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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: bellaaa
tanzie awsome superb update...
great work yar
poor piya
face abhay in this condition...liked tht piya accpted this abhay like this too...
por aryan amber too
tried to connect to abhay but failed...
what did she mohani want?
hate her yar and what did jeh also with her kill him
thts the spirit piya take abhay out of the town...
i thnk she exchange the blood?
hope she will get abhay back
cont soon
waiting 4 book 3

Thanks beenish. Pia understood she has to and she will explain it to Abhay once he is ok. Mohini has many reasons to hate Abhay and you will know it soon. Jeh is being used and till now he wont understand it. Book 3 will opened today.

Originally posted by: Eowyn
Ah! Now I will have to bid adieu to this one as well😭
But then everything has an end...
As expected and destined Abhay is back with Piya...
Supernatural court comes to arrest Abhay?
That was surprising, but then from what Abhay said they are biased na...
Great update Tanz...
Continue on...

Why 😕 Maybe you are gonna change your mind 😉

SC comes to arrest Abhay is a trick of Mohini and she used Jeh in it. Jeh wont understand his mistake until he will see Alina alive again...

Originally posted by: abc123chiti
amazing update...!!!👏

finally jeh came...
knew that he was the one who was with mohini in her evil plans...

loved the bedroom part where abhay healed pia...he had to...

and the last para...was just awsome...pia's attitude and her way of thinking was amazing...
hope she is successful in bringing her old abhay back soon...
after which there will b e some romantic moments...yay...

waiting to see mohini's reaction...
m sure she will go mad...afterall she never thought that someone could break the spell...

update soon...😆

Thanks dear... your emoticons are so funny 😆 Abhay had to listen to the call of his soul because wherever he goes his heart means Pia will follow...

and yes Mohini will go mad...

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Posted: 11 years ago

Amazing update..

pia is really courageous

mohini & Jeh😡

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Cute_Gal
awesome update..
eagerly waiting for d next part..
continue soon.. thanxxx for d pm.

Thanks a lot dear. will update tonight or tomorrow 😳

Originally posted by: sukusnavnit
amazing update. 👍🏼 everyone is going through hell pia abhay aryaan peehu amber and the reason is mohini. pias love is now at its greatest test i.e to break the spell which was never broken before. their love is beyond imagination no spell can overcome it. ❤️ time is ticking lets see what pia does and to know this i m eagerly waiting for ur next update. 😍

Thanks Navnit. They truly are going through hell when they are so helpless instead of being so powerful. Pia will be under huge risk...

Originally posted by: ..tora.tangled.
👏👏omg tanz an amazing update...finally i can write big comments!!yipee!!😃
ok coming to the update it was fantastic,heartwrenching,spellbinding,all rolled into one...wow..the blackhole of time spell???!!amazing thinking👏!i love it..omg time is running out...after sand falls completely in the third hourglass,there is no way to break the spell??but i think mohini has not taken into account the power of love..piya's love for abhay and abhay's lover for piya..infact abhiya's love for each other..but i am worried as to what piya will do now..will piya tempt abhay into drinking her blood...i know she will not hesitat to sacrifice herself if it means getting abhay back..but it will break abhay...the fight between aryan and piya was sad in a way..both shattered and helpless...and all because of that mohini.😡..so it was jeh who set all things in motion😲..omg...he is such a creep!😡!that abhiya scene was painful and touching..they r so near yet sooo far.😭..this is getting more interesting..can's wait for more!!!
p.s.i m on holidays now..so i can help u with the summary..if u want😊

Thanks you sweetheart... i know why because you are no longer in hostel 🤗 She will tempt Abhay to drink her blood too though Abhay will deny and then she will bleed herself so that Abhay could no longer ignore her blood smell and thirst. jeh is still blinded with hatred because he lost all his family members but he will come out of his shell once he sees Alina is alive.

thanks so much for the help...will be opening book 3 tonight 😳

Originally posted by: DonIsback
that stupid jeh is there in to plan to... i hope abhay kill him . awesome update

Jeh is being used by Mohini and soon he will understand that...

