FF: Should be end of PKYEK

Hey Guyz! m new here on forum.. but after reading d yesterday's update about Abhay dying i got an idea about how they should end the serial..hope u will like it Edited by seabeauty - 12 years ago

                           Book 1

 

Index:

Chapter 1:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1956097

Chapter 2(Part 1):

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1956097

Chapter 2(Part 2):

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1956097?pn=2

Chapter 3:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1956097?pn=3

Chapter 4(part 1&2):

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1956097?pn=4

Chapter 5:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1956097?pn=6

Chapter 6:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1956097?pn=7

Chapter 7:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1956097?pn=9

Chapter 8:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1956097?pn=10

Chapter 9:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1956097?pn=11

Chapter 10(part 1):

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1956097?pn=14

Chapter 10(part 2):

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1956097?pn=16

Chapter 11:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1956097?pn=18

Chapter 12(part 1):

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1956097?pn=21

Chapter12(part 2):

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1956097?pn=23

Chapter 13:
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1956097?pn=25

Chapter 14:

 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/50533837

Chapter 15:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1956097?pn=33

Chapter 16:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1956097?pn=35

 

                                 End of Book 1

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Edited by seabeauty - 12 years ago

It aint stupid!

Hey nice attempt.
Do continue soon.

New Update:

 

Part 1

 

Khurana Mansion:

Aleena got up in the morning and started pacing up and down her room thinking about a way to get out.  She went out in the sitting room for a while but Jeh was there waiting to pounce on her. So she had to come back.  Suddenly her attention went to her cupboard where a few books were sticking out. They looked pretty old. She went near to examine. They turned out to be ancient books from her tribal leaders which were now hers as she was the leader now.  She never bothered opening them before.  But now to get a way she started leafing through one book called "Spells for Leaders".

Dobriyal House:

Piya was still semi-conscious. Everyone was worried about her but they were helpless. Arnab didn't tell them that Raichand's were vampires. He just said Abhay died in an accident and now Raichand's have gone somewhere and they are not coming back. So Piya is very upset and ill. Sometime in early morning Piya went to sleep so they all went away too to give her a little bit privacy. Piya remembered in her dream that something same happened in Romeo and Juliet- her favourite book. Juliet kills herself after she hears that Romeo died. She woke with a start and got an idea. She didn't want to live without her Abhay as it was useless. She remembered that she used to keep sleeping pills when her memory was gone. She browsed through her dresser and found a full bottle.  She swallowed the whole bottle thinking I Love u Abhay. I can't live without you. This life is useless without you.

Originally posted by: MiniMouse810

Lovely! Continue soon!

  did it.. u cn check :)

hey nice story
as a first try its truly awesome
oh poor pia hope she is fine n alina gets the potion
i don't want the romio - juliet tragic end here
please continue soon n pm me please
take care

Nice work...continue soon n remember to PM me...I liked it

Originally posted by: cuteteddy

hey nice story
as a first try its truly awesome
oh poor pia hope she is fine n alina gets the potion
i don't want the romio - juliet tragic end here
please continue soon n pm me please
take care

  tahnx :)

Chapter 2

part 2

 

While turning pages idly, Alina finally found something useful. It said "to freeze any other werewolf you need to cast a spell, and he/she will freeze for an indefinite time until and unless you unfreeze him/her. It only works for the leader of the clan". Alina whooped over this and before Jeh could come to investigate she cast that spell around him which was successful. As Jeh froze she ran out immediately to the graveyard to the site where Abhay was trapped in the chains a few days ago. She began to look in the trees.

Dobriyal House:

Madhu( while crying) : I don't know what's wrong with our fate. We have problems after problems. When one thing gets solved other comes. Now I am worried about Piya . I don't know what will happen to her. Oh god! I am so helpless!

Arnab: calm down Madhu. God always plans good for people.  Misha( who was sad for Piya too) go and see if Piya is awake. She needs to eat something. Go.

Misha entered Piya's room accompanied by Panchi and they both screamed. Piya was lying on the floor trying hard to breath. She was turning blue.  They went to her and saw the bottle of sleeping pills in her hands. Arnab and Madhu came running. They took her to emergency immediately and she was pushed for an operation right then.

Raichand Mansion:

Haseena and Chand sitting grim faced. Abhay's body is on his bed lying lifeless. Haseena is crying quietly for her son.  Haseena remembers all the moments when Abhay was trying his hardest to save her. How he had to stay away from Piya in order to get the potion from Alina. Chand remembered the day he turned Abhay into a Vampire. All days when he supported him as his true son.

Chand( getting up): there is no use sitting here. I am going out to search the potion and look at Piya. Don't know what happened to her. Will be back later. Take care Haseena.

Haseena just nodded she didn't even had strength to get up or to speak.

Precap: "Sorry to say that, but she is in a semi-conscious state. She is out of danger but can't get out of coma bcoz she doesn't want to."Edited by seabeauty - 12 years ago