nay Usay pehlay dekha hee kahan tha… aur dekhta wo is liyey aisay hay kyunkay Usy ye Colored Lense Takleef detay hain… aadat jo Nhai hay na Us ki…
RAHUL: per Us ki Aadatein wesi nahi…
ABHIJEET: Aadatein Badli bhi ja sakti hain RAHUL…
RAHUL remembers the Chat of DAYA and Him with Refering to that Soap Serial which He left to Watch after DAYA Demise cz at Everytime DAYA's chat revolves on His mind when trying to watch the Soap again… RAHUL again…
RAHUL: phir bhi yaar Main nahi samjhta… DAYA itnay din khud ko is tarah… ye SAMAR hay ABHIJEET… Humara DAYA nahi… warna…
ABHIJEET: pata nahi… shayed Tum Theek ho… per..!!!
He moved with Heavy Heart… Here ABHIJEET manipulates His Doubts with All Team Members especially Those who Spent much time with DAYA then tha Recent New Officers… He casually asks FREDDIE as…
ABHIJEET: arry FREDDIE ye SAMAR bilkul apnay DAYA jesa nahi lagnay laga?
FREDDIE: jee ABHIJEET Sir aur baat bhi wesay he karnay laga hay… kal Mian nay kaha kay Humaray DAYA Sir Mujh say Shart buht lagatay thay… tou achanak kehnay laga kay haan aur hamesha Jeet hissay mein aati… Jub Main usay hairut say dekhnay laga tou bola kay Tum nay hee tou bataya tha…(confuse tone) magar ABHIJEET Sir Mera nahi khayal kay Mian nay Usay ye bataya tha ya shayed Bataya ho… itni Baatein tou Bataii bhi hain na DAYA Sir ki Usay… ye bhi Bata diya hoga…!
ABHIJEET really Angry on Himself as He was not there at that time, might be SAMAR Tone or Style tell Him Something as He knew DAYA's Tone was little Naughty when He talked about Those thing in which He was always on upper hand side…!!!
Here on Next Morning He heard that VIVEK who were with SACHIN told after coming from an Interrogation room that SAMAR is really a Good Policeman, He tackled Culprits very Easily, He interrogates them Alone and got the Statements so Easily… A Smile comes on ABHIJEET face… His Doubts Clearing its aspects One by One but at the Next minute He was Stunned after Hearing that…
VIVEK (to SACHIN): magar Sir kabhi kabhi lagta hy wo Mujh say kuch Poochna chahta ho… Per baat badal deta hay… aisay hee kal Mian nay Usy MISHA ka bataya aur ye bhi kay DAYA Sir kay jany kay baad wo Musalsal Jerks mein hay aur Humein Usay roz Therapy kay liyey jana parta hay… tou Wo… Us ka Chehra… Mujhy laga Wo Ro day ga… phir achanak kehnay laga kay Us ki Fiancee ki Behan bhi kuch Mentally Disorder ka shikaar hay tou Usay bhi Fits ki Therapy kay liyey lay jana parta hay tou Usy wo Yaad aa gayii thi… Main nay Topic badalnay ko Us say poocha Aap ki Fiancee kya karti hay tou Sar jhatak ker kehnay laga kay Mujhy Daantny ka Contract hay Us kay pass… Mujhy itni Hansi aayii… wesay kabhi kabhi wo bilkul DAYA Sir jesa lagta hay… kaashhh wo DAYA Sir hee hota…!!!
SACHIN: VIVEK kaash aisa hota per hy nahi na… wo SAMAR hay DAYA Sir nahi…
At Evening ACP and ABHIJEET was at Lab… they discussed about Some Case… Suddenly SALUNKHY ask in Confusion to Both…
SALUNKHY: arry ye Inspector SAMAR ko kya hua?
ACP: kyun?
