Silent Promise !!! (Concluding Part @ PG 147) - Page 67

dada completed first part today!!😊

Woow what a great story... great job GD n NEEME... i cant believe daya sir is dead ... i know he cant die... i know he is alive ... sorry i didnt get time to review on part one... both parts are awsome... well done...

Originally posted by: daya_angel

dada completed first part today!!😊

u r just fabulous!!!👏

HATS OFF!!!👏

n neeme dii ur theme of the story is too good!!👏

u both r out of the world!!!😆😉

enjoyed every single line of the story...

will read next part surely...😳

oopsss sakshi
mujhe lga main meri FB pdh rhi hu😆
as i use dis color n bold size for  spcl post

Omg I'm in love with this story. It's turning extremely addictive now. Loved this part a lot and waiting for the next :D

I knew this guy Samar isn't Samar, but Sr. Ins. Daya. The interaction scenes between him and team, specially with Abhijeet were heart wrenching. I could understand Samar aka Daya's condition on the way everybody behaved with him. These sections were the highlights of part 2. The suspense is well maintained and I wonder what's the exact matter. This Col is so stupid!

The last part was awesome, samar aka Daya uttered the right name, by mistake ofcourse :P
Now let's see how Abhijeet confronts him.

Neeme di's plot is simply mindblowing.

I've no words for Dada...

story is very nic...plzz post third part fast...

another fantastic story by neeme and GD i am seriously adicteted to your stories this one is the best really nice even i think that person is Daya not Samar. what did ACP mean that col ranawat wanted to kill Samar or did the terrists wanted to kill him, anyway what a lovely story you two should became proper writers and sell your books as combine production i bet you will sell a lot as i will be the first person to buy it. just totally in love with your stories the suspense in the story and way that Abhijeet remembered daya was so emotional

OMG I thought its a complete story but continuation again

Thank You Guys... The basic Motive is Equal suspense and Emotions.. Bcz According to the Plot Emotions Are Very improtant as well.. We really worked on this..Thanks for Liking Once again..

@both
pehle complete kro fir fb milegi;>
kb samar khega abhi main tumara daya hu:)
cant wait..post asap