ArHi SS: Vertigo - Completed [Sequel link on Page 1] - Page 16

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Posted: 13 years ago
Can I expect an update in a few minutes?
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ivre

I guess Khushi and Arnav both believe that life moves in waves, up and down. And they both have a different perception of it. Beliefs are complicated, to answer why we believe in something can get messy. I must say you handled it quite well.

This conversation pattern of the story is good.
Thank you for the PM



Thank you...you are welcome for the PM. Fundamentally, both of them are similar. But in execution and lifestyle, Arnav and Lavanya are similar.

Originally posted by: tina_1234

awesomeness...loved dis part



Thank you...

Originally posted by: bmtdluver

Great update. I liked the interaction and discussion between arhi



Thanks...

Originally posted by: desisweetheart9

Thanks for the PM. Awesome. Loved that Arnav was so honest with Khushi. It is like she is the only person that has seen a different side of Arnav.



Thank you...you are welcome for the PM..
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it pls continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Whoop! Just read parts 5-7 and you just keep on getting better and better! There is such an intensity and feeling around your words! Every part has it's own atmosphere and individual feel and as a whole your writing is absolutely brilliant! These two are having real, meaningful conversations. There's an unspoken understanding between them, a respect for each other and a love that's growing slowly. Can't wait to read more, keep it up! 👏⭐️
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Posted: 13 years ago
hmm...LA is Jealous!

Arnav is Changing <3 <3

i am loving this softer Arnav and maturer Kushi! :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
heyy.
i luv ur work, it flows really well. its like a 4d story. can see the scenes playing in my head & feel the emotions.
plz pm me wen u update😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Updates will re-start from tonight. Thanks all for your support and a very happy new year!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: littlemoi

this update was great!!!!!! love the way they are slowly bonding!! thank you so much for the pm!!



Thank you very much...

Originally posted by: zafi

Awww the Arhi part was so sweet.⭐️ I hate Bua so I am leaving it at that.



Thanks...Their aunt is just being her...

Originally posted by: malluangel

that was a beautiful debate, i loved the arhi bonding moment but la urghh



Thanks...But La is simply being herself. She likes Arnav and she is little taken aback at the fact that she isn't the center of the universe...


Originally posted by: LyssaPie

Amazing interaction. I lol'd when La saw them togther. Anyways great update!



Thanks...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: music1

oh wonderful.So finally he opened up for her.Slowly by steadily there is love building up between them.
Waiting for the day when it will explode.😍



Thanks...explode huh...let's see :-)

Originally posted by: nareshSV

Wow...awesomeee episode yaar...keep rocking...👍🏼



Thanks...

Originally posted by: christmas

lovely story!...apologies for not commenting reguarly!...loved the update. the discussion on the belief was nicely done. liked how for khushi the god was a she. the parting words of asr were brilliantly done. not only a rebuttal to her argument. but the reply to that look that her eyes passed that she had though or hoped he'd missed post lavanya.

update soon:)



Thanks...Khushi's individuality is shown in everything she does - the way she dresses to her belief system.

Originally posted by: niru273

wow ur story is amazing !
i love dis cool and calm arnav
his discussion wid khushi was good too
! brilliant update !



Thanks... Arnav I believe would be a cool and calm person if he has built the company from scratch. One cannot get lot of work done by being perpetually angry or irritated with the entire world.. :-)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: meenaluma

loved it pls continue soon



Thanks...

Originally posted by: YPNHK_kiFANno.1

Whoop! Just read parts 5-7 and you just keep on getting better and better! There is such an intensity and feeling around your words! Every part has it's own atmosphere and individual feel and as a whole your writing is absolutely brilliant! These two are having real, meaningful conversations. There's an unspoken understanding between them, a respect for each other and a love that's growing slowly. Can't wait to read more, keep it up! 👏⭐️



Thanks...Arnav and Khushi are feeling something they have never felt before. Capturing those moments here :-)

Originally posted by: -vrshn-

hmm...LA is Jealous!

Arnav is Changing <3 <3

i am loving this softer Arnav and maturer Kushi! :)



Thanks...Arnav has changed :-)

Originally posted by: kawkabon

heyy.

i luv ur work, it flows really well. its like a 4d story. can see the scenes playing in my head & feel the emotions.
plz pm me wen u update😊



Thanks...I will PM you...

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