SALUNKHY: arry Boss… jub bhi aata hay… kehta hay kay Aap Mujhy DAYA Bacchy kaha karein… acha lagta hay…
ABHIJEET (alert): Usay kesay pata chala kay Aap DAYA ko…
SALUNKHY (interrupts): arry shroo shroo mein jub aaya tha tou Usay dekh ker Meray munh say nikal gaya per Us nay tou Peecha hee lay liya… kal tou Mian nay Usay theek thaak Dant diya… kay ye sub kehalwa ker Wo DAYA nahi ban jayey ga… wesay bhi is Mission kay Baad wo apnay Ghar Khush aur Hum apnay Ghar… huh…….
ABHIJEET: tou kuch Bola nahi…
SALUNKHY: arry Bharak gaya… kehnay laga Mujhy bhi koi Shauq Nhai hay DAYA banny ka… Aap ko hee Mubarak ho… Is Mission nay tou Meri Personality hee Khatam ker di hay aur chala gaya… Mian nay bhi jaany diya… ho ga bara Personality wala… Humara DAYA banny ki Koshish ker raha hay… (to ACP in Rash) ACP is Mission kay baad is ka Munh badalwao (ACP, ABHIJEET and TAREEKA really hide their Laugh in Diffuiculty) (SALUNKHY engage n say) aur Bhejo isay wapis…
ACP gives a Meaningful Look to ABHIJEET as Now What, as all knew that DAYA did not argue with Three ppl in this World ACP Sir, ABHIJEET and SALUNKHY Sir….. He nevers Showed His Anger againt these Two Heads of their Departments either sometime He confronted ABHIJEET but only to Some Extent… mostly in these types of Scenarios He kept His Lips Sealed… ACP Sir knows that ABHIJEET still had a Doubt about SAMAR so this Meaningful look is the Result of His Doubt as…
ACP: ab bolo…!!!
Here SALUNKHY again discuss something about the Case and also tell to ABHIJEET as…
SALUNKHY: ABHIJEET wo jo Rumaal Tum nay Mujhy diya tha na… jis per Khoon laga tha?
ABHIJEET (hurry): tou kya Blood Group A+ hay?
ACP pat on His Head whereas SALUNKHY look Him in Cofusion and after a while tell…
SALUNHY: nahi AB+….
ABHIJEET Face becomes Sad… Here ACP signaled Him to Move and in passage tell in Rash…
ACP: ABHIJEET pagalun jesay kaam mut karo… wo SAMAR hay… Hum us ka BLOOD, FINGER PRINT sub karwa chukay hain…
ABHIJEET: Sir kya aap ko kabhi Nhai lagta kay shayed yehi DAYA ho… apni yaaddasht bhool gaya hay?
ACP: mera khayal hay Tum apni Yaaddasht Bhooltay ja rahy ho… DAYA mar chukka hay aur Hum nay Usay Khud…
ABHIJEET (interrupts): tou Aap SAMAR ko DAYA ki tarah kyun Treat kartay hain??
ACP (confuse): aaa……… nahi… main…
ABHIJEET: Sir Plz… kahein na kahein Hum sub kay ander ye Umeed, Ihsaas hay kay Yehi DAYA hay… ya Humray ander kisi Anhoni ki Khawahish….
ACP: per Tum sub Khud apnay saamny dekh rahay ho… Mujhy Ilm hay Tum SIMLA say Us ki Kundli bhi nikalwa chukay ho…
ABHIJEET: Jee Sir… Sub kuch… magar Mujhy ab yaqeen hota ja raha hay kay yehi DAYA hay…
ACP (angry): Tum Mujhy bhi Pagal ker do gay ABHIJEET…
ABHIJEET: Pagal Nahi Sir… (His eyes Fired) haan magar Main Sabit zarur ker dun ga kay ye DAYA hay…!!!
After Two days… the Next Session of that Hot Line… Same Scenario Here as COL RANAWUT, GAUTAM KAPUR, BARUN KUMAR, ACP PRADYUMAN, ABHIJEET and SAMAR were there… the Device buzzed and everyone Focused…
VOICE: haan Inspector DAYA… RANAWUT say kaho Tumhein Parsun theek subah 8 bajay wahein BELAPUR kay Last Tower per Chor day… aur apnay 4 Scientists ko us Tabelay say Utha lay jayey…!!!
