OS: Red Sari for Khushi Arnav Singh Raizada

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AnnieARS

@AnnieARS

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#21

Oh wow!!! I simply loved it!!!

very beautiful piece of writing...

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Kookiemonster

@Kookiemonster

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#22

OMG..it was so freaking awesome. With each Arnav;s memory of khushi i felt like i was reliving them with him... u really are a talented writer.

please continue if u can i need more dose of arhi to survive this weekend.

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sun_shine_girl

@sun_shine_girl

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+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#23

So beautiful Smita...Loved it. Do continue pls.

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vasiraju

@vasiraju

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

Heya Smitha dear🤗..its been a long time we meet😉..Loved loved your OS dear.i simply remembered the beautiful moments you mentioned as FB's lovely comparison with colors and FB's.your OS just remembered MB style of novels😆 ..exactly they do similar things with thier girl😉 Dominating but yet loving😛.

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Tanya

@-Sarunforever-

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

wow i luvd da silent confession of arnav

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princezsafa

@princezsafa

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#26

Mannn, I've lost hope of love from the serial. I still like it, no doubt. But I wonder when fate winds back love :( your OS is absolutely amazing. Makes me want to dream. But I wonder if this could happen? Can it? Or does it just stay like a dream?

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smitar

@smitar

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+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: princezsafa
Mannn, I've lost hope of love from the serial. I still like it, no doubt. But I wonder when fate winds back love :( your OS is absolutely amazing. Makes me want to dream. But I wonder if this could happen? Can it? Or does it just stay like a dream?

I think the CVs will give us scenes that are more romantic than the ones I have penned😉. But looks like we will have to wait for a couple of weeks!😆

Edited by smitar - 13 years ago

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pc17

@pc17

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+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#28

I love all your work and this is no exception. Amazing!

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Prathima

@prathikri

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#29

Thanks for the PM Smita 😛
Lovely i must say.. he thinks of buying her dresses & having FB in between.. just loved it..

Wish he does something like this😍

Edited by prathikri - 13 years ago