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*thinks of what to say* I'm just profoundly speechless !
This is just ... so .. so... beautiful, ... would be such an understatement !
LOOOVEEDDD IT WOMAN ! :D like aaah.. *hugs* this was super duper mindbogglingly, romantically awe striking...
I deff. didn't expect such a romantic update... and it was beyond my wildest expectations... My Fav. update 'till date that just made me fall deeply in love with the update , and Arnav... ah ! what a charmer ! :D
exceptionally loved the way you carried out the rain scene so flawlessly, and gah ! making them drench in rain was just hottness and beauty personified.. I could so picture that.
Arnav's naughty persona and poor Khushi dying out of embarrassment... just 'adorable!'
PS; thanks a tons for updating so quickly, and aaah ! you're extending the rain scene ? it just makes me, just the more ecstatic and savoring my love for such a simplistically portrayed, yet- making- me- go- all- 'dhak dhak'-, romance presented impeccably.
Just a thought, I certainly need you as my tutor to write so exceptionally well ! ;D
Awh, I'm so impatient, yet fri/sat seem so far away, but I can't wait for the next ! xx GL ! <3
Edited by hilly - 12 years ago
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