Dhadkan-Sujal-Kashish

Part-1...Sujal is looking at the photo of kashish. S:I
                          can't 4get my 1st meeting with u.
                          S recalls.K cums 2 S's office 4 interview.S cud'nt
                          take eyes ff her.It was luv at 1st site.S goes & asks her dad
                          Abhay:I wud like 2 marry kashish?will u plz conduct our
                          wedding?
                          A was surprised.
                          S:finally that day has cum.2day we'll get married.
                          S smiles.
                          Kashish has dressed up like a bride.K weeps in her house.
                          K:I feel that I'm doing a mistake.
                        Her mom Kusum:no,don't b guilty.we've told everything 2 sujal.but
                          promise that u'll never talk about this 2 sujal.
                          K:ok mama,bcozs I want 2 4get my past.but I doubt
                          whether I can luv sujal.still I don't feel like marrying
                          him.
                          Kusum becomes upset:u've 2 luv sujal beti.he's such a
                          nice guy.
                          K's eyes r full of tears.
                          Kusum goes near Abhay:abhay,I lied 2 kashish that we've
                          told everything 2 sujal.that's how she agreed 4 this
                          marriage.if sujal cums 2 no everything what'll b kashish's
                          future?
                          A becomes upset:lets hope 4 the best.

                          Kashish -sujal enter the mandap.they get married. K's mind
                          was full of pain.song:Dhadkan…{Dhadkan}

                          K is sitting inside the decorated bedroom.S
                          enters.K gets tensed.

that was really good
i hope the next part is as good as the first
im really lookin forward to know what is kashish's past which sujal doesnt know. 😊 😊 😊
continue soon

nice part...continue soon....da story seemz awsummm....

hey jasmine... 😊
tumne naya fanfic shuru kiya.. good... 😃
aur is fanfic ke baare mein main kya karoon it was coollllll like all your other stories... 👏
par yeh kya ab yeh kashish ka ateet kaun hain.. 🤢
aur agar ab kashish ne sujal ko rulaya ya dhuk pohanch chaya tho main us kashish ko main... 😡
aur haan us ateet ko kashish aur sujal ki zindagi se durr hi rakho.. 😆
aur haan kashish ko tho kissi bhi cheez ki fikhar honi hi nahi chahiye kyunke sujal ek aisa shaks hain jisse agar hum na chahe bhi pyaar kar hi baith the hain.. 😳
kyun kya kehthi ho ?? 😉
plz agli part jaldi likhna........... me  waiting...😛 
Edited by sun_423 - 18 years ago

Part-2..Sujal smiles at kashish.K did'nt smile properly.
                          S:kashish,2day my dream came true.i was waiting 2 get u.i
                          just can't believe that now u r mine.only mine.
                          K becomes upset. S:u no what I felt when I saw u 1st?u r
                          my wife.that's why did'nt employ u there.what did u feel
                          when u saw me 1st?
                          K was speechless. S:I no that u also felt the same.
                          K becomes upset.K thinks:eventho he nos everything,why
                          he's talking like this?he's so nice.i don't deserve him.

S cums near K.S holds her hand & keeps on her chest:u r
                          my luck.
                          K feels discomfort.she wants 2 get away from S.
                          K:I'm tired after the function.can I sleep?
                          S:sure…sleep.b fresh.
                          K:thanku sujal.u r an understanding husband.no other guy
                          can b so soft in this nite.
                          K sleeps.S smiles.

                          The next morning kashish brings bed coffee 4 sujal. S:thanku
                          kashish.
                          S starts drinking. S:did u drink coffee?
                          K:no
                          S extends hiss cup:drink this
                          K:this is urs no?
                          S:we'll share it
                          K:I'm sorry sujal.i don't like drinking from other's cup.

                          S becomes dull. K:don't feel bad plz.
                          S:its ok.