SAMAR (after seeing wat COL writes on Paper and signal Him to read it and say): is baat ki kya Zamanut hogi kay wo 4 scientist Saheh Salamut milein gay…???
VOICE: aur is baat ki kya zamanut hogi kay Tum Humein saheh salamut milo gay… dekho Ins DAYA… hr taraf Risk Factor hay… RANAWUT say kaho… SARKAR ki Boli a bolay… apny Bhejy ki boly… Shukerwaar Subah 8 bajay…!!!
The Phone Shuts… Everybody feels Relaxed… now they Discussed their Further Plan… GAUTAM and BARUN Briefed about that… COL RANAWUT secretly Smiles whereas ACP turning Shattered after Listening the Plan…
BARUN (to SAMAR): dekho… Hum Tumhein Bullet Proof kay sath Wireless Set aur cameras bhi dein gay… sub Tumharay Jism say Attach hoga… jesay hee tum Us Tower mein dakhil hogay… Hum Signal kay through wahan Raid maarein gay… magar Tum ko Kidnapers ko Masroof rakhna hay… kyunaky wahan Action Hum usi waqt lein gay jub un 4 Scientists ko wahan say nikaal liya jayey…!!!
SAMAR moved His Head… All leave after that discussion… Here on Way ABHIJEET feels that ACP was looking Tense… He also little Tense… SAMAR tense as well Excited thinking about the Mission… ABHIJEET want to say something to ACP but inprecence of SAMAR… He did not open His mouth… He dropped ACP on His House and then Backed to Residance… On whole way He was relaxing SAMAR as He knew the fear, Tension of SAMAR as He did not deal with such situations afterall He is a Policeman not a CID Officer…!!!
ABHIJEET: wesay Tum nay kabhi apni Fiancee kay baaray mein Nhai bataya? Kya naam hay? Shadi kub karo gay?
SAMAR (little nervous): Sir Pooja naam hay Us ka, aur Shadi….
ABHIJEET (feeling SAMAR Hesitation so close the topic as): acha chalo SAMAR Pareshan mut ho… ok…
SAMAR: Thank You Sir… wesay ek baat kahun… aap Daantein gay tou nahi… (ABHIJEET permits by moving His head and relaxed him about not scolding) (SAMAR say) Main jitna Kharos aap ko samjhta tha… aap utnay Kharos ho nahi…
SAMAR Quiet after seeing ABHIJEET, after a minute a Smile comes on ABHIJEET face which Relaxes SAMAR… ABHIJEET signaled Him to step out after stoping the Jeep…!!!
Next Evening, when all are busy in their Routine Work, SAMAR was at parking area waiting to ABHIJEET to get back to Residence… Suddenly ABHIJEET got a Surprising Call of SHIVA as He went back to Bangalore where He was Posted… ABHIJEET asked…
ABHIJEET: kesay Ho SHIVA?
SHIVA: yaar yahan aaya tha… darasal ARUN ki Sister ki Shadi hay, per wo Larki apnay Bhaiyya kay bina kuch karny ko Tayyar nahi… (teary voice) batao kahan say la ker dun Usay us ka Bhaiyya… GAUTAM aaj kal yahan hay…
ABHIJEET (pretending as He knews about GAUTAM Presence): acha GAUTAM KAPUR, CBI kay Project VIJAY kay Head na…
SHIVA: haan kisi Undercover Mission per hay yahan, socha ek baar SARAH ko Us say milwa deta hun, shayed Us ki zabani ye sun ker kay ARUN ab is Dunya mein nahi, Usay thora Sakun mil jayey… per pata chala wo yahan hay… Office Number per Msg chor diya… kal raat achanak Us ki Call aa gayii… Main nay bataya tou pehlay tou kuch bola nahi… (ABHIJEET confuse that why SHIVA tell all this to Him) (SHIVA added) yaar wo kuch aajeeb sii baat keh raha tha…
ABHIJEET: kiya? Aur Tum ye sub Mujhy…
SHIVA (interrupts): Usay is Mission kay baaray mein kuch pata hay.!
