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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shumi.

yaar i am yet to complete my writing😒 ...as soon as i am done ...i will up date...sorry for the delay dear



di delay kaha hua abhi toh ek din baaki hain na 😕 so aap araam se likho no hurry no worry use my line 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sandy118



di delay kaha hua abhi toh ek din baaki hain na 😕 so aap araam se likho no hurry no worry use my line 😊

thanks s/r iddhi no mention no tention...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shumi.

thanks s/r iddhi no mention no tention...



aww ur welcum but thats not ur fault u update on time on sunday as always so aapke sunday ko abhi time hain i know aapko pata hain when u upload at that time here its like 5:00 am of mon. n nice line di 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hello Shumi

Finally got a chance to go through the remaining parts 5-8...
Parts7 and 8 were the best of all..TRP gaining 👏👏👏
I am short of words to express what a deep talented writer u are..👍🏼
All i can say is this..

Agree with some of the posters with regards to profiling...
Kudos to u once again for presenting such a sensitive topic in ur FF and also clearing some of the misconceptions...
👍🏼... Wish our politicians and parties who claim to be secular cared really, India would be the bestest country to live in...First we had outside rulers and now our own rulers are dividing the country.

Coming back to FF, some of the highlights were court session, KC's brilliant vakilgiri
[ unfortunately have not seen anything in parichay so far], siddhi's totally diff avataar from Parichay, Rohit's new avtaar, list goes on and on...

I had already commented after the initial parts about how much research u had done on law and now on this sensitive topic..
👍🏼
Wish CV's had visited ur FF before their tracks and implemented some of it or had even done some of their own research, Parichay would have been logically atleast 20-30% better than currently, if not even better...
Atleast it looks like they copied one idea from ur FF ..falling idea ...Siddhi in serial instead of tree was on top of haystack and falls on Kunal...
👍🏼

Agree with Fari as she mentioned, EK should hire u instead... I would go further and say wish another director reads this, hires you and presents this to rival EK's soaps..
As she will not change her ways no matter who the story writer is..

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shumi.



hi di i am here wid detailed comment i know maine kaha tha ke serial mein confession ke baad but still doing it now hope u dont have any problem wid detailed comment 😉 n spare me for any writting mistakes or hindi- english mixes 😛

shilpa was sleeping on the bed,spreading her hands and legs ,covering three fourth of the bed as if she was drunk...at the left edge of the bed siddhi was lying on her side and trying hard to sleep keeping her eyes wide open.
as she is scared of darkness she never switch off the lights.she was staring aimlessly looking strangely at each and every object of the room as if she is looking them first time.for the past one hour she is trying to close her eyes but could not...as soon as she shut her eyes kunal's face kept appearing proximate to her face ,as intimate as he was in the library!

aww kunu ka face sapno mein bhi 1st step of love is starting😳 n shilpa sleeping like drunked 😆



that was a ever memorable moment for her...she loved the way he said sorry with attitude! in fact he did not said sorry to her...she recollected ,
to find out exactly what he said....' mujay sorry bolna achcha nahi lagta...par mai bol sakta hun ...if necessary...'

'where did he say sorry?😕...he said he can say if necessary...what a attitude!...'that was the best part of him.she liked that.she never impressed by goody goody type guys...like anand, rohit and vikram...they are all like wannabe joru ka ghulams .while she was thinking gradually her eyes got closed...now she could see kunal in close up as he stood in the library...fenced by his arms...his chest was close to her face...she raised her head and kept staring at his face...he leaned towards her face,
looking right in to her eyes
...more close to her face...as close as she could feel his sensational breath...she was puzzled ...his face was so close that his silky hair tickling her cheek ...she was thrilled....why she was not trying to stop him!...she was worrying too...he tilted his face slightly...leaned more close to her face...towards her lips...and a quick peck on her lip...lip-on-lip contact.....innocent and sexy...and sent a message ..."I want to kiss you and hopefully, sometime soon...make out...'' that message was beyond amazing...she opened her eyes with ear to ear wide smile and blush!...it took some time to understand what is what...when she understood she was jolted! ...jerked up from the bed...looked around shockingly...touched her lips and checked...it was her fantasy!...illusion! she sat on the bed resting her cheeks in her palms...'yeh mujay kya ho raha hai...?' she was tensed for a long time...finally when she fall asleep it was around 5pm.

