Love Me Sab Chalta Hai- (Part 20 Added) - Page 4

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Posted: 18 years ago
anamika yeh story to ekbare rapchik hay.Bohot bohot bohot shundar hay. Thanx nahi bola. Waiting for u r next post. Jaldi post karna. Deri mat karna.Agar kiya to 😡 😡 😡
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Posted: 18 years ago
Nice part
I liked the part when sujal said that mere liye to rakshabandhan ka din sabse acha hain
I thought it was really funny
continue soon 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
So sweet of u all to appreciate my story that much
Don't worry
Aaj next part aa jayega
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Posted: 18 years ago
gr8 story.....
continue soon plz....
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Posted: 18 years ago
Recap: Sujal has stopped talking to Karan till he reforms. Karan goes to Nandini's house to say sorry but when she speaks something about Sujal & Karan's friendship, Karan, out of frustration, kisses her. It's Valentines Day and Kashish indirectly proposes Sujal.

LOVE ME SAB CHALTA HAI – PART 11
It takes a minute to Sujal to understand what Kashish just said.
Sujal: Iska kya matlab?
Kashish: Ab ye bhi mai samjhaoon? Yes Mr.Sujal…………I love you. And I am very serious.
Sujal gets highly disturbed and moves forward.
Kashish: Kya hua Sujal? Maine aisa kya keh diya? I thought ye baat tumhe ab tak to mehsoos ho gayi hoga!
Sujal: Please Kashish! Mujhe akela chod do! (And he leaves)
Kashish is shocked at his behaviour and as she turns, she finds Karan standing there.
Karan: Tumhe use aisa nahin kehna chahiye tha!
Kashish: Lekin maine aisa kya kaha? Use I Love You to kitni ladkiyaan bolti hain, par use is tarah upset hote hue to kabhi nahin dekha!
Karan: Un saari ladkiyon se vo pyaar nahin karta na!
Kashish: You mean he too loves me?
Karan: Agar mai use jaanta hoon to mai ye keh sakta hoon ki vo tumhaare liye feel to zaroor karta hai. Lekin……………….
Kashish: Lekin kya?
Karan: Sorry Kashish! Ye Sujal ke past ki ek aise sachchai hai jise mai kisi ke saamne bhi disclose nahin kar sakta. Please don't force me. Aur haan! Agar Sujal ko phir se normal behave karte dekhna chahti ho to use jaakar keh do ki tum mazaak kar rahi thi.
Kashish: But I'm damn serious Karan!!!! Trust me!
Karan: Please Kashish! We better not discuss this topic anymore!!!!!!
Karan leaves from there and Kashish is standing there very much disturbed and lost.
On the other side, Karan goes to Nandini.
Karan: Hi Nandini!
Nandini: Tum! Please either you leave or I will.
Karan: Kal maine jo kuch bhi kiya uske liye I'm sorry. Please Nandini! Mai to kal bhi tumhe sorry kehne hi aaya tha, vo to tumne hi mujhe gussa dilaaya!
Nandini: Acha!!!!! Gussa maine dilaaya? Gusse me koi aisa karta hai?
Karan: Lekin maine kiya kya???????
Nandini: Acha! Tumne kal mujhe……………..
Nandini is a bit embarrassed aur sharma ke vo vahan se chali jaati hai. Karan too smiles.
Sujal is sitting alone at a beach, lost in some memories.
Flashback:
Sujal ki ankhon par patti bandhi hai aur vo kisi ko dhoodh raha hai.
Sujal: Kahan ho tum? Patti kholon kya? Khushi!!!!!!!!
Khushi: Tum itne restless kyon ho? Do min ruko!
Sujal: Itni der ho gayi! Ab aur wait nahin kar sakta mai!
Khushi: Bas just a second more!!!!!!!!!! Ho gaya!
Sujal: To ab mai apne ankhein kholon?
Khushi: Haan!
As he opens his eyes, he sees his house decorated fully.