Originally posted by: shria
hey im ur new reader😉 i jst realy loved ur ff😃
i took only 2 days to read it😆 it was so good that i culd'nt wait to read more😉
plzz pm me the next time😃

Thank you Shria and welcome to my thread 😊

you read the entire book 1 n 2 in 2 days 😲 OMG.. you are a fast reader like Im and even faster I think 😆

I have send you a buddy request so I will Pm you from next time😳

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: CrazyFanSuku
speechless after reading up date very amazing thanks for pm

Thanks dear. glad u liked it 😊

Originally posted by: vishti.dvd
beautiful update Tanzie n sorry for late comment loved different colours of Mr. AR though he is being rude 2 Pia but his heart still remembers Pia and that will bring him back

Thanks Ankita. no problem being late. Pia will bring him for sure...

Originally posted by: cute.manasi
hey congo tanzie...😛...for completing book 2 & thnks for the wonderful update...!!!!!!!!!!

Thanks Manasi. 😊

Originally posted by: tanvipareek
Thanks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Dear for ur beautiful update' really sad for Aryan, amber, pia and over vampy abhay' but story is on interesting trak '.. pia run away with abhay nice'.

Glad u liked it Tanvi. story will turn more interesting turn soon...atleast I hope so...

Originally posted by: pallavisarkar
thnx for d pm
lovely updt
gr8t awesome 👏👏
gud piya ran away wid abhay to protect him
updt soon
cont soon

Thank you so much. Pia will face more problems but surprisingly Abhay will protect him... both will protect each other in short...

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: urmita
wow tanzie...again a superb update.. 😃
the dream...so mohini's hubby was abhay's friend...nd that was the unlucky moment abhay met mohini, huh...wonder who that hubby is gonna be...😊 Thanks dear..mohinis husband is even more dangerous thn she is. 😆
abhay is again civi huh.😊..the way he came nd healed pia with his spcl kiss therapy was actually cute..😛.though he still thinks pia no more than just a human,he still felt regret nd cares for her.loved abhay...😳 I love him too 😃
mohini's spell is more clear now...so abhay need to remember everything b4 the 3rd clock is finished...she wont succeed right ? 😊pia just has to break the spell b4 that...it cant become unbreakable...pls break it in time...😊 I hope Pia will make it...
nd pia...finally she snapped...i was wondering how she is so calm all the time...i mean for abhay she is strong,can do anything...even accept what he did to her...bt to know his brother caused it all for his wife nd child...aryan is a victim too, pia knows that...bt in her situation, aryan still had it coming after abhay went missing again...how much a person can really take...
nd finally bacche me akal aai.😆.aryan finally chose right by rejecting mohini...since child is safe...nd so its jeh...i knew it...nd did abhay really do all that...all those humans nd gourav, he did all that in public.😲i so dont believe this..he is totally in trouble... Pia had taken too much and so is Aryan.. here no one can be blamed. people cant really think when their loved ones are at stake and theres nothing they can do. Abhay did kill humans but the accusations were false because no human was present there...
thanks to pia usne jis reason se hi sahi abhay ko leke bhag to gayi.😃..thodi din council se chutkara...abhiya on the run.😊..sounds interesting..😉..cant wait to see it...cont. soon...😊
congrats for the book 3 tanzie...👏😃👏 but Abhay has to face SC..its inevitable.. thanks dear.. will update tomorrow..

Originally posted by: --Siva--
Sorry Tanzie, I read this couple of days back. But was busy in my vacations!

Twists! Twists and twists! This was supposed to be a love story! a supernatural love. Nothing of this twisting!

U made my Abhay partially physcic and made him go away? How could u do this?

Pia lashed out Aryan! Yes, this is what I need. As much I loved him, now I'm that much angry on him! I know he is not faulty. But still crazy heart doesn't listen to me :(

Oh my God. Clock logic, where do u get the ideas? That was for sure impressive!

Thanks for the Pm dear!

Hello dear, hope you are having a nice vacation.