wah wah the green line sach mein kunu bolo any one will faint n ye siddhi tumhe pyaar ho raha hain anand , viku toh joru ka gulaam banenge hee but rohit nope 😳

next day when siddhi woke up it was too late...shilpa was about to leave...

siddhi:😲 😡...hey stupid shilpu! ...😡 don't you know that you should wake me up...'she screamed sitting on her bed for no valid reason.

shilpa:' wake you up! haaa...😲...tu tho ghode bech kay sorahi thi...😡' she gave her back.

siddhi:

shilpa: 'waise mai break fast bana di hun...get ready to college...'

siddhi:...😡...' she jumped down from the bed and rushed to wash room.when she came out of the wash room shilpa was already left.

shilpa bhaag gayi uff chodo raat ko sapne dekhogi toh yahi hoga din mein dekha karo 😛

'in hurry siddhi pulled out some cloths from her almirah...' i was planning to dress up nicely today...poora chaupat ho gaya...😡'she was angry on herself. when she reached the college it was 15 minutes left to end first period which was KC sir's class...she almost ran in the corridor ...she removed her sandal , picked them in her hand and ran till she reached her class room door...she stopped for a while outside the class room to calm down, her feet were yet to come to rest...she put her sandal down and pushed her feet in, wiped her face, fixed her hair and dress before she could enter the class, show up to KC!

wow abhi se KC ko impress karna chahti hain hmm tch! plan chaupat ho gaya lekin as usual ur details wow di too good 👏

when she entered the class she got pissed to see a substitution teacher was sitting and chilling, students were chatting and relaxing...

rohit: 'kya hua?... why are you late ?...😃'

siddhi:'😒... don't ask me... sab yeh shilpu kay wajai se...😡' she fall on her seat.

rohit:'haan...haan...kabhi mere wajai se...kabhi shilpa kay wajai se...kabhi KC sir kay wajai se...tumare wajai se tho galati hota hi nahi...😆...'he teased her.

siddhi:' tch! don't nag me...i am upset now...😔' her face was inflated.

rohit:'for what?...😕'

siddhi:'wo ...mai...😃 😛...' when she was about to say ...suddenly her face turned as bright as 100
watt bulb looking at KC at the door !

100 watts smile toh already hain siddhi kee 😳 kunu ke dekhke she would have 1000 watts smile but akhir majnu jee aa hee gaye n rohit serial mein itna sweet kyun nahi hain 😭



kunal:'excuse me...😊' he entered the class.students were confused about his surprised entry that too when his period is going to end with in 5 , 10 minutes... the substitution teacher took that opportunity and left the class.

students:😕

kunal:' sorry guys for not taking the class today and tomorrow also i will not able to come to class...this classes i will compensate day after tomorrow...😊' he paused to see students reaction.

students:' day after tomorrow? day after tomorrow is saturday...😕'they were confused.

kunal:'yep ...i need to keep special class to complete my syllabus...by the way i have an important trial tomorrow...i wish you all come to the court to witness my trial...i already got the special permission and made seating arrangements for you all...' he was in hurry while talking to the students.

students:😊

kunal:' like to see you all tomorrow in the court...😊' with that he said bye to the students and left the class room
in haste.

special class n aapka court trial surprise wow treat 👏

next day:

bombay high court:

the court room was jam packed with final year law students along with the family and friends of the accused.

