SS - True Redemption! Updtd Part4 Pg8 - 26th Feb - Page 4

Originally posted by: sks21

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Just read all three parts ... great to see him realising his love for her but he has an uphill task ahead of him. How will he make her accept him as she is maintaining her distance?

Very interesting story you have here! I really enjoyed reading this :) Can't wait to see more such tender moments between Aham and Gopi.

Cheers!
Naina

Hey Shruti...liked both the parts...Ahem realised his mistake & now is on a mission to woo his wife ...& Gopi is far from knowing...What will be his next step??? Edited by navyab - 12 years ago

Loved it , this is wot I like to see in sns where he is doing all the running . I am so taken by ur naughty and flirting ahem . You ended with a cliff hanger I am most eager to read ur next update. Well written shruti

Shruti!😃

Hm Shruthi.. brilliant update.. Stroy is very Cute and Sweet after all it is Ahemji started caring his wife, why it wouldn't be?

Very nice.Loved the pallu scene and the shopping thing. Both could happen in the real show I feel. 

Hey Shruti, thanks for the PM, I just read all the parts, I really love your story.

My favorite line:And if one would look at him, he actually looked as nervous as a straight man in a gay bar. I couldn't help but laugh because this is exactly how I would picture him, as a matter of fact we have seen this look on him lately.

Please update soon, can't wait to read what happens next.

love it to bits pls update soon