OS: Unveiled

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Posted: 11 years ago

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AquaBluez17 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Lol I had to read it again. For old times sake

Well I don't know if I will be reading this as a bed time story... I think if you add some Shyam music then I mite just listen to the song as a lullaby and then read this again n again Hint hint!

Overall I love this OS and you know that

NK just realized that he had a small boy crush. Shyam realized that money money moneyyy!! <-- Money means the world Its okay if I had all the money in the world I would buy myself loads n loads of blue things Maybe tht blue kutra tht Shyam was wearing and then like seal case it to my wall... Now thats an idea!

Ur welcome for the title!

and I know this might not work but...

UPDATE YOUR FF'S NOWWW

NOWWW

NOWWW
NOWWW
NOWWW

NOWWW

Did I mention? I would love an update of your FF's like now

And noo you don't get anything in reture hahah!

Edited by AquaBluez17 - 11 years ago

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647669 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

Aww this was such a sweet and emotional os
shyams such a creep
nk realised his crush was nothing
im glad arnav stayed with her maybe you could put another part where she's had her treatment done and comes back?
And woman update your ff!

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LyssaPie IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 11 years ago

Wow that was amazing. Shaym only cared about her face ergh. NK isn't strong enough. And Arnav's bit had me in tears! Well done

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moonlight99 Senior Member

Posted: 11 years ago

Oh my god !! This was such a bittersweet story!! Love you for writing this!!

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SunriseGreen IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

That was beautiful! I loved how you incorporated all three mens' points of view. Saala Shyamu ki toh main... ugh. LOL. I can't blame NK since all he felt for Khushi was a crush. Arnav's love is the best thing that could've happened to Khushi :)

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