@ bold - 🤣

as soon as the judge arrived the trial was started.

it was a long pending and a closed case of bombay district court, appealed by the accused to the high court for reconsideration.

it was the case of a youth who has been suspected as terrorist as his first name is Mohammed and he is a Muslim...he was arrested under POTA act and was constantly forced / ill treated , humiliated by the police for his confession and admission of his guilt.

government lawyer: ' my lord...it is a crystal clear case, he belongs to a muslim community and most of his friends are muslim,, his grand parents live in pakistan...and one of his great grand father's name is in terrorist list...so he must be a terrorist... he is a terrorist...😡' he said with full confident.

kunal:😊...he stood smiling at him.

government lawyer:' he should not be set free..this type of people will create havoc in the country, revoke the laws of the land, disturb peace, affect fraternal relations...he is dangerous to our country...

kunal:' my lord...i agree that there are a very few misguided youth who have spoiled the spirit of Islam, disturbed the Muslim norms, above all marginalized the facets and tenets of the Al Quran-the holy book...' he paused.

kunal:'...that doesn't mean all muslims are terrorists...😒' he defended.

government lawyer:'my lord...all muslims may not be terrorist but all the terrorists are muslim...' he enforced his arguments.

kunal:'excuse me!😡...i think our lawyer is weak in GK...😆'he said sarcastically.

@ bold - 🤣🤣🤣 kunu bhi na

spectators:😆

government lawyer:'objection my lord...😡...'he yelled in a funny way.

spectators:😆

judge:'objection over ruled...😊'

kunal:'😊...
i think our lawyer don't know that all the terrorist acts were not by muslims...few for example are...

In 1882, Tsar Alexander was assassinated and 21 other innocent people were killed. He was assassinated by a non-Muslim named Gnacy Hryniewhcki.

On 6 September 1902, US president Mc. Kinley was assassinated by a non-muslim anarchist named Leon Czolgosz.

On 1st October 1920, a bomb blast in Los Angeles Times newspaper building and 21 innocent people were killed. The bomb blast was done by two Christians James and Joseph.

On 16 April 1925, a bomb blast in St. Nedelya Church in Sofia, capital of Bulgaria in which 150 people were killed and more than 500 were injured. This attack was done by communist party of Bulgaria and they were non-Muslims. It was a biggest terrorist attack in Bulgaria.


On 9 October 1934, king Alexander 1 of Yugoslavia was assassinated by a non-Muslim gunman named Vlada Georgieff.


On 1st may 1961, the first US craft was hijacked by Ramerez Ortiz who was a non-Muslim.

On 19th April 1995, federal building bombing, Oklahoma City was done by two Christians named
Timothy and Terry in which 166 innocent people were died and more than 100 injured.
does everyone go around attacking Christians? 😡

From 1941 to 1948 after World War II 259 terrorist attacks were conducted by Jewish terrorist by Irgun, Haganah and others.


On 22nd July 1946, bombing of king David Hotel was done by Menachem Begin. It was a biggest terrorist attack against the British history mandate.At that time Menachem Begin was declared terrorist by the British government. Later on after few years he becomes the prime minister of Israel and after few years gets the Noble Prize for peace.

On January 30,1948
Mahatma Gandhi was assassinated by Nathuran Godse who was a Hindu / Brahmin.

On 31st October 1984, Prime Minister Indira Gandhi was assassinated by her Sikh Guard.


