Fan-Fic 4 Saarrthi: Romeo and Juliet!!! - Page 4

Posted: 18 years ago
very very veryyyyyyyy sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet.
Posted: 18 years ago
Episode 11

(The teacher tells Arjun-Pakhi and the whole class of the trip 2 Blackwood Forest)

Arjun: arre wah...mujhe jungle buhut ache lagte hai...haina?
pakhi (luking worried): mujhe jungle ache nahin lagte hai...
arjun: kyun?
pakhi: wahan phar tigers hote hai...
arjun: acha...mujhe lagta tha ki tumhe tigers buhut pyaari lagte hai..
pakhi: arre voh ek joke tha....aur upar sey voh tigers mujhe....nahin....mujhe voh maardali gi...
arjun: ha..tho phir devdas ki madhuri ki tarha...maardala....
pakhi (getting a little annoyed): stop it...yeh joke plz....(starts shaking, arjun puts her arm around her)
arjun: hey...main hoon na...koi tiger tumhe parishaan nahin karega...isse pehle main uss tiger si daro...voh tiger mujhse dare ga...ok?
pakhi: ok....mujhe aapne mom se baat karne parege...
arjun: ha..mujhe bhi....lets hope ki mere mom ha kare...

(Next scene: sujal-tashu)
teacher: acha...students....humare class ek trip phir aa rahe hai...
tashu: acha...kaunse badi baat hai..?
teacher: aur badi baat yeh hai...ki hum chessington jaane wale hai..
sujal (getting happy): sach.....chessington.....woooo-hoooooo!!!!!!
tashu: wow...main tho jaogi....aapne mom si pochna parega....
sujal: i hope ki mere mom ha...kare....i hope so...

(Next scene: romeo and juliet)

teacher: theek hai clas...ek baat kehna hai...ki humare class shimla jaa rahe hai...
romeo: oh kool.....shimla....
teacher: ask yur parents 2nite...
juliet: main shimala jaana chahti hoo...lekin mera bhai mujhe nahin jaane dega...
romeo: lekin pochna....ok?
juliet: ok...

(the six individuals reach home)

(next scene: montague house....everyone is having their dinner)
romeo: erm...mom......mere teacher mujhe aur mere class ko trip phar lekhar jaana chahte hai...
shaku: kaha?
romeo: shimla...
shaku: SHIMLA!!!!! dimag kharab hogaya hai tumhara....itne door....
romeo: lekin....ek month ki liye...mom plz....
mansen (whispers 2 shaku): bhabhi...just agree....will be a gud riddance...just agree bhabhi...
shaku: ha...jao beta....jao....ek month ki liye...enjoy!!!
romeo: thanx mom...
sujal: ma....main ek month ki liye...chessington jaa raha hoo....waha ek hotel bhi hai...
shaku (shocked): kya!!!!
siddarth (whispers): mansen ni kya kaha tha.....?
shaku: jao...tum bhi jao...aur enjoy!!!!
arjun: ma...main europe ki jungles main jaa raha hoo...
shaku: what!!!!!!
baisa: shakuntala....bache ko jaane do....mansen ni kya kaha tha...
shaku: jao....tum bhi jaao....
the 3 boys: ok....(run upstairs)
siddarth: abh hum badi assani sey shanti milege....yeh bachi hume buhut trouble karte hai..
shivz: finally.....no more brothers...
zeeshan: main abhi yahan hoon...
shivz: uff....abhi ek baaqi hai....

(next scene: capulet house)

juliet: ma...main shimla jaa rahe hoo....
tulsi: kyun...?
juliet: educational trip....
tulsi: hmmm....theek hai...jao...enjoy!!!
juliet: thank u....u r the best....
mhihir: hain.....thori dhir pehle tum keh rahe thi...ki i'm the best......
juliet: ok...u r the best.....
tashu: mom.....mujhe bhi....chessington jaana hai...
mihir: acha...tum bhi jao...
tashu: thank u papa.....thank u so much...
pakhi: aur main bhi.....
mihir: ha...tum bhi jao...
cezzane: papa....lekin...
mihir: sshh......jaane do inne....we'll get gud riddance....hehehehe....

Precap: The three jodis r preparing to leave for their trips.

