IPKKND FF: Perfection (Chap 19 Pg 146) UPDATE 3/26 - Page 2

anumber1

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Posted: 12 years ago

PM'd instead. Edited by anumber1 - 12 years ago

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incandescent

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Posted: 12 years ago

Oh dear !! So tragic.

Very well written.

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dingle

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Posted: 12 years ago

Thanks for commenting! I've thought out a story line where he might not be QUITE the monster he seems to be initially in this OS, and even a potential redemption scenario, because like you, I love a good GOOD grovel.Depends on the demand for a continuing story line I guess, because most of us will have enough to do dealing with the next 2 weeks' worth of on-screen angst !!

If you write it I'll read it. 😃. Its a very interesting concept and Id like to know if he feels remorse for what he did to her. He's no better than Shyam... so a big angsty grovelling scene please 😛

Lets not talk about the forthcoming angst in the show - Im looking forward to it cos there'll be a rainbow or atleast a romantic scene at the end. But the forum atmosphere is like a funeral. 😆

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oh.petite.one

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: napstermonster

Thanks for commenting! I've thought out a story line where he might not be QUITE the monster he seems to be initially in this OS, and even a potential redemption scenario, because like you, I love a good GOOD grovel.Depends on the demand for a continuing story line I guess, because most of us will have enough to do dealing with the next 2 weeks' worth of on-screen angst !!

wonderfully written, but I sure hope something like this doesn't happen on the show :O

would love to read a continuation of this :)))

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Aisha

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Posted: 12 years ago

Hey naper...would love it if u continue 😊

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showstruck

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Posted: 12 years ago

Nice one but keep going, so we see changed arnav

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Priya

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Posted: 12 years ago

Poor Khushi!!! Well written though :) Well done...xx

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neverbefore

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Posted: 12 years ago

😲 A grovel is definitely in order!! 😃

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princessnida

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Posted: 12 years ago

This gave me shivers! You captured ASR's wrath for Khushi perfectly!!!!!

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starstuff

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Posted: 12 years ago

aaahh... sad and yet so powerful! well written! i hope he learns the truth soon, because along with hurting khushi, he's hurting himself too 😔 (can't wait for your next write up!!)

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