ABHIJEET (confuse): kis Mission kay baaray mein?
SHIVA: arry yehi BELAPUR.!
ABHIJEET (hurry): kya?
SHIVA: yaar kuch kaha nahi, bus achanak aisa laga Baat badal di… kehnay laga kay Tum ABHIJEET say kehna Usay bacha lay warna.! aur Phone band ker diya…
ABHIJEET meander the Sentence, seeing SAMAR came inside and talking in a Call and after cutting it in Irritation replying to ACP who was coming out from His Cabin and asked SAMAR about His Irritation…
SAMAR (to ACP): Sir COL RANAWUT nay Mujhy kal Subah Head Quarter (HQ) bula liya hay… halankay pehlay tou aisa koi Plan nahi tha… Do din baad jana tha…
ABHIJEET minds revolving so many News, Doubts, Clues, Confusion as
SAMAR: Main wahan so Nhai pa raha… Mujhy wahan Neend Nhai aatii…
SAMAR (to ABHIJEET): Hello ABHI…
ABHIJEET: Tum Chashma lagatay ho SAMAR…
ACP: ABHIJEET COL RANAWUT SAMAR ko Maar dena chahta hay…
RAHUL: us kay kharay honay ka andaaz, dekhnay ka… sub DAYA jesa hay…
FREEDIE: tou achanak kehnay laga kay haan aur hamesha Jeet Hissay mein aati..…
VIVEK: Aap ki Fiancee kya karti hay tou Sar jhatak ker kehnay laga kay Mujhy Daantny ka Contract hay Us kay pass…
SALUNKHY: arry Boss… jub bhi aata hay… kehta hay kay Aap Mujhy DAYA Bacchy kaha karein… acha lagta hay…
ABHIJEET (interrupts): tou Aap SAMAR ko DAYA ki tarah kyun Treat kartay hain??
ACP: aaa……… nahi… main…
SAMAR (instantly): Rocky… Pascal… (after a Second) Rocky Pascal us ka naam tha… wesay wo Mar gaya… Encounter ker diya tha…
SAMAR: nahi… Meray Senior nay…
SHIVA: kehnay laga kay Tum ABHIJEET say kehna Usay bacha lay warna.!
SAMAR (to ACP): Sir COL RANAWUT nay Mujhy kal Subah HQ bula liya hay… halankay pehlay tou aisa koi Plan nahi tha… Do din baad jana tha…
One by One everything Connected to each other… He cuts the call after saying Bye to SHIVA and Urgently called VIVEK and Ordered Him to bring MISHA Tonight at any Cost…!!!
VIVEK talked to ABHIJEET after reaching at Home as he recived His call on His way and ABHIJEET just Ordered Him and Cutted the Call.. He dials ABHIJEET number and says…
VIVEK: ABHIJEET Sir, MISHA ko lana kya buht zaruri hay, darasal Us ki Tabiyet Kharab hay aur Aap tou jaantay hain kay Dr MISHA ko…
ABHIJEET (interrupts): VIVEK, Mujh per Bharosa hay na.!
VIVEK (quick n strong): Jee Sir…
ABHIJEET: tou Follow my Orders…
VIVEK put off the Call, He left Bureau little Early as to spent some Quality time with MISHA and now this ABHIJEET Order, He look at the watch and move to His room to take a Shower and then get back to follow His Senior Order… !!!
Here all are at Bureau… when VIVEK brought MISHA with Him as Everyone little Shock and Confused as All knew that MISHA was Not in Good Health now a days due to DAYA depart… MISHA just look at SAMAR and ran to Him... Hugged Him so Tightly… She cries with so much Pain… SAMAR was in Extreme Shock… First He looked to VIVEK and then MISHA… He did not do anything except Hugs Her back… after some time MISHA little Relax… She front Her Face towards SAMAR and say…
MISHA: Baray waly Uncle Aap aa gayey?? Aap ko pata hay Mian buht Bemaar thi… Aap kahan chaly gayey thay…??