When did I say there wont be any twists? n this is supernatural love story so here i bring more supernatural stuff 😆

you honestly thought I could survive without the twists 😛

Aryan is on track now.. helplessness and danger often make people's brain jammed and tey cant think.. not their fault entirely..happens 😳

thanks.. i loved the clock theory myself 😆

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Posted: 11 years ago

Super awesome update..
Mohini's past is interesting..seems like she loved her husband a lot ? Then something went wrong perhaps ? 😕

Abhay healing piya was sweet yet sad 😔 but it proved how much she trusts him and nothing has the power to hamper that trust.

I have a feeling that piya will break the spell anyhow. the third clock has to break ! I hope I am right 😳

I always had severe doubts on jeh.. He is such a b***ard 😡 I will bless you with all my longevity the day you kill him 😆

Piya left RM ! What else could she do.. I feel so very bad for aryan.. Poor guy ! He is always at the suffering end. Please use itna dukh mat do 😭 🥺 but the attitude he gave to mohini, was damn superb ! Amber is keeping her cool at the best..brave girl I must say :D

Inspite of all the black brown and what not magic, he still feels a pull for piya ! Aww ❤️
He will be at his best the day he realises how much he has hurt her. And I know that day is very near 😉

Whats up with the vampire council ? As if someone is beating them up to issue the warrant ! 🤔

Cant wait for the next update..:D:D

Many many congratulations for your Book-3 !
🤗 🥳
Wishing you all the very best.. And I want to keep on reading your writings till the end of time ❤️

--edited--
I guess I am the last one to comment on your book-2 ? :D :D
I sincerely hope so :'(
Edited by -Chinky- - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: --sonali--
aww Tnazie-🤗i was misssing ur ff⭐️ a a a lot u know!😊 aww...thank you dear.. i hope your exams went well 😳

coming to update till this chappy.all updates are brillent!i adore u for ur writing seriously!kash tum writer hoti pkyek ki...kya serial hoti! I wish that too.. i wish i cud be writer of PKYEK 2 thn I swear TRPs wud be higher 😉 😛

so mohini😡 ke black magic ne abhiya ke baja di hai...poor my abhiya!

abhay huts pia,but heal bhi vahi karega...n kiya bhi,i loved😍 that part!🤗
pia will alwys TURST her abhay chahe koi kuch bhi kare! yes, nothing can separate abhiya ❤️

ab pia surly abhay ko thik karva ke hi rhegi,she have to!

yar ye mohini n uska hubby- m waiting for her hubby!she is just...hope all is perfect jaldi ho.how she loved music!want to more about that past! her hubby is more dangerous than she is.. she loves music... still she does...

waiting for next update eagrly-ab kya hoga!pia ...!
loved all update n ur writing!👍🏼
love u tanzie...!🤗 thank you dear...love to you too 🤗

Originally posted by: Pari-Gupta
awesome update
loved it
So Abhay lived his first meeting wid Mohini
Is Mohini's husband dead??
So the magic performed by Mohini is failed
And that Jeh😡 helped Mohini
cont soon
thanks for the pm

Thank you pari. no Mohinis husband isnt dead.. Jeh wants his share of revenge with Abhay...

Originally posted by: vishti.dvd
awesome Tanzie loved little Abhiya moments and what was that security talking about Abhay killing Gaurav infront of 9 humans and all that and that Jeh is he behind it ? 😡 knew it he is d 1 involved with Mohini in all this aarrrgghhh 😡 Mishi has started talking 2 Pia that 1 gud thing happened in all this 😊 and Arnab 😡

Thank you Ankita. No it was mohinis plan and she is using Jeh's brothers murder to get to Abhay..

Originally posted by: abhiyan_soni
Superb update Tanz

loved it !!!!!

Abhay Healing pia was superb part and Abhiya pull was stronger and now they escape frome others i m sure pia can fix abhay now !!!! mhoni and her husband story was totally mystery!!!!! Hope magic performed by mohni is failed and abhay should free soon but i m like this abhay too !!!
continue soon !!!