On 21 May 1991,Rajiv Gandhi was assassinated
by human bomber and 14 other innocent people were killed with him. this was done by LTTE group from Sri Lanka,

In UK, since hundred years IRA (Irish republican army) is conducting terrorist attacks. They are Catholics but they are not called as catholic terrorists, but as IRA...' he listed in chronological order.

spectators:👏👏👏
👏
judge:' order...order...order...' he made them calm down.

kunal:'...by all these facts this has been proved that terrorism is not the monopoly of Islam. It is prohibited in Islam. why people always try to malign Islam?...😡'

spectators:👏

kunal: ' very sad to say ...over the past few years, there has been a growing tendency to dub Muslims as terrorists...'

recently Bollywood king Shah Rukh Khan ,while he was going to give a lecture at Yale University were he was honoured as a Chubb Fellow, was detained at New York airport ,because he has a Mulsim name.same thing happend to him in 2009 too.

pathetic to say our former President Abdul Kalam was twice
detained at New York airport with US security officials even taking his jacket and shoes to check for explosives,because he has a Mulsim name.

kunal:' my loard...MUSLIMS are not terrorists, they are our friends and fellow citizens...because of few misled , suspecting all Muslims and arresting who ever has the name Khan / Mohammed is goofy!...ridiculous...!😡...'

judge:😊 ...he was continuously noting down his points...

kunal:' ...hence my lord... as we know
Better ten guilty persons go free than one innocent person be punished i request you to release Mohammed Iqbal Khan from all the charges, as there is no evidence against him and he is absolutely innocent ...😃 ...'

spectators:👏

kunal:'...and...and i strongly demand the government to pay highest compensation for he spent one year of his precious life in the jail and the mental trauma his mother went through...😊' each and every point he put forth to judge very clearly with strong points.

judge:'looking in to all the points i consider
Mohammed Iqbal Khan as innocent and release him from all the charges with due respect...' he wrote the judgement.

spectators:'wooo...👏'
their cheer reached the roof.

judge:' ...and i recommend the government to pay him deserving compensation...😊' he ended the judgment and left the court room

wow first the info u gave 😲 yes i am really shocked n ur topic about muslims is fabulous as always n i agree with it hats off di a big hats off
👏👏👏👏


siddhi:'ek minute...😃' she said to her friends and came rushing to kunal.seeing her running towards him, he stopped getting in to the auto... a kind of awaiting for her.she was wearing a light apple green long silk skirt with tiny flowers scattered over the skirt,long matching blouse with short sleeve ,no scarf or dupatta on her shoulder.with a million dollar smile looking as cool as a school girl! his eyes glued at her...he could not stop himself staring at her until she reached him.

aww siddhi cool as school girl ur details about clothes bolne kee jarurat nahi 👏



siddhi:'congratulation...😃' she was gasping.

kunal:' ...
' he realized that , all at once she occupied his mind.


siddhi:'kunal!😛... you have an amazing command over your profession...long pending case you solved it in just one hearing...terrific!😛...you won against the government!😛...'she appreciated him with all her zeal.

kunal:' thank you...😃'he grinned decently.


siddhi:'congrats...😃'she said again and extended her fair hand with neatly trimmed and polished nails, a solid plane finger ring in the ring finger.

kunal:😊...it was unexpected by him! he kept himself at ease by
concealing his reaction and extended his hand for shake without showing any hesitation.

siddhi:' 😃...she slide her elegant palm in to his and shook gently, her palm was as soft as silk , as light as a feather ,
he felt a chill breeze passed on the back of his neck!...a moment later he realized that he was holding her hand for more than necessary.with a pleasing smile he smoothly took back his hand from her's.soon she left him puzzling and mingled with her friends!

ahem! ahem! dono taraf ek jaise ho raha hain ek raat mein ek din mein 😳


next day satruday! KC's special class day!

as it was not her regular college,instead of her usual skirt and blouse she
wore a cool blue color georgette anarkali churidar with chiffon matching duppatta having tissue lace at the borders,narrow and tight pyjama catching at her thighs and ankles, gave seductive vision...she tied her straight-silky hair as a single pony tail...flowing on her back,leaving front bangs floating on her fore head , big silver ear rings and matching white silver bangles.

wow siddhi in anarkali chudidar serial mein dikhao usse ache kapdo mein yaar n seductive vision 😳 kunu toh gaya yaar n details ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ 😊


students:😛 !...their eyes rooted on him!
he was in blue jeans and half sleeve olive green ,round necked ,spun T-shirt! first time they are seeing him in T-shirt! he was looking 10years younger than what he is!...his body shape and physical appearance together with wide manly, stubble face made him look hot and attractive.

