Originally posted by: Shaina_b
Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!! - thanks very much
The starting was brilliant and the Mumbai mafia was well described!!!!!π π π π - I'm glad u really liked it
I loved the way you introduced Rajveer as a sharp and cruel Don!!!!!!π π π π π π π π π - yeh he is very dangerous
Uske saamne baithe aadmi ki toh haalat kharab thi!!!!!π π π π π π π π π π - hehehe yes of course he is powerful
I just loved it when Raj shot that guy and said in style that he hates people who speak in a loud voice and especially those who speak when they are told not to!!!!!π π π π π π π π - yeh it just reflects how much in control he is all the time
It was totally a dialogue and style to which the audience would cheer and wolf whistle!!!!!π π π π π - yes most definitely it was
Raj did the right thing by killing that bas***d as he deserved to be punished for what he did!!!!! π‘ π‘ π‘ π‘ π‘ π‘ π‘ π‘ π‘ π‘ π‘ - yes he did as he was a monster
Jo kaam zameer ko marde woh usse kabhi maaf nahi kar sakta!!!!!π³ π³ π³ π³ - haan oske sakht khilaaf hain wo
Raj's power is just amazing and he rules over his illegal businesses as a king rules over his empire!!!!!π π π π π π π π π π π - yes he rules like a king alright
It is great to see that inspite of being a Don he is still principled and has not lost his ethics in this bad mafia world!!!!!π π π π π ππΌ ππΌ ππΌ ππΌ - haan wo bure kaam karta hain lekin ek daire me rehkar
He is good enough to take care of the girl's family!!!!!! π π π π - yes he never believes in injustice
Raj has a killer attitude and he is too hot as Don!!!!!π π π π π π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ βΊοΈ βΊοΈ βΊοΈ βΊοΈ βΊοΈ - hehehe yes very hottt
Raj and Naina's first meeting was too good!!!!!!π π π π - hmmm yeh it was different
Naina was late for an appointment and tried to get on the lift Raj had gotten into!!!!!!π π π π π π π π - yes she had to rush around
But his guards prevented it and she was irritated to the core with them!!!!!π‘ π‘ π‘ π‘ π‘ π‘ - well naturally as it was a public place and not someone's property
When their eyes met for the first time, they were enchanted and just couldn't look away!!!!!!π π π π π π π π - the very affect they always have when in presence of each other
Raj is mesmerized by her beauty and her amazing bold eyes aur woh toh gaya kaam se at first sight!!!!!π π π π π π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ - haan yeh to hona hee tha
Raj could have let her into the lift and helped her but being the arrogant guy he is, how can he make things easy for her??π π π π - well he really doesn't have that much of a soft heart
He just ordered his guards to close the doors and Naina was sooo angry!!!!!!π‘ π‘ π‘ π‘ π‘ π‘ π‘ π‘ - yes very angry
She swore to teach him a good lesson if she saw him again!!!!!π³ π³ π³ π³ - yes she was bound to be so angry
Poor Naina finally reached for the meeting but there also Raj's bodyguards stopped her!!!!!π π π π π - ab kya kare kismat me hee wo likha hain
When she entered, Raj said about her being late but hearing her voice he turned around to see her!!!!!π π π π π π π π - he is arrogant yet he forgets everything by looking at her
Naina realized he was the same man who she had vowed to teach a lesson but she had to leave personal opinions out now as he was her client!!!!π€ π€ π€ π€ - yes it was very unfortunate for her
Raj is rude to her for being late and wasting his time and then just staring at him!!!!π³ π³ π³ π³ - rudeness comes with the package my dear
Naina started narrating the proposal but Raj is lost in her sweet voice and busy observing her instead!!!!!π π π π π π π π - as i said he forgot everything in her presence
First he interrupted her to ask her name and felt it was a sweet name just like her and so true for her as her eyes were beautiful!!!!π π π π π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ - yes he was mesmerised
Naina is uncomfortable by his staring and just wants to finish the presentation!!!!!!π π π π - yeh the poor girl is very uncomfortable
Instead of listening to the presentation, Raj is mesmerized by her and lost into her magic!!!!!!π π π π π π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π π π π - yeh as it's more interesting
Naina is really practical and inspite of everything gave her presentation very well and wrapped it up!!!!! π π π π - yes since she is very efficient in her work
What a perfect question to be asked after the presentation, "What are you doing tonight?"!!!!!π π π π π π π π π π π π - hehehehe a very surprising question indeed
It was the best dialogue of this part!!!!!π π π π π π π π π - thank you
Naina was surprised with this question as it was totally out of the blue!!!!!π² π² π² π² - yeh totally unexpected
She cleverly snubbed him as no way was she going to answer this question!!!!!π π π π π π π π π - yeh as why wud she give her details to a stranger
The way Raj came close to her made her lose her senses and she stared into his deep eyes!!!!!π π π π π π π π π - well yes his aura is powerful
Raj wanted to see his reflection in her eyes and I am sure he appears more special in them!!!!!!π π π π π π π πHaaaiii!!!!π π π π π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ - haan bohat hee special hain kyu ke aage chalke oski aakhon me hee basne waala hain
He knew she couldn't resist him and his look had totally entrapped her!!!!!π π π π π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ π³ βΊοΈ βΊοΈ βΊοΈ βΊοΈ - yes unfortunately she was trapped
Naina finally broke the spell and burst out on him as she was really angry at what he did with her!!!!π‘ π‘ π‘ π‘ π‘ π‘ - haan any self respecting girl wud react that way
