::SS::Abhiya's Heavenly Little Paradise upda pg126 - Page 83

OMG Ayesha superb hot update. I am still blushing. Pls continue soon and thanks for the pm.

Originally posted by: cuteshrishti

Awesome update
I must say a very hot update
Evn chandeena want alone time
And gosh this abhay is so naughty
I so loved it
Plz cont...

Chandeena are very much human now so want to get some down time🤣 I mean even they have needs yaar🤣

Originally posted by: -Sonia-

WOW! Fabbb update! aysha

Abhay! He is a perfect husband! thier romance is treat to read! &
I love this naughty and passionate side of Abhay...
The honeymoon sequence has been beautifully written and u made them look like a more realistic couple...
I hope, they always remain happy..
Continue soon
thanx for d pm
tc

 I wanted this side of ABHAY to come out more i am fed up of the brooding silence we are so used to.

hey ayshu...dt ws smthng nw!!!!!😆thnx 4 lstning to my wild request...😉man...i jst lovd it!!!!! abhiya wr so passionate n at last pia also came upto abhay's mark!!!!!😆lovely updt aysha!!!!!😳awww...i ws so taken ovr by abhay's naughtiness!!!!!😛so finally hs trials n sufferrings ovr...😃do cont asap n love u 4 ds 1...😳

Originally posted by: snitchseeker

Aysha very soon you will end up owing me a cell its burning hot. I am afraid it will melt of so much hotness. OMG chocolate and strawberry yummylicious. The honeynoon was so dreamy. Is this the same guy who used to keep a light year distance between two of them?

Trust me i felt the same way when i wrote it. Then i almost edited it out. Then i kept more or less had the urge to delete what i write fearing it may be too OTT. In the end i left it alone hoping if U guys were uncomfortable by it then you'd let me know about it.

Originally posted by: anjali.K

if there were a competition between abhay in this ss and piya in Eternally waiting for you on taking the reins in bed, piya wins!! abhay was good but piya there was merciless!

 I know Pia in ETERNALLY WAITING 4 U was a law on to herself totally destroyed ABHAY'S peace of mind with her need for him but here ABHAY is coming into his own i guess. I can't have both Abhay and Pia being so wild on the same FF or SS. Its best to have one a specific way.

Originally posted by: Dikshi92

Wow super hot update ayesha, simply loved it.. What a honeymoon it was!! Abhay was very naughty.. He always likes to try different things.. 😉 and his influence has made piya naughty too.. 😉

Abhay in this loves ADVENTURE and he'll give anything a try and usually one partner has an influence over the other right?

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5oAafsCmysc&feature=related[/YOUTUBE]

Originally posted by: hpoirotac

...!!!
i can't write anything else ayesha...hope you understand...i'm still wondering how come my mobile hasn't caught fire...oh ayesha how i wish i could post this somewhere on fb...and then sit back and enjoy the fun :-D

If U want U can post it on FB totally your decision i'm not fussed i let another of my reader do this.I think FB people would probably all go crazy😆

Originally posted by: mandy1024

Ur out there to kill us for sure ☺️ Man, was that hot or what? 😲 I am surprised my PC is still is working after u set the screen on fire 😃

Loved Pia Misha convo 😆 Misha sure had a point. They definitely were so loud that Chandeena had to chuck them out 🤣 Poor Abhay 😭 Will his suffering come to an end after this night? HAWT update 👏

The update was based on 1 months events so theres a lot of ahem moments so it was bound to be superhot. I added some comedy into the update to keep it a little light. Abhay will no longer suffer no more he is cured fully.

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rhupTZc-DLI&feature=related[/YOUTUBE]

Originally posted by: anukrati

SUPERB UPDATE AYESHA abhiyA honeymoon is too hott like them.ITS like too hott to handle. abhay is too naughty.i hope ABHAYnot become fully human,he still has his powers i guess. update soon

Of all the usual ahem moments so decided to spice it up. Abhay wil be a superhuman this do it for U.😆 Edited by matwamango - 12 years ago