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Posted: 18 years ago
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GR88888 Story Jasmine πŸ‘
continuee soooon dear
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Posted: 18 years ago
#52
hay kya yaar......kashish in mental hospital......aur plzzzzzzzzzzz he killed piyush not sujallllllllll
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Part-17....AGAIN BACK 2 PAST

                          Piyush:I'll get Tia back.she's my daughter & I'll get
                          it at any cost.4 that I'll do anything.
                          Kashish screams:no
                          Sujal:Tia is not ur daughter.she's my daughter.
                          P:its very easy 2 tell that.but u can't 4get blood.
                          K:one cant simply become a father thru blood relation.
                          P:do u think I'll not luv Tia?
                          K stares at him.   P:I can luv her more than ur hubby
                          sujal.
                          K: shut up.I'm Tia's mom.i'l decide who her father is.
                          P:kashish,u r in a dreamworld.i assure u that I'l luv U &
                          Tia more than sujal.
                          S is stunned.
                          K:its very easy 4 u 2 tell.no 1 can luv easily.u cant
                          beat sujal in luv.u r nothing b4 garv in case of luv.
                          P controls his anger:now I'm going.but I'll take my
                          daughter,also u.
                          S-K-Esha r shocked.Ks goes.K cries & runs 2 her room.S
                          goes there.He sees K kissing Tia.
                          K throws away the doll given by P with anger.It falls
                          on S's feet.
                          T:what did u do mama?my sweet doll..
                          Tia is about 2 cry. K:sweet doll?its an ugly doll.don't
                          accept anything given by that devil.i'l destory that
                          doll.
                          T starts crying.
                          Feels sad & gives that doll 2 Tia:u play with this doll
                          T smiles:thanku papa
                          T runs away with the doll. K:gsujal,what did u do?
                          S:kashish,ur anger shud'nt b with that doll.it'll hurt our
                          innocent child.
                          K keeps silent. S:kashish,don't u feel like going back 2
                          piyush?
                          K is shocked:sujal?
                          S:I mean…piyush is ur child's dad.so…
                          K loses her control:what DID U SAY?TELL sujal.how dare u
                          talk like this?
                          S becomes upset. K:don't u think I & tia r a burden 2 u?

                          S:what r u saying kashish?I can't liv without u both.but I
                          was tensed whether I'l lose u both.
                          K:I can't liv without u & tia..
                          K hugs S.she cries:plz don't leave us sujal.plz …
                          S weeps.

                          Piyush files 2 get Tia back.S-K r shocked.
                          S consoles her:don't worry,we'll win.we won't lose tia.

                          P meets psyciatrist Swayam;his friend who came from
                          US.   P:I need ur help,I want kashish too along with
                          Tia.u shud make sujal believe that kashishis abnormal.sujal
                          wil desert kashish & I'll get her.
                          T smiles:ok.   P laughs.

                          Sujal is alone at home as K & E hav gone 2 Tia's
                          school.Callling bell rings.S opens the door.it was
                          Sawayam with a smiling face.
                          Swa:if I'm not wrong,u r sujal.kashish's hubby.rite?
                          S was wondered:how du u no me?u no kashish?
                          Sw:u r rite.i no kashish.
                          S:ok,cum inside.
                          SW gets inside:where is kashish?
                          S:she has gone out.
                          Sw thinks:I no that.that's why I came here.
                          S:u were kashish's classmate in US?
                          Sw:no,I'm kashish's doctor.she was under my psyciatrist
                          treatment.
                          S is shocked.

                          DO U THINK SWAYAM IS LYING?
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Posted: 18 years ago
#54
nice part...ur story z pretty kewllll...keep it up....
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Posted: 18 years ago
#55
jasmine what a past life history......yeh kya ab yeh piyush kya kum tha ki ab us tarzan swayam ko bhi le aayi ho........ 🀒
aur yeh   kya ab kya sujal us swayam ki baat par yakeen karega...... 😑 plz let sujal not believe that tarzan..... 😊 πŸ˜› πŸ˜ƒ mere hisaab se woh swayam jhoot bol raha hain... 😑
kashish ne sahi kaha tia ko sujal se zyada pyaar koi nahi kar saktha woh piyush bhi nahi....
😊
plz sujal , kashish ko milwao....aur tia ko unke saath rakho.............. πŸ˜‰
agla part jaldi likhna.................. 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#56
hey jasmine gr8 gng.... πŸ‘ nice twists... πŸ˜‰
but this is toooo much swayam???? 😑 πŸ˜•
nywys cont soon dear... 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part-18....Swayam:u no..kashish had 2 go thru severe
                          sufferings in life & thus she was gling out of track.she
                          even used 2 become violent.
                          Sujal:no    Sw:I understand ur feelings.every husband is
                          lyk this.
                          S:if so,kashish wud've told me.
                          Sw:4 that kashishdoes'nt no about this.bcoz she was not
                          normal at that time.she may not b ABLE 2 remember
                          anything
                          Kashish,esha & tia cum.K stares at Sw.
                          S:this is….
                          S does'nt no how 2 introduce T.
                          Sw:I'm Dr.Swayam;Sujal's friend.
                          S smiles. K keeps staring at sw. S:kashish,go & giv tia sum
                          food.mama..u too.
                          E:ok   K keeps looking at Sw while going.
                          Sw:sujal..is kashish having any particular tension now?
                          S thinks:how can I tell that kashish is tensed about
                          piyush,case & tia
                          Sw:I feel so,as I can see kashish becoming like b4
                          S:what do u mean?
Sw:yes sujal.i'm a Dr.i can recognize patients.
                          S:u r going 2 say that kashish is…?
                          Sw:relax.u see,kashish was an interesting patient.i mean I
                          used 2 giv a special attention 2 kashish.bcoz she was very
                          special & diff from other patients.that's why I came 2
                          see her.otherwise why shud a DR care about a patient who
                          has already gone.i want kashish 2 b ok.
                          S:so?     Sw:u plz bring kashish 2 my hospital.let me
                          check.let me see how her condition is
                          S becomes angry:enuf Dr
                          Sw:I'm not forcing u.but u miust understand that it's a
                          disease that shud b treated in the beginning
                          itself.otherwise u can guess what wil happen.u might
                          even lose ur wife.can u think about a life without ur
                          life?
                          It touches S's mind.Sw goes.