Naina usse kya kya sunake chali gayi magar Raj ne kuch nahi kaha!!!!!π π π π π π π π π π π π - well moka hee kaha mila ose
First time in his life he has met someone who is not afraid of him and dared to speak to him like that!!!!!π π π π π - yes and he was left in awe
Raj is only thinking about her and I am sure he won't take her rejection lying down!!!!!π π π π ππΌ ππΌ ππΌ ππΌ - most definitely he wont
Naina he will not leave you so easily!!!!!!π π π π π π π π π - of course oska peecha thori chorega ab
Originally posted by: sainiayshi14
Hi Arwa...π€How are you?π - hey Ayushi I'm gr8
Wow the update is wonderful loved it.πππ - thanks alot for loving it so muchRajveer and his attitude wooof...!!!π³π³π³ - yes he has a killer attitude for sureOh Don is gone at first sight..πππ³ - heehe most naturally as he also has someone who can make him scaredAnd his dialogue WHAT ARE YOU DOING TONIGHT..π³π and Naina was just...???π²π€£ - yes he certainly shocked her there with that
Naina and Rajveer's first meeting is verry interesting...π³ππ - i'm glad u liked itfabulous update - thanks againcon't soonAyushi.βοΈ
Originally posted by: -purnima-
lovely UD ππ - thanks alot Puri
aww DON π³π³... good to see inspite of being DON he is still prinicipled ππ... not lost his ethics in this bad mafia world ππ... Rajveer will be Rajveer π³π³π³ no matter what profession he goes for πππ - yeh i guess his character has to stay principled no matter what avatar he takes
hero heroine met πππ ...good equal oppononents ππ... π... fire works b/w two expected every now & then ππ... & guess our Don gaya kaam se at the first sight ππ...seeing how much attenition he paid on lovely lady & how much on presentation πππ - hehehehe yeh he finally found someone who could take his senses away
& what a perfect question to be asked after the presentation π€£ "what u are doing tonite" πππ - yes after all he does everything perfectly
guess Don mite want to sing for her Tere Naina wich main doob jaawa π ... - cool song
Atough catch for DON so all the best for him ππΌ ...wud wait for DON's reaction to naina's rejection...surely he is not the one to take it lying down πππ. - hmmm surely he wud do something
contiue soon ππ
nice part
plz continue soon
Originally posted by: suhana.dixit
Hi Arwa
Update was just amazing..πππ - thanks very much SuhanaRajveer is potraying the role of don here who has certain principles in life and he follows them religiously. - yes he is the bad and good guy at onceHis first meeting with Naina was pretty interesting.Here she was talking abt business while Raj was just staring at her.πππ - hehehe yeh he was more interested in something else for sureHe asks Naina for dinner but she refuses him.ππ - well naturally since she doesn't even know himI hope he gets to know now that not every girl falls for money and charm.Naina is certainly different and that had wat intrigued his interest.π - yes he wud definitely see her different nowPls continue soonBye
Originally posted by: sanjana25
wow
loved it
hey arwa!!!
nice part!!!
loved it!!
beautifully written!!!
plz cont soon ...ASAP!!!!!!
love
esha
Originally posted by: fanatic 21
gr8 updt...π - thanks a lot
luved d characterization of Rajveer...it was marvelousπ³π - I'm glad u really did
and RN intro scene was amazing as well...π - aaaw yes
awesome updt...π - thanks once again
Originally posted by: innocent_eyes
nice update. π π π .. - thanks very much
hmm so Rajeev is the DON...likes his new character..whats good about him inspite of being DON he is still prinicipled, good to see he is disciplined in his acts ππn know what is morally right n not...quite impressive...hmm so people afraid of him...n hona bhi chahoyai... - yeh he is a very principled don which is why people are afraid of him
The first encounter of RN was too good...the lift scence was really nice, - thanks for liking it
she was so irritated aik to waisai hi she was late n ye aur late ho rhi hain is wja sai... - yes she was very irritated
so finally she reached n gets a shock on seeing him ππ...phr bhi she was doing her work but rajeev was just mesmerized by her beaauty n keep on staring herππ - well he found that more interesting na
& what a question he asked after the presentation what u are doing tonight πππ...n naina refused him to answer, oh he'll not leave u so easily... - hmmm yes after her refusal he sure wouldn't leave her alone
waiting for next update...cont soon
take care
Originally posted by: shreyamathur_18
wonderful partπ π π - thanks a lot Shreya
description of rajveer the way he ruled over his illegal business was just perfect as a king rules iver his empire and the fear which the other man has while standing infront of him was showing that how he controls everybody whether he is friend , colleague or an enemyπ π π - yes he is the one in total control all the timeand the rn meeting was simply superb in their first meeting they fought a little and when the business work is going on then rajveer was truly mesmerised after observing naina and just keenly looking at her with lots of interest in her and even forgot about his meeting with her π π π - hehehe I'm glad u liked this sequence and well how can he concentrate on anything else with the most interesting thing sitting in frontbut out of a blue rajveer's question towards naina was just shocking for her as he was asking her schedule of the day's night π² π π³ well looking forward for the next meeting of rnπ π π - yeh she was really awestruck by it. Well let's see how they meet againpls continue soonπshreyaπ
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