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Posted: 13 years ago
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Ahh prince is awaiting eagerly for his princess based on pandit's bhavishyawani,I am bit surprised how come he believed in it after he threw out pandit for saying so,I mean he didn't want that necklace to belong to someone but his mother na...so what changed??

Duggu head of vampire clan🤣 hilarious,Kiranwa, romance ke sath sath humour bhi accha hai iss SS main well done👏 Talli ko kya lagta hai woh Kesu jaisi hai to Kesu uski baat samaj jayega, hey bhagwaan baat to usne akkalwali ki lekin kisse se?

Ab yeah determined mind wala Kesu aage kya karne wala hai😕,I want to see some romance between GK before all these vampire vs human angle takes over*stomps feet and demands* please update soon😍

Edited by enchanted23 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#42
unres done in previous page 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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O meri pyari🤗 My pyari si garmiyon ki muskuruti,sardiyon mein mundi ankhiyon par padti,barish mein badlon se athkheliyan karti aur basant mein phoolon par khilkhilati, sharad mein os ki boondon par padti..In short apni satrangi rangon se dilon ko gudgudati sunehri Kiran.😳

Wah wah!,.😳.I am lubbing the mystery.👏.Kescula bechara.😭...Longs and waits for the woman na..but Duggu Vamp😆Khooni chudail duggu 😆

But I am lubbing the plot and Talikula bhi aa gayiii. 😆

Kiruuu jokes apart but YES !You are at your best when you write mystery !I am curious and moreover excited about the what will happen next...Gulllu rani ko le aa jaldi Kescula k paas

Lubbly chappi.👏.pls update really soon😍

And tujhe my posterwa acha laga Thankeez ...muahhh🤗

And I lubbed the darawana Kescula wala poster👏 So intense and Gothic..lubbed it😳

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Posted: 13 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: minizz

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Hey Kiran🤗 this was quite an interesting chapter.You gave me a scare when the Ashutosh character was first mentioned.phir uncle jud gaya tho I was relieved😆I loved the back story.I always go for such stories yaar jisme the past has an imp part to play.That's why re-incarnation and Vampire love stories are my fav😳looking forward to the next update eagerly.Thanks for starting a new story.chalo isi bahaane you will be active here😆
Take care.regards and hugs to your Grandma😊

Mini dear 🤗 thank u so much for liking 😃 hahahaha y were u scared yar? he is just a curator 😆 aww so sweet yar, i m so glad u liked it n hey i also love vampire love stories, i dont know y but i m attracted to them, n haan yar now me active but comments dene se zara chutti li hai per vl be back soon hehe, hey tera FF is going so good yaar, me loving it so much, every chapi n the way u write about kesar gulaal n vassy's point of view, love it 😃 tu bhi jaldi se update de yaar plzzz 😃 aww thanku for the hugs dear 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi my cutie kiranwa*lots of hugs* me finally read d 3 chappies of kescula's SS 😳 hehe loved them.. 😃 ye Necklace ka kya chakkar hai yar 😕 kescula gulu se pyar kartha hai ya necklace se 😲 n tali b vampirni hai?I'm sure she must b drinking bandar's blood in order to sustain her tail 😆 n duggu vampire hai?does he wear black chaniya choli 😛 n kescula kab drink karega Laal namewali ladki k blood 😃 n kunnu hai kya yahan bhi?made him a werewolf so dat tali n he can have each others blood 😛 n m waiting 4 d kescula n gulu's first date in d haunted museum 😊plz update soon re muaah:*
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Kiran,I have updated my comment on pg 5😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved it yaar...cant wait for the next chappi..right now time constraints..will comment later...

but me ij lubbing this kescula...and u better make him a handsome vampire varna teri khair nahi
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Kiran updated my comments on page 6😊
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(Poster By Meri pyari... Piyu Mhaari 🤗)

(Poster By Me... Kiran 😊)

Chapter 4

After one month:

Dhani: "Kya gulaal, tera bas chalay toh tu toh museum hi utha k ghar le jaaye, har waqt waheen chipkay rehtay hen hum, kabhi koi armour, kabhi ring, kabhi bangle, kabhi cloaks, ufff main toh thak gayi is sab se, cant v take a break?" she said making an innocent face.

Gulaal: "Tu bhi na dhani, bas tujhe ab break chahiye, y?? hamara project aik interesting turn pe hai n see na hamen yeh bhi pata lagana hai na k akhir is museum se log itna dartay kyun hai? Abhi toh cheezon ki research hi hui hai" n to herself ("aur ab tak kuch bhi pata nahi chala").

Bulbul: "Wese gulaal yeh necklace ka bhi aik raaz hai na, seems like a thousand saal puraani mystery"

Gulaal: "Haan per pata nahi y I m getting very attracted to that necklace, yeh ashu sir toh har waqt hum pe nazar rakhtay hen warna toh I would have definitely got that necklace into my hands..."

Dhani: "Ya n u would have been wearing it on ur neck n pata chalta us k baad do haath aye aur peechay se aa k gulaal ka gala pakar liya"

"AAA !!!!"

