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glamourbird

@glamourbird

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

What can I say?? I am absolutely speechless!! That was an awesome piece of writing!!👏👏

Loved how u showed the reactions of all the three men...Shyam & Nk disgust me!! For them beauty is everything... they seriously don't deserve Khushi...😡😡

Where as on the other hand, Arnav was such a sweetheart... he stood by her like a rock!! When everyone changed, he didn't!! He made sure he will marry her before n then he will take her away to get the best treatment! yet just her being with him was the most important!!😳😳

Beautifully protayed emotions!!😃

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YPNHK_kiFANno.1

@YPNHK_kiFANno.1

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Wow! So emotional and heartbreaking! An OS full of feeling! 👏

Edited by YPNHK_kiFANno.1 - 13 years ago

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farheen75

@farheen75

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

very touching and u have written it beautifully.

one humble request plz update your ff his gardening and her jalebis.

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Varsha

@Psychedelic

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

That was so well written.. The portrayal of difference between skin deep affection and true love to last through ups and downs.. So beautifully done! 👏

And yes.. Please do update your other ff as well! 😊

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

awesome that was so perfectly written and in characteristic of each person well written loved it

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rukuswasthika

@rukuswasthika

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

arnav would always be the best suitor for khushi.he loves khushi's heart and not face.this has been proved by your os.i loved it😊

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Aisha

@.Aisha.

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Well done👍🏼It was wonderfully written... Hat's off to you!

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667300

Suspended

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

This was really emotional and I like how you showed the contrast between the three guys.

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Asma

@anjaani07

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Really enjoyed reading that, Arnav's part was so emotional and i know if it was to happen, he'd be right there just like u wrote.

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arshia

@ashvez

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#20

That was beautiful.Arnav - Rock solid support of Khushi.I rejoiced the way NK accepted his school boy crush.Shyam...well let it be..the sleazy slime all.

Lovely OS!! Welcome back...it's been long since u penned.

Ash.

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