                          Sujal cums in the evening. S:kashish,ger ready.we've 2 go 4
                          a party.
                          K:sorry sujal.i'm not coming 4 the party.
                          S:kashish,what r u telling?my friends arranged this party
                          4 us.plz cum with me kashish.
                          K:ok,let me wear sari.
                          S:thanks kashish4 cuming with me.
                          S sits there.K takes the sari. K:I've 2 wear sari.
                          S:ok..   K:so plz go out of this room.
                          S was embarrassed:ok,I'm sorry.
                          S goes out. S thinks:why do I feel that kashish is
                          avoiding me?is my feeling true?

hey jasmineeeeeee dear.... 😛
thanku so much for posting the second part.. 😃
it was very nice like always...keep up the good work... 👏
& first of all why is kashish behaving like this with bechara sujal who is always trying to be nice to her... 😭
u know what kuch aisa karo ki sujal ko sachchayi ka patah chal jaye kyunke shayad iske baad sujal will try to win over kashish's heart by giving her all the love & care.. 😳
aur haan agar kashish sujal ke saath aise hi behave karthi rahi tho she is right she does not deserve sujal... 😉
dear plz continue soon.. me will wait for you to continue.... 😊    
Edited by sun_423 - 18 years ago

hay jasmine it'z fascinating.........gud going 👏 but yaar itna rude behaviour sujal kai satth 😭

Part-3..Kashish cums in a grand violet sari.Sujal cud'nt
                          take his eyes off her.
                          S:kashish…u look really nice.
                          S's arms go 2 her face.K moves away.S becomes dull.
                          K:we'll go.
                          K walks out.
                          S-K reach the party place. 1 guy announces:now the
                          famous baby doll is going 2 perform .we ask all the
                          cuples especially the newly married cuple Sujal-kashish 2
                          dance 2 the song.
                          S smiles at kashish. K:plz sujal.my mind is not allowing me
                          2 dance.
                          S was shocked:why?
                          K:sujal,I'm not feeling well.
                          S:kashish,then we'll go 2 a doctor
                          K:no need.it wil b ok if I take rest.
                          K's cell rings.It was kusum:kashish,how r u?
                          K:fine mama.   Ku:how is sujal?    K:fine.how r u? &
                          papa..
                          Ku:we both r fine.kashish…keep sujal happy.don't giv him
                          chance 2 become sad.he's gr8 kashish.he gave u a new life.

                          K becomes upset:now we r at a party.so bye mama.
                          Ku:bye.

                          KAshish thinks:I shud'nt make sujal sad.
                          K looks at S.he looks sad. K smiles at S.S becomes very
                          happy.K:sujal,now I'm ok.we'll dance 2gether.
                          S was thrilled:really?   K:ya.
                          Babydoll performs:Aksar…{Dhadkan}.S-K 2gether.S looks at
                          K. Seeing K's dull face,S's face becomes dull.After the
                          song got stopped K moves away from S.S becomes dull.
                          S thinks:why do I feel that kashish is keeping a distance
                          with me?

nice partz jasmine........like da prev. storiez....ths story z awsum 2......plz continue it soon....
hey surya... all ur detailed comments 4 jasmine'z story r pretty interestin... 😊 ...i like ur feedbak...

hmm...jasmine a good part.... 😊 😃
tho jasmine yeh kashish apne ateet se bahar kab niklegi yaar aur kab sujal ke pyaar ko samjhegi... 😭
par no prblem no tension woh kehthe hain na ki sabar ka phal meeta hotha hain tho is hisaab se jab kashish sujal se pyaar karne lagegi tho duniya ki koi taakat usse sujal se judaa nahi kar sakthi chahe woh kashish ka ateet hi kyun na ho... ya koi qayamat kyun na ho...😉 kyun tumhe kya lagtha hain main sahi hoon...
plz agla part jaldi likhna..... 😊 😛 😃
thanks fiza mere comments pe comment karne ke liye.... 😳 😃 😳