Thanks Sandy.

Pia will now fix Abhay since no danger will be in their range for a while.. Abhay in multi shaded is fun 😉

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: abhiya4evr
awsome update 👏 👏 👏
who is rishan ? mohini or aryan's son??
abhiya part is quite touchy .jai with mohini 😲 😡
plz update soon nd thank u so much for pm 😃

Thank you Ayesha. Are Aryan's son is still unborn 😆 Rishan is not someone related to Mohini...

will update withing tomorrow..

Originally posted by: Mohit-deewani
Amazing upd tanzie , u r an awesomely brilliant writer yaar 👏
And just love this determined piya , she just superb Yaar
And the abhiya scene was amazing , the way abhay felt for piya was beyond words to explain 😍 Felt bad for piya's condition.
And everyone were sooo frustrated poor aryan but just loved the way he replied mohini tat was just awesome yaar
And I m eager to mohini's husband more , he seems to be amazingly powerful tat mohini is afraid of him 😎
And I hate that jeh knew he was upto sumthing 😡
It was simply brilliant tanzie conti soon

Thanks Trishna. Abhay has to come back to Pia. no magic can deny their love. Everyone is helpless so cant avoid the frustration.

Mohinis husband is eccentric, lethal and dangerous... and funny too.. you guys are gonna love him..

Originally posted by: Akshi0019
amazing tanazie...
so abhay finally came to pia... i loved it...
i hope pia will be able 2 undo d spell...
n what happens 2 peehu.. n her child.. i hope both are safe...
n congracs 4 d completion of book 2...
cont soon dr...

Thank you Akshi. you commented after a long time. where have you been? busy? 😳

Pia will undo the spell and she wont even know it. will update tomorrow...

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: abhiya_pkyek
Amazing update..
pia is really courageous
mohini & Jeh😡

Thanks Prima...

Originally posted by: -Chinky-
Super awesome update..
Mohini's past is interesting..seems like she loved her husband a lot ? Then something went wrong perhaps ? 😕 welcome back my sweetypie.. how ru? 🤗 something definitely went wrong and Abhay has some involvement in that...

Abhay healing piya was sweet yet sad 😔 but it proved how much she trusts him and nothing has the power to hamper that trust.

I have a feeling that piya will break the spell anyhow. the third clock has to break ! I hope I am right😳 Your feeling is correct

I always had severe doubts on jeh.. He is such a b***ard 😡 I will bless you with all my longevity the day you kill him 😆 its not entirely his fault... so dont be mad at him.. mohini is using him too..

Piya left RM ! What else could she do.. I feel so very bad for aryan.. Poor guy ! He is always at the suffering end. Please use itna dukh mat do 😭 🥺 but the attitude he gave to mohini, was damn superb ! Amber is keeping her cool at the best..brave girl I must say :D Mohini ki band bohut jaldi bajne wali jai. first Aryan, then Pia, then Abhay and then her husband 😉 Im working on Aryans misery.. i no longer wish to hurt him...

Inspite of all the black brown and what not magic, he still feels a pull for piya ! Aww ❤️
He will be at his best the day he realises how much he has hurt her. And I know that day is very near 😉 yes it is... and he will be shattered and love Pia crazily after realizing what she has done for him and what he has done to her..

Whats up with the vampire council ? As if someone is beating them up to issue the warrant ! 🤔 Its not vampire council.. its supernatural court 🥱

Cant wait for the next update..:D:D

Many many congratulations for your Book-3 !
🤗 🥳
Wishing you all the very best.. And I want to keep on reading your writings till the end of time ❤️

--edited--
I guess I am the last one to comment on your book-2 ? :D :D
I sincerely hope so :'( 🤣 you are silly now be happy... and Book 3 khatam honese pehle wapas ajana 🤣 thank you so much for all the love... 🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago

Ok.. we are done with Book 2 guys 🥳

thanks so much for the incredible love...

here's the link of Book 3: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3046929

next chapter will be updated tomorrow on Book 3.

love you all 🤗 🤗 🤗

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