Khushi: Kaisa laga mera surprise? Happy Valentines Day!!!!!!
Sujal: Surprise to theek-thaak hai! Vaise aaj Valentines Day hai?
Khushi: Don't tell me ki tumhe yaad nahin tha!
Sujal: Isme yaad rakhne wala kya hai? Vaise, Happy Valentines Day.
Khushi: Maine itni mehnat ki aur tum? Tumhe yaad……………
Just then Sujal presented a gift to her.
Khushi: Tumhe yaad tha! Yes, I knew ki tum nahin bhool sakte.
Sujal: But obviously Khushi! Mai ye din kaise bhool sakta hoon. Ye to pyaar karne walon ka din hai naa aur mai to is duniya me sabse bada deewaana hoon.
Khushi: Acha! To ye bhi bata deejiye ki kiske deewane hain aap.
Sujal: Hai ek pagal! Khushi naam hai uska.
And they both laugh.
End of the Flashback
Sujal is crying and Karan comes.
Sujal: Tu! Yahan kya kar raha hai? Tujhe kaise pata mai yahan hoon?
Karan: Tere baare me pata lagane ke liye mujhe kisi source ki zaroorat nahin hai. Tu phir vo sab sochna laga………Tu apne past ko bhoolna ki koshish kyon nahin karta?
Sujal: Bhool jaaon? Kaise bhool jaaon Karan? Tu bata, apni zindagi ko main kaise bhula doon?
Karan: Dekh Sujal! Past me life nahin jee jaati. Khushi tera kal thi samjha!
Sujal: Par vo meri zindagi hai. Abhi tak mai use!!!!!!!! Kaise bhool jaaon ki meri wajah se vo (He is crying bitterly and hugs Karan) Mujhe meri Khushi vapas chahiye Karan! Mai uske bina jee nahin sakta Karan. Shayad isiliye maine aaj tak kisi ladki ko apne kareeb nahin aane diya. Magar Kashish……….
Karan: Magar Kashish ki baat alag hai. Kyonki tu us se pyaar…………
Sujal: Nahin! Mai us se pyaar nahi karta! Maine pyaar sirf Khushi se kiya tha!
Karan: Khushi ab teri zindagi me nahin aa sakti. Ye ek sachchai hai. Usi tarah ye bhi ek sachchai hai ki Kashish teri zindagi me aa chuki hai. Ab tu is sachchai ko maan ya thukra. Ye teri marzi hai. Lekin! Tu Kashish ko chahta hai, ispar ab teri marzi nahin chal sakti. Kyonki pyaar kiya nahin jaata, bas ho jaata hai.
Sujal: Mai nahin manta.
Karan: Tere maan ne ya na maan ne se kya hota hai, jab tera dil Kashish ko apna maan chuka hai.
Sujal: Ye sirf teri galatfehmi hai. Mai Kashish se kabhi pyaar kar hi nahin sakta.
Karan: Tujhe mai tujhse behtar jaanta hoon. Tere baare me jis din se mujhe galatfehmiyaan hone lagi naa, us din mai marna pasand karoonga.
Sujal: Nahin! Mai sirf Khushi se pyaar karta tha.
Karan: Bilkul sahi kaha tune. Tu Khushi se pyaar karta tha, lekin tu Kashish se pyaar karta hai. Ye baat tu jitni jaldi maan le, tere liye acha hoga.
Karan leaves Sujal alone to think about his life and Sujal is simply not ready to accept the fact that he has given Khushi's place to Kashish in his life.


Who is this Khushi? Sujal ki zindagi me uski kya ahmiyat hai? Kya Sujal manega ki uske dil me Khushi ki jagah Kashish le chuki hai? Kya Karan Nandini ko propose karega?

Wait naa! The Part-12 is coming soon to answer you.
Till then, Take Care and Stay Tuned.
Regards
Garima
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Posted: 18 years ago
Desperately waiting for yr comments 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
👏 Awesome......keep up the good work 😊 😉 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
Great part Garima!!..i just love this fan fic..keep it up... 👏 👏 👏 !!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
brilliant garima 👏 kya twist tha readers increase ho jayegey 😆 waiting for next part
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Posted: 18 years ago
Great Job
New twist
Continue soon!! 😛