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Posted: 18 years ago
Episode 12

(The six individuals r at school leaving for their trip)

Arjun: buhut excited hoo kya?
pakhi: hmm...thora sa excited....aur thora sa daar...
arjun (puts her arm around): mere saath hoge....tho phir puri tarha excited hoge...
pakhi (smiles): sach....tho phir main har pal tumhare saath hoge...tumhare buhut kareeb...
(arjun gets reminded of the dream he had...and smiles again)
pakhi: kya hua...u're smiling...?
arjun: hmm...aise....hehehe....
(both get on the bus....)
arjun: yui chala chala....yui chala chala...
pakhi: tum aap ne aap ko shahrukh kahn samjhthi ho kya?
arjun: nahin....balqi....main shahrukh khan si bhi ziada cute hoo....
pakhi: hehehe....jo bhi ho....

(Next scene: sujal-tashu)
tashu: pata hai...sujal...mujhe chessington buhut acha lagta hai....
sujal: hmm...mujhe bhi...yaar kitne mazi ki jaga haina?
tashu: koi shaq....aur..umm.....chocolates...
sujal: oh sure...ok...(tashu gives him a kit-kat...)....mmm....yum-yum....
tashu: tumhara favourite ride kaunsa hai?
sujal: mera...favourite ride hai.....ramses revenge....
tashu:arre wah.....i luv that ride...aur mujhe voh....umm.....dragons' fury....yaar i luv that ride as well...
sujal: oh yeah....my sister shivangi...freaked out at that ride...
tashu: hehehehe....really...kabhi kabhi introduce me 2 shivangi..
sujal: theek hai..lekin she is a complete trouble maker...doosri din ko pata kya hua...there r four brothers...yeah..
tashu: hmm..?
sujal: and if any of us just jokes wid her...and she screams out MOM...and our mom give sus a beating...
tashu: hehehe....bechara u and yur brothers....
sujal: shukaria 4 yur sympathy....but oh well...lets talk about chessington....
tashu: umm.....i also like vampire...
sujal: vampire...oh romeo and i been on that ride 40 times...
tashu: 40 times...
sujal: yeah...and yaar we enav get fed up of it...
tashu: sujal...tum bhi na....

(Next scene: Romeo and Juliet in the plane)
romeo: so...first time u r going 2 shimla..?
juliet: yeah...spent my whole life in london...but isnt it going 2 be different......i mean...no more big ben tower striking early in the morning...
romeo: oh....i hate it when the big ben tower strikes....yaar so loud...
juliet: oh.....i heard that shimla is romantic...
romeo: kaise...how is it romantic...?
juliet: bcoz a lot of snow and maple leaves and wagera wagera....
romeo: hmm....u believe in love at first sight...
juliet: umm yeah...it exists but happens rarely....why u dont?
romeo: hmm...same views as yurs....hehe....
juliet: tho....how did yur mom let u go 4 shimla?
romeo: oh...she wants 2 get rid of me......but i no..inner heart she might be missing me and my brothers..
juliet: yur brothers?
romeo: they're gone on trips as well.....bechari shivz doesnt have any1 2 pick on...except zeeshan....
juliet: u have a wonderful family...hehe....
romeo: yeah...wonderful but annoying at some times...

Precap: The three jodis reach their destinations, the luv stories have just begun.

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Posted: 18 years ago
wowwwwwwww gr8888888 love story begin.......i m sooooooooo exited.
Posted: 18 years ago
Episode 13

(Arjun~Pakhi reach the forest...)

Arjun:arre wah....kaamal ki place hai yeh....chalo pakhi..
Pakhi (getting off): yeh kahan aa gaye hain hum.....how tacky...
arjun: tacky ki bachi...chalo...
teacher: ok...students...plz pick a partner...and stay wid yur partner at all times...
arjun: tum mere partner banogi....
pakhi: tigers si mere protection karoge..?
arjun: ha baba....sab logo si protect karoga tumhe...
pakhi: ok...then phir chalo...
arjun: acha....yeh phar camp karna parega...
teacher: we will camp here...and plz be wid each other at all times...then 2nite we will move out of the forest and go to a hotel and hang around Europe as well...
pakhi: oohh....europe....how wonderful...
arjun: yeah...how wonderful...chalo...i want some photos of this place...
pakhi: ok...give me yur camera....(walsk slightly backwards and trips and falls down...the bushes scratched her arm a little)
arjun (getting tensed 😳 ): arre pakhi...tum theek to ho?
pakhi: huh....oh...i scratched myself...(luk at her arm)
arjun: ooh...dekhao...show me...(luks at it)....oh...aisa karta hoo ki main isse medicine lagata hoo...
pakhi: ok...lekin pehle...chalo...
arjun (gets the medicines): it might hurt...but dont worry...(puts the medicines on gently and carefully)
pakhi: oww....aram se...
arjun: ok...(puts more medicine on it...)
Pakhi: ow......carefully yaar...
arjun (now bandages the scratch)...there...now dont move the arm...if it hurts that much...now chalo...
pakhi: chalo...

