Abhiya SS:My Beautiful Disaster(Note pg143) - Page 42

Originally posted by: mgarg75

Dear writers, what a brilliant story 😊 thanx dear please don't move story too fast, I am hoping you will show pia taking care of Abhay like feeding him, or giving him a sponge bath as poor guy is too sick to take care of himself 😉 omg, u av such wild imaginations😳 and he should continue to stay in pia's house for at least next 2 updates😆 please please😉 v wl take this into consideration😊

 

Originally posted by: sweetmonaya

heena and tanzie wwow yaar way an upd I just luv your SS thanx a lot dear n glad u love this ss. poor abhay I wonder who did this to him and thank god piya saved , waiting to see the reaction of abhay seeing piya wait till nxt update and awww poor abhay misses his mom soo much , jeh and misha well what should I say I m speechless ur words mean alot to us eagaerly waiting for abhiya moment and ofcource next upd soo plsss upd soon sure wl try

Originally posted by: lost_in_love

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just amazing..superb!!! 👏 Heena nd tanzie bth of you rock!!!! 👍🏼 thankuu so much indu
WoW..!! Misha-jay wedding gave me real shock!! 😲 v planned it like this nly a big "shocker"
'thy actually...question marks on their faces'..pia sure hs guts engh to abonden a temptng professn nd choose a decent career or rather say a lyf savng professn instead!! and its d sheer power of love!! [<3] " dt was a life changing xperience for her
I lovd dis line, 'I'm still as wild ... of displayng it'.. 😊 glad
"..i found a man lyng...turnd hm wth my shiverng hands"..dis whole part ws very well writtn 👍🏼 as though I ws there in the scene wth pia witnessng evrythng!! thankuu so much indu, it helps us a lot to knw dt where v were gud n where v lacked behind...
"I realisd who ws he...who made me see what LIFE is"...dis part is xtrmly beauutifuull..👏 It's colorful nd it consists diffrnt shades of so many unspokn emotions... indicatng to tht one letter(love) whch is d sole reasn behnd evrythng!! [<3]  i must say u av gr88 understanding towards words n emotions
"he hs got two shots...hs blood group" wow dis part is brilliant...evry detail is apt!! While readng it i wonderd wethr any of you(tanzie & heena) is a doctor!! 😲 😊 nooo, 
"he didnt pass out...hs feet r moving till nw"..no wonder, its abhay aftrall !! Vampire or human dosnt mattr..he is d strongest!! 😳 xactly, his past life made him enough strong
"I myslf didnt knw wat he ws fr me"...well tht sums up evrythng... 😳 thankuuu so much 
Kabir"...b4 ur super handsome patient..." wow! Anthr admirer !! [LoL] 😉 heheheh
"I took out abhay's coat...I will mak thngs ok fr hm'...no matter what"..again a very deep nd emotional part !! I lovd it to d core... 😳 n v r glad u loved it
Aww...kabir is soo sweet nd undrstndng..glad you brought hm in dis ss..😃 so is there some bigger role for hm to play??  cn't say nw nything😕
Poor abhay..he's in so much pain..bt nw pia knws hw to soothe hm...!!! 😊 true
Heena and tanzie hatsoff to bth of you fr dis magnificient update!! 👏 n thankuu so much for ur warm n encouraging words
Awaitng d nxt part eagrly...bth of u tkcre...🤗  u too

-Indu 😳

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res Edited by Sivaranjani - 12 years ago

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beautifully written tanzie.abhiya part was cute👏
u have expressed everything beautifully
liked lake part❤️
now waiting 4 pia's reaction.

why abhay's master trying to kill him?
Edited by .rumki. - 12 years ago

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Tanzie, my sweetheart! Truely u r amaizing writer. U just explained everything so perfectly. Seems like both r falling in love! I love each ane every scene especially the one where abhay tried not to look pia legs and the environment became hot! The dialouge in which abhay says' i will cut him into pieces and feed those pieces into shark', this was just awsome.
Just waiting what would be pia reaction to hear that abhay killed his father. I hope she understand him. UPDATE SOON!
OH YES DO IT MAKE IT FF AS I WAS ALSO THINKING TO REQUEST U FROM LAST FEW UPDATES! It will be beautiful as ff but yes HAPPY ENDING I WANT, PLZ!Edited by flora212 - 12 years ago

loved the update!! beautifully writtenEdited by abhiya0006 - 12 years ago