kunu bhi kam nahi in t-shirt 😳 hot n acttractive siddhi gayi 😛


kunal:'fine...i have no issue...😃' he agreed to them.
soon they all moved to a big banyan tree inside the college compass itself...it is a
52 years old banyan tree with its thick roots rooted to the ground, appeared like cluster of trees...very popular place for the students to hang out with their friends when they bunk the class!



look at the tree!😛




it was a real fun for the students to sit on the mud ,with their fingers secretly digging the mud ,crushing dry leaves and twigs, secretly dropping small stones in side the shirts of the other student who was sitting in front of them...

haye di aapne toh mere college days yaad dila diya yaar we were also used to bunk n kisi ped ke niche jaake enjoy thank u for that tree 😛


student:'wow!...😛...' they looked at her with amusement.all the student stood surrounding the tree cheering her.finally ...after a great struggle she succeeded in reaching the lower branch of the tree and managed to sat on that branch safely, hanging her legs down.


siddhi:' yo...😛...it is thrilling😛 ...' she said shaking her legs , looking down her friends.while she was expressing her experience students saw kunal coming back .


i was imagining siddhi on tree 🤣


siddhi:😲...she sat helplessly on the tree branch itself.

@ bold - 🤣🤣🤣


kunal: 😲...from his head the dupatta slide on his face ...all the way down to the ground...

kunal:'what...the...😲 😡' he looked at the dupatta and looked up to find where from it fall...

siddhi:😲...she closed her eyes and shut her mouth tightly with her hands.

students:😆 they burst out with laughter...now no need for them to control or hide their laugh...

kunal:' tum!...😲' he was dumbfound to see siddhi high above the tree.

siddhi:😔...she had no guts to open her eyes and look at kunal.

kunal:' what the heck you are doing there?...haan😡...' instantly he lost his temper.

siddhi:😒...she opened her eyes and looked down to kunal.

kunal:'can't you hear?😡...come down...😡' he said raising his head and looking at her. all the students got up from their place and joined kunal in the mission of bringing down siddhi.

raveena:'...she don't know how to get down it seems...😒' she said hesitantly.

kunal:' non sense😡...get down...😡' he screamed at siddhi.

siddhi:...sir...raveena ne kaha na😔...i don't know how to get down...😒' she spoke from the tree.

kunal:'you are unbelievable...😡' he was furious.

siddhi:' believe me sir😒...mai sach kahe rahi hun...😔'
she said keeping her face as innocent as baby.

kunal:😡...he don't know what to do next to bring her down.

siddhi:' sir...will you mind helping me?...😛' she requested.


kunal:' jaldi uttro...'he extended his one hand to her.

siddhi:' thanks...😛' she bend down to reach his hand but could not.

siddhi:'sir...haath thoda lambha kijiyeh...😃'

kunal:'...serial waala magical hand nahi hai mera...to extend my hand as long as you want...huuu...😡'

siddhi:
...looking at her upset face he raised on his toe and extant his hand more close to her...she too bend down little more ...after a long struggle she caught hold of his hand.

kunal:'jump down...😡' he gripped her hand taking care that his grip was not too tight to the extant that it can hurt her.

siddhi:'jump!😲...'

kunal:'then what...😡...'

siddhi:' if i jump i don't think i can reach safely ...😒' she was scared.

kunal:'yeh baat tumai ab samaj mai aaye?😡...pehele tum neeche koodo...
i will take care of you...'he gave instructions how to jump down holding his hand.

siddhi:...she gathered all her strength and guts ...finally jumped on kunal...immediately he put both his hands on her hip to hold her from falling... due to her weight,imbalance jump and gravitational pull he could not succeed in his attempt, he left siddhi to slide on him...he tried to hold her hip to stop...his fingers slide above her hip over her rib cage...she was slipping down from his hold and he was inclining towards the ground.

