OS:Will you be Mine!! - Page 5

Nice work buddy!!

Originally posted by: Sivaranjani

Nice work buddy!!

The explanations of their actions and feelings were natural and romantic!!

I loved reading!😉

GR8 WRITING DEAR...

Originally posted by: sruthirishi

GR8 WRITING DEAR...

loved it...do PM for ur future works.

This is really very good. I absolutely loved the last part  when he remembered his mother's letter.

Good job !! 😊

Thanks for the pm. 

Originally posted by: incandescent

This is really very good. I absolutely loved the last part  when he remembered his mother's letter.

Good job !! 😊

Thanks for the pm. 

Congrats on your first OS! 🥳 It was absolutely fantastic! You brought it all together with his mother's bangles! It was so romantic, because it was clear Arnav wanted to see his Khushi, he was just stalling to see her face and funny when she got the shock of her life, that he was in her room! Really enjoyed reading it! Keep it up! 👍🏼⭐️

Originally posted by: YPNHK_kiFANno.1

Congrats on your first OS! 🥳 It was absolutely fantastic! You brought it all together with his mother's bangles! It was so romantic, because it was clear Arnav wanted to see his Khushi, he was just stalling to see her face and funny when she got the shock of her life, that he was in her room! Really enjoyed reading it! Keep it up! 👍🏼⭐️

that was brilliant please add as a buddy

Originally posted by: SimmyOwais

that was brilliant please add as a buddy