                          Sw observes K.K was talking alone in the room:no,I won't
                          allow
                          S goes out with tears:oh god,whats this?
                          K tells herself:no,I shud'nt allow him 2 take my
                          daughter
                          S goes near her:kashish,u r tensed & tired.we'l see a dr.
                          K:4 such a silly thing?
                          S:yes,u'l b fresh
                          K:no sujal      S:no kashish,u'v 2
                          K:ok.sujal,is that swayam ur friend itself?
                          S becomes dull:why?
                          K:bcoz u'vent told me about him
                          S:I 4got.i'm going 2 take u 2 him   K:ok,ur wish

                          K thinks:why do I feel that I've seen swayam b4?no
                          chance.but still…
                          SW thinks:kashish was staring at me.but I think she
                          does'nt remember me.once she has seen me with
                          piyush.that's all.

                          Sujal-kash enter swayam's room. SW:hi,whats the problem?
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Posted: 18 years ago
#58
hey jasmine... tho sujal ne us swayam ki baat maan hi li.......God........... 😑 kya kashish ki yaadasht itni kharab hain ki she can't remember the person whom she has met before... 🀒 ab swayam kashish ke saath kya karega.. kya swayam kashish ko shock   treatment de kar usse pagal bana dega.... 😭 aur in sab mein sujal ka kya hoga aur tia pe kya beethe gi... 😭
plz agli part jaldi likhna... πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 18 years ago
#59
Part-19....Sujal:kashish feels tired.
                          Swayam:ok,sujal,u plz go out.let me check
                          Kashish feels weird:why cant sujal sit here
                          S:kashish,I'l sit outside.don't worry
                          S goes out.Sw smiles.   Sw:don't worry kashish.i'l giv u a
                          medicine.u'l b fresh.
                          Sw takes a picture of a flower.Sw:how is it?    K:very
                          beautiful flower
                          Sw smiles:ya,u can go.call sujal inside
                          K goes out. K:sujal,nothing was there.he showed me a
                          picture of flower.
                          S smiles.

                          S goes inside.S:is she ok?    Sw:sorry sujal,like I
                          doubted,kashish's condition is going worse.    S was
                          shocked. Sw shows the picture of a camel:seeing this
                          picture she says it's a flower.
                          S remembers K telling him about the picture of the
                          flower.S becomes upset.
                          Sw:I'l giv u a medicine.lets see
                          Sw gives him medicine.S-K go.
                          SW has an evil medicine:this medicine wil slowly make
                          kashish half crack.

                          S:hav this medicine kashish
                          K:but I don't like medicines
                          S:but u've 2.u r tired.
                          S feeds her medicine.K was so tired that she goes 2
                          sleep.she was talking unclear words 2 herself.S becomes
                          upset:kashish is becoming worse than b4.oh god!

                          Piyush goes 2 see Tia in the school:don't u remember
                          me?
                          T:ya,the uncle u gav a pretty doll
                          P:I'm not uncle,I'm ur dad.
                          Tia is shocked:dad?    P:yes
                          Sujal who cums there 2 pick up her sees this & goes
                          angry:Tia,don't talk 2 strangers.
                          P:I'm not a stranger,I'm her dad
                          S:that court wil decide.only after that u'l b her dad.
                          P:ok,but thT DAY wil surely cum.it's a challege
                          S:it'l remain as a dream

                          S-T in the car. T:is it true that he's my dad?then why r
                          u not allowing me 2 b close 2 him?he is lovable no
                          S was shocked.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#60
hi jasmine nice parts... πŸ‘ πŸ‘
gud gng... 😊