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Posted: 18 years ago
#31
samajh nahi a raha kya likhoon...........
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Posted: 18 years ago
#32
hey jasmine.. such a tragic part.... 😭 aur sujal.. woh aise kaise kar saktha hain.. sujal hamesha saamne se waar kartha hain na tho phir woh kashish se yeh sachchayi kyun chupa   raha hain ki woh sab kuch jaantha hain.. very bad........ 😑 hey u know what i think   kashish has been raped by somebody & she has a chlid.......what do u think ??? πŸ˜† plz sujal , kashish ko ek karo aur uske bachche ko bhi theek rakhna.........plzzzzzzzzz... 😊 πŸ˜›
write the next part soon... 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#33
   Part-11....Kashish is in a serious condition.i don't think
                          I can save both kashish& the baby.sujal,listen carefully.u
                          can hav more children.but ur wife is sum1 who shud b
                          there till the end of ur life.now choose whom do u want?

                          Sujal:save my baby.
                          Abhay-kusum r shocked. T:r u sure?   S:sure,no doubt.
                          A-K cry.S goes out.t becomes upset.

                          Kusum sits near kashish with sad eyes. K:mama,sujal is
                          loving & caring.
                          Kusum becomes sad.she thinks:poor kashish does'nt no whats
                          there in sujal's mind.
                          K:tho he knows about my past he loves me so much
                          Kusum bursts into tears. K:why r u crying mama?
                          Ku:I'm sorry kashish.i lied 2 u that v hav told sujal
                          everything about u. we did'nt tell him anything.
                          K is shocked:what?sujal does'nt no anything.he married me
                          without knowing my dark past?u cheated on me &
                          sujal.unknowingly I cheated on that nice person.
                          K cries:god wil never 4giv me.
                          Ku:its 4 ur gud future I lied 2 u.
                          K:what future mama?4 cheating that innocent person,do u
                          think god wil giv me a gud future?my life is finished.
                          Ku:kashish!   K turns back:mama,u plz go now.   Ku:kashish!
                            K:plz go..
                          Ku goes with tears.     

                          Sujal cums.K looks at him with tears. S:what happened?
                          K holds his hand & cries. S did'nt understand anything.
                          K:my parents cheated on me.
                          S is wondered:what?
                          K:sujal,I've a dark past.i want 2 tell u
                          everything .otherwise my heart wil break & I'll die.
                          S is stunned.

                          K:when we were in Us,I was alone.he came 2 comfort me
                          with a cheerful face.like me he was also emotional.very
                          soft.he gave me valuable frienship.He supported me in
                          everything .he is….
                          S listens carefully 2 no his name.

                          WHO IS HE?

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Posted: 18 years ago
#34
hmmmmmm jasmnine atlast kashish ko patah chal hi gaya ki sujal ko sachchayi ka patah nahi tha.. good..very good...ab saari problems aur tension durr bhaag jayegi aur sujal ,kashish phir se ek ho jayenge.... πŸ˜†   jasmine how can sujal be so mean woh kaise keh saktha hain ki usse uska bachche ko bachchana hain aur kashish ko nahi..... 😭 par ab shayad sujal ko apni ghalthi ka ehsaas ho aur woh kashish ke pass lout aaye... πŸ˜‰ waise who is the person whom kashish has a kid with..hmm me thinking........... 😊 πŸ˜ƒ
plz sujal , kashish ko hamesha ek saath rakhna.. aur bachche ko bhi theek rakhna.... 😊 πŸ˜› πŸ˜ƒ
& ya plz continue soon............ 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#35
hay jasmine gr8 gng... πŸ‘ gr8 parts... πŸ‘
really good twist... πŸ˜‰ but i knw sujal will not take revenge.... πŸ˜› he is too good to do that..πŸ˜‰
and as it is he loves her so much..... 😊
plz cont soon.... 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#36
jasmine dear plz continue na.. me eagerly waiting to know what will happen......... πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 18 years ago
#37
sujal ,kashish phir se ek ho jayenge........yupiiiii πŸ˜†
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Posted: 18 years ago
#38
PART-12