Bulbul: "Dhaani chup kar !!! tujhe har waqt itne horror mazak kyun soojhtay hen !!! u idiot !!!"

Dhaani: "Haan aur tujhe har waqt darna hi ata hai na" n looked at her mischievously, "wese kya pata woh haath teri gardan pe bhi puhanch jayen k tu gulaal ki dost..."

Bulbul: "Dhaaaniii shut up I vl kill u now, ruk tu !!!"

Gulaal: "Hey guys, stop it u two, look at this while searching what i found, history of vampires, see kitni interesting hai"

Bulbul: "Gulaal ab tu shuru hogayi, tujhe in adh-maray logon men interest kyun hai, see I m having shivers running down my spine, yaar tum log bhi na"

Gulaal: "Bulbul dekh its really interesting n wese bhi yeh sab sach nahi hota yaar, these r just stories, aaj ki fast paced life men u r believing on these fictional stories? Come on yaar, I m sure is museum ki story k peechay koi planning hai, mujhay toh government involvement bhi lagti hai is sab men"

Dhani: "Haan gulaal ho bhi sakta hai per I was just wondering what if it would have been true, wow na, kitna acha lagta, I mean socho guys, vampires, I mean just imagine yaar, VAMPIRES !!! n if woh hum hotay jo in ko dunya k saamnay laatay, hamara toh har jagah naam ho jaata, news paper men media men, har jagah"

Bulbul: "Haan aur log door door se tujh se autograph lene atay k madam aap vampires k beech se apni gardan bacha k kaisi le ayeen, tu super woman ban jaati n phir aik din tu stairs utar rahi hoti n bed se gir jaati aur tujhe pata chala, ouch yeh toh sapna tha hahahahha"

Dhani made an irritated face at bulbul while gulaal was thinking about something.

Dhani: "Ise chor gulaal, tu meri baat sun, next week college trip pe toh chal rahi hai na" she said excitedly.

Gulaal: "No yar, what vl I do there, trips etc men kya junglon men ghoomte raho n picnic karo"

Bulbul: "Tu bohot boring hai gulaal, itni alag kyun hai tu, aisay hi rahi toh tujhe kesay milay ga koi husband, koi aisa jo tujhe bohot pyar kare, mujhay toh lagta hai tere liye kisi aisay ko ana paray ga jo teri hi tarah bilkul alag ho, sab se alag, hum sab se different"

Dhani: "Aray haan, see gulaal kya pata tera prince charming tujhe yaheen kahin mil jaaye"

Gulaal: "Shut up guys, aur kaam karo, prince charming, aisay thori mil jatay hen prince charming rah chaltay aur wese bhi I have some plan in my mind, bohot hogayi research on things, ab zara museum ki reality pe research kar li jaye"

Bulbul n Dhani looked at her questioningly while gulaal kept smiling.

In Choudhry Mansion:

Durgesh: "Chander !! kesar aur kunal ko bulao"

After some time...

Kunal: "Aap ne hamen bulaya"

Durgesh: "Haan, hamen us museum k baray men kuch baat karni hai"

Kesar looked at durgesh.

Durgesh: "Kesar... hum chahtay hen tum log aaj jaa kar museum ko check kar k ao, hamari sab belongings wahan theek toh hen na, hamari existence k saboot wahan per hen, hum chahtay hen jesay aaj tak hum ne hamari dunya ko sab se chupa k rakha, yeh ab bhi isi tarah chupi rahay, log hamen insaan samajhtay hen, acha hai, samjhtay rahen, aur tum log bhi is baat ka khaas khayal rakhna k kisi ko shak na ho"

Kesar was having a disinterested look on his face while kunal knew this so he quickly replied: "Hum is baat ka khayal rakhen ge, ap chinta mat karen"

Durgesh: "Aur haan, aaj raat ki meeting k liye tayari karlo, is sheher men exist karne k liye ab hamen kuch aur plans banane honge"

Kesar n kunal nodded n left the room.

Kunal: "Kesar ab toh maan le is baat ko dil se k yehi hamari dunya hai aur hamen is k saath hi rehna hai, hum kuch nahi kar saktay warna hamare liye khatra paida hojayega"

Kesar: "Haan haan janta hoon sab !! kar toh raha hoon koshish !! usay bhulanay ki !! ab aur kya karoon main !! hazaron saal jise maine chaha hai, usay kuch hi dino men kaisay bhool jaoon"

Kunal: "Haan daikha hum ne, khud ko khatam kar k bhulana chahta tha usay, woh toh acha hua kamlesh ne hamen bata diya warna pata nahi tu kya kar chuka hota"

