Have read ur ff and I have to say I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT!
Love the characterisation of khushi and arnav. Arnav's character is so caring and its great how he's trying his best to make khushi comfortable. Khushi's attitude is great, she doesn't let things keep her down for too long.
Love the funny parts, like in chapter 7 when Aranav pushes her off the bed that was so funny and when he teases her about working with him! Their moments together are amazing!
I like how you've made it intense yet sometimes light hearted and funny. Keep up the great work and can't wait to read more :D
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