kunal:😲... kunal could not balance himself. her seductive body sliding over him ..weaken his strength ...he fall on the ground
along with siddhi...siddhi safely landed on kunal rubbing her face with his one day stubble cheek...instantly she turned her face to avoid his sizzling cheek ...in that nano second she felt his quick peck on her lip!...the same lip-on-lip contact!...innocent and sexy!...with the mesmerizing message!...which she felt in the morning...but this time the message was different...'I got it...thank u...😛'.

students rushed to them for their help .they first helped siddhi to get up from kunal and then to kunal.every thing happend in no time.

kunal:'ouch!...'he stood holding his left elbow...when he fall his elbow hit the ground with force and got
bruised on it.

'wow😛...log sahi kahate hai...subha ka sapna sach hota hai...😲...'shiddhi stood astonishing.her morning fantasy came true before evening ! as she thought it was not her illusion,a sign of reality!

siddhi:'sir...aap teek tho ho na?...' she asked him with concern secretly looking at his pain filled face and bruised elbow.

kunal:😡 ... holding his elbow he gave a killer look at her as if he have no perception about their lip-on-lip peck.

siddhi:'sir...aap...😒'


the whole scene was too too hilarious 🤣 🤣 n lip peck awww for that luv u 🤗 n mujhey bhi subah sapne dekhna chalu karna chahiye god knows sach ho gaye toh 😛

kunal:'😡 class dismissed...all of you go home now...' he abruptly end the class as he can't continue the class with pain
.

by that time rohit and anand were back with hands full of snacks.

rohit:' class dismissed! 😲...kyun...?😕' he don't understand why all of sudden he dismissed the class.

students:😆 ...they giggled looking at siddhi.

rohit:'siddhi!😲...tum!...firse..?😡...' he understood that again she did some mischief with KC sir.

siddhi:'tch! 😔...' she put down her head.

aww bechari siddhi i am feeling bad for her cutie bhi na 😡 n sorry for so short detailed comment n for ur FF - ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ aur bhi 😛 ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ enjoy n waiting for next part but use my line "NO HURRY - NO WORRY " 😛

luv - s/riddhi


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Posted: 13 years ago

Loved it Shumi... Siddhi's naughtiness is reaching heights...
The way she went and sat on the tree was too goood...
Overall superb...



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Posted: 13 years ago
👏marvellous...👏👏

i just loved this part ... your take on terroism, muslims...attacks...was mindblowing..⭐️⭐️
no words to describe... no wonder it takes u so much of tym to update ... you do ur homework veryyy welll🤗

seriously shumi dear.. you are a very talented person...👏 thanks a lot for the pm🤗


recently Bollywood king Shah Rukh Khan ,while he was going to give a lecture at Yale University were he was honoured as a Chubb Fellow, was detained at New York airport ,because he has a Mulsim name.same thing happend to him in 2009 too.

i agree... with the above lines...
u have stated so many examples in btw FF ..tat it was tough for me to concentrate ...towards both the issues...😊
comin ti sinal part... awww...shumi thanks alottt for the extra class ka thingy... it was fun attendin😉😉


wat a way of describin the romance ...😳😳

i loved that tree waala scene...

welll kuch zyaadha hi late kar diya rply karney mein


..mujay sorry
bolna achcha nahi lagta...😉..par mai bol sakti hun .

now m i bein like kunal chopra...😉😆


waisey waitin for ur ff today... plz give us romantic track...😳 as even in the serial romance is in air😉


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Posted: 13 years ago
hi shumi dear wen are u updating ..eagerly waiting to read the next part..😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: stuti123

hi shumi dear wen are u updating ..eagerly waiting to read the next part..😊

to night inshallah...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
😆 love u😛...will update to night inshallah😃

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