Kesar: "Toh main kya karoon kunal, kesay? Kesay bhool jaoon? Jab pandit ji ne kaha tha k woh haar kisi larki k galay men daikha unho ne, phir aik din us ki tasveer banwa k le aye, jis din se usay daikha aisa laga jaisay us se meri kismat juri hai, baar baar who tasveer mujhay apni taraf bulaati rahi, pukaarti rahi, kheenchti rahi mujhay apni aur, main na chahtay huay bhi roz us tasveer ko dekhne laga, mera dil chahne laga k main us se mil sakoon lekin jaanta tha k who toh us waqt thi bhi nahi kahin, phir bhi mera dil usay chahne laga, mujhay pata hai in baton ka koi matlab nahi lekin dil ne kisi ki suni kab hai, woh pehli aisi larki hai kunal jese dekh k mujhay woh apni si lagi, mera dil kiya k main us ka intezaar karoon, us se baat karoon, phir jab kismat ne mujhay is adhmaray insaan k roop men la khara kiya tab laga k shayad main us se mil paoon ga, meri zindagi shayad us k roop men wapas milegi mujhay kyun k ab wohi meri zindagi hai, haan yeh pagal pan hai, aik tasveer ko dekh kar aik aisi larki se mohabbat karna jo hamare samne bhi na ho, lekin main kya karoon main usay chahnay se khud ko nahi rok sakta, us men kuch toh aisa hai jo mujhay apni taraf kheenchta hai, mujhay aj bhi lagta hai woh ayegi, woh zaroor ayegi..."

Kunal looked at kesar with sorrow in his eyes n looked at his room door where he knew that the small room existed where the portrate of that girl was placed n that room had been kesar's world for many years now.

Kunal: "Kesar... Theek hai ab chal" n unwillingly, kesar left with kunal for the museum.

At night (Outside the museum):

Dhani: "Gulaal tujhe poora yaqeen hai yeh sahi faisla hai? Daikh kahin hum kisi musibat men na phans jayen"

Bulbul: "Haan gulaal, mujhay toh bohot dar lag raha hai"

Gulaal: "Don't worry guys kuch nahi hoga, I m sure yahan kuch plannings hi chal rahi hen, wohi toh patana lagana hai k akhir kon hen woh log jo sab ko is museum se door rakhna chahte hen, ab chalo"

N they quietly jumped through the museum wall n nearly reached the main door. The guard was fast asleep sitting there n there was nobody around. It was 10 pm so the area was quiet. There were no lights in the museum n it was dark all around with wind blowing now n then. It was a bit cold n the girls wore there cardigans n jackets but still they shivered.

Bulbul: "Gulaal hum..."

Gulaal: "Shhh..."

Gulaal n dhani looked here n there to confirm that nobody was around n then the three started moving towards the door while bulbul was really afraid now. They took out their torches from their backpacks n held them in their hands. Very quietly, the three of them opened the door n entered in the museum.

In the basement of the museum:

A meeting was going on with the members of the clan.

"Sir lagta hai koi ander aya hai"

Durgesh: "Haan hamen bhi lag raha hai, shayad guard hoga, hum apni meeting continue karte hen per everyone should be alert"

Kesar had started to feel some what restless now, he didn't know the reason for it but it seemed like something was pulling him towards it.

The museum area:

"Ab hum kahan jayen gulaal? I think v should split up n search" said dhani while lighting the torch.

Bulbul :"Split up !! pagal hogayi hai kya, tu chahti hai main dar se behosh ho jaoon!" she whispered this to gulaal n dhani.

Gulaal: "Hum saath hi chalte hen, lets see there, n yahan k top floor pe bhi hum kitni baar jaa chukar hen, basement men kabhi nahi gaye, whats say? Wahan chalen pehlay?"

Dhani: "Gulaal pehlay yahan hi koi clue dhoondne ki koshish karte hen"

Gulaal: "Alright, chalo" n three of them started searching for some clue or evidence which could help them reveal that what was going on there.

It had been half n hour n they were unable to find any clue n just then dhani's jacket got stuck in some nail n bulbul also stopped to help her to free her jacket. Gulaal was not aware of this n she kept on making her search n in the mean while she found herself standing in front of a door.

She wondered to herself that this door might be leading towards the basement.

"Hmmm kabhi bhi koi gang agar work kar raha ho ya koi racket ho toh who log basements etc men hi kaam kartay hen, hmmm yahan ja k daikhna chahiye" n then she said in a low voice, "Dhani, Bulbul, tum dono bhi mere peeche ao per awaaz nahi karna" n with that she quietly opened the door n put her foot inside.

Suddenly kesar felt something very odd. He was not able to figure out what it was when all the members started feeling uneasy n frowned because everybody had now understood that somebody has entered the basement area. The meeting was stopped n anger started to be seen in the clan's eyes n their determination to get rid of the person who tried to interfere in their world.

Hey friends, sorry for this maha stupid chapter pata nahi u guys vl like it or not per i m ready for shoes n sandals now 😳

Edited by kiran_trudecent - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very itnteresting kiran...

so kesar can recognize gulaal ..courtesy:the portrait ?

i loved cute talks of dhaani and bulbul...

waiting for the moment when kesar will meet gulaal..update fast
Edited by nneeiill - 13 years ago

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