SAMAR (try to relax n say): Beta Mian aap ka Uncle Nhai hun… Mera naam SAMAR hay… bus aap kay Uncle say Meri Shakal milti hay…
MISHA look at Him and suddenly grab a Tear from His eyes and say in Dreamy Tone…
MISHA: per aap kay tou Stars bhi wesay hain…
SAMAR Confuse as He does not know what is Stars and all… She again grabs His face on Her small Palms and say…
MISHA: aaap Baray waly Uncle ho na…?
ABHIJEET (come and say): ab tou keh do DAYA…
SAMAR stand up… Everyone was in Shock after hearing ABHIJEET comment including SAMAR… He moved Head in Yes to MISHA and tell Her to stay Outside with the Help of Security…
SAMAR (to ABHIJEET): Sir aap ye kesi baatein ker rahay hain… Mian SAMAR hun… haan DAYA jesa lagta hun, Dikhta hun per hun tou SAMAR na…
FREDDIE: haan ABHIJEET Sir, ye SAMAR hay… DAYA Sir ko tou…
VIVEK: ABHIJEET Sir aap kya…
ABHIJEET (confront SAMAR and say in Strong tone): Tum DAYA ho… haan SAMAR jesa banny ki koshish zarur kr rahy ho… per ho tou DAYA na…!!!
ACP: ABHIJEET…
ABHIJEET: Sir Main qasam khany ko tayyar hun ye DAYA hay… (to SAMAR in Rash) Tum nay kaha tha na kay Rocky Tumhari zindagi ka sub say Khatarnaak Mujrim tha tou wo Tumhari Services Case ki Culprit List mein kyun nahi hay?
SAMAR: Sir Mian nay Aap ko ye bhi bataya tha kay Us ka Encounter Meray Senior nay kiya tha, tou wo Aap ko meray Service Cases kay Culprits List mein kesay mily ga.!
ABHIJEET: aur tum nay FREDDIE say ye bhi kaha tha kay Tum jub Us say Shart lagatay thay tou hamesha jetty thay…
SAMAR (in rash): DAYA Sir jettay thay Sir aur ye baat Mujhy khud FREDDIE nay batai thi…
FREDDIE (interrupts): haan Sir, Main nay hee…
ABHIJEET (cutting in rash): FREDDIE chup raho… (to SAMAR) aur tumharay pass kitnay Chashmy hain… haan (He opened SAMAR Drawer and got a specs) jub koi shaks Plane Specs pehanta hay tou kya itnay saaray, wo ek hee Set lay ga na, Us din Tumhara Chashma meray saamnay toota aur Tum nay 2 minute baad hee dusra Specs laga liya… kya Chasmy ki Dukan lagani thi jo itnay saaray…
SAMAR (harsh interrupts): wo Plane specs Mujhy VIVEK nay diya tha… Mian nay tou jo Naya khareeda tha wo tou Drawer mein hee reh gaya tha… Main VIVEK kay diyey huay Specs hee pehan raha tha aur jub wo Toot gaya tou Mian nay apnay khreeday huay laga liyey jo abhi aap kay hath mein hay…
ACP: ABHIJEET… plz ye DAYA nahi hay… Nikl aao is Bharam say…
ABHIJEET (ignore and to VIVEK): ye Sach keh raha hy kya?
VIVEK moved His Head in Yes… ABHIJEET in rash moved towards SAMAR… SAMAR bit back after seeing His Rash Expressions… Everyone feeling Fear either ACP come towards SAMAR to Protect Him from any Weird coming from ABHIJEET side… ABHIJEET stopped infront of Him and say in Teary tone…
ABHIJEET (teary tone): plz DAYA keh day na Tu DAYA hay… SAMAR nahi… dekh Main Tery aagy Hath jorta hun… plz Mujh say mut cheen DAYA ko… plz DAYA… keh day… ek baar…
SAMAR clutched His Both Hands… His Tears fell on ABHIJEET hands… He opened them and Say in Tears…
SAMAR: kaash Mian aisa keh sakta… per Mian SAMAR hun Sir… DAYA nahi… !!!
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