                             Kashish weeps:the person who came as a gud friend 2 my
                             life is Piyush.he was very sweet 2 me.i even wondered
                             whether a Us born boy can b like this.tho I liked him
                             very much,it never turned into luv.but piyush thought
                             differently about me.
                             Once K,P were under a tree. K:what do u want 2
                             tell me?
                             P:I want 2 tell u that…
                             Unexpectedly P hugs her tightly.K was
                             shocked:piyush,wha ts this?leave me plz
                             P looses his hand. K becomes angry & slaps him:how dare
                             u?
                             P :don't u luv me?
                             K:no,u r my friend.
                             P:I 'm sorry kashish.i thot u luv me.
                             P kneels down:plz kashish,don't b angry & break our
                             frienship.
                             K:ok

                             K goes 2 his house.she gets inside the open door &
                             enters P' room.she sees drugs in his room:piyush takes
                             drug?
P cums.his eyes were dim. K:u take drugs?
                             P :ya,so what?
                             K :I never thot that u r this sort of a guy.
                             K was angry & she begins 2 go out.P grabs her hand:u
                             can't go out wounding my heart.
                             K :leave my hand.
                             P :2 leave ur hand?   P laughs:I won't leave u.
                             K gets scared seeing P' eyes.K faints.

                             K weeps:I don't remember anything else sujal.i did'nt
                             see piyush when I opened my eyes.he did'nt cum 2
                             college also.later unexpectedly I realized that I'm
                             pregnant.i was shattered when I relised what happened
                             when I was unconscious.i wanted 2 die.but my parents'
                             tears made me not 2 do that crime.my parents searched 4
                             piyush.but later was known that he's in jail due 2 sum
                             drug case.i cud'nt think of an abortion,bcoz what did
                             that innocent baby do?I gave b'th 2 a baby.my parents
                             tried 2 giv it 2 an orphanage.but I did'nt want my baby
                             2 liv as an orphan while her mother is alive.but my
                             parents gave it 2 an orphanage.but I tolerated it when a
                             childless cuple Rishi-mouli in US adopted my baby.when ur
                             proposal came,I rejected it as I did'nt want 2 cheat
                             u.but my parents told that rishi is ur cusin,if I marry
                             u I 'l get a chance 2 see my daughter.but still I cud'nt
                             think of a marriage.but my parents lied 2 me that
                             they've told u the truth about me.that's how I agreed 2
                             marry u.but now my mama revealed that they'vent told u
                             anything.i was shocked 2 no that I was cheating on my
                             husband who loves me more than his life.but belive me
                             sujal,I did'nt cheat u knowingly.i'm willing 2 punish
                             myself.my mind tells that I won't liv after this
                             delivery.
                             S is shocked.he thinks about tashu's words & his reply 2
                             save only the baby.S's eyes get filled up with tears. S
                             think s:I misunderstood my loving kashish.god,plz 4giv me.
                             K :but I'm not sad even if I die as I don't deserve u.i'm
                             happy 2 die,bcoz I'm sure that u'l look after our baby
                             well.i wanted 2 tell u everything b4 I die.i cud.now I
                             can die.but tell me once that u've 4given me.
                             S bursts into tears & hugs kashish:u hav'nt cheated me
                             kashish.nothing wil happen 2 u.i won't allow anything bad
                             2 happen 2 u while I'm aliveEdited by jasminerahul - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#39
jasmine yaar just tooo goodd... πŸ‘ sujal , kashish phir se ek ho gaye yipeeeeee... πŸ˜† hmm tho ab yeh piyush kahaan hain.. 😑 mujhe tho lagtha hain ab sujal , piyush ko dhoondkar uski baand bajayega mazaa aa jayega..... πŸ˜› sujal , kashish tho phir se saath ho gaye that's really very damn cooll.. sujal ,kashish hamesha saath mein achche lagtha hain judaa nahii... 😳 aur ab jab sujal ,kashish ke saath hain tho kashish ko kuch nahi hoga... πŸ˜†
plz continue soon... 😊 πŸ˜›
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Posted: 18 years ago
#40
jasmine dear just superb.... πŸ‘ πŸ‘
too good yaar...... πŸ˜› lovely part.... πŸ‘
cont soon dear..... 😊