(Next scene: Sujal~Tashu)

Sujal: wow....chessington...wonderful yaar.....finally reached here..
Tashu: kool.....nice place haina?
sujal: koi shaq?......wow...first...i need 2 unpack... then have fun on the rides...wooo-hoooo....
tashu: ok...lets go and get a hotel room.....
(both go and themselves a room each and go and unpack...)
tashu: hmm....no eyeliner 2day....lots of water rides....ok...this goes there...and this goes here....and here...i'll put it here....and done!!!
sujal: oh...tashu...r u ready.....my unpacking is done...how long r u going 2 take?
tashu: i'm ready now...come on...
sujal (to himself): nice gal...at least she doesnt take long time...like other girls...hehehe....
tashu: huh...what did u say...
sujal: erm...nothing....chalo..
tashu: chalo....
(sujal and tashu go and give their keys 2 the reception and r about 2 leave)
sujal: here r our keys...
reception: thank u...sir.....ok...Mr. and Mrs. Montague...have a nice trip...
tashu: huh...mrs..what?
sujal: erm...shez not my wife....erm..just a frends...
reception: oh..sorry....but u two make a great jodi...
tashu: erm...thanx...
sujal: thank u...(both leave)
sujal: we do make a great jodi dont we?
tashu: sujal lets go..before i try 2 strangle u like rani mukherjee from hum tum....
sujal: ok...lets go...

(Next scene: Romeo~Juliet)

Romeo: wow....away from traditional London...to a hillytown named shimla....
juliet: its beautiful....
romeo: it nsows here as well....might sumtimes play in the snow..bcoz it doesnt snow much in london...
juliet: ok...lets go...
teacher: ok..students...plz...stay together...and always return to yur hotel rooms by 6:30...
romeo: 6:30...a bit too early....what about 8:30...?
juliet: my mom doesnt even let me out that late...
teacher: fine...Mr. Montague...8:30....
romeo: wooo-hoo....ok...chalo....
(both go for their hotel rooms, and walk up 2 their hotel rooms)
juliet (luking inside her oom): wow.....what a beautiful room.....nice bed...nice shower.....its kool...
(romeo goes in his room)
romeo: is this heaven or a hotel room....a triple bed...a nice shower.....ooo....(luksin the cupboards and finds chocolates)...wow....this place is just wow..
(both go outside..)
romeo: hey...so how is yur room?
juliet: it is spectacular....beautiful....what about yurs?
romeo: mine? my room is like heaven....completely perfect and beautiful...
juliet: so...shall we go...and hang around shimla?
romeo: sure...?

Precap: The three jodis r enjoying their destinations, but are feeling different towards each other..

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Posted: 18 years ago
Episode 14

(Arjun-Pakhi r now hanging around Europe...and r now shopping...)

arjun: hmm....yeh leather jacket kaise hai....(ries it on)
pakhi: hmm....acha hai...lekin...koi black wala tho try karo...
arjun: ok...(tries the black on)...kaisa laga?
pakhi: hmm.....buhut acha....
arjun: lekin...mujhe koi black t-shirt bhi chahe....aur...koi black jeans bhi...kaisa lage ga...?
pakhi (smiles): buhut acha...kya tum uss party phar lagao gi...
ajun: ha...kyun...bad choice hai kya?
pakhi: arre...nahin....tumne choose kya hai...tho bad kaise hoga? (pulls his cheeks as a joke)
arjun: stop it..pakhi...
pakhi: hehe....aur..party phar main kaunsa dress choose karo?
arjun: erm...kyun na....white dress choose karo?
pakhi: white?
arjun: ha...white mein tum...?
pakhi: kya..?
arjun: tum angel ki tarha dekhti hoo...
pakhi: hehe....how chhhwweett....
arjun: i no...arent i?
pakhi: hmm...will i a sharara be gud..?
arjun: ooh...yeah....especially when u will be like shamita shetty.....sharara sharara...
pakhi (blushes): stop it arjun...acha...(picks up a white sharara)...main yeh try karki aate hoo...
arjun: ok...(later pakhi comes out wearing the white sharara wid the laal dupatta around her neck, arjun cant resist luking at her)
arjun: wow.....u luk fantastic....(smiles)
pakhi: really...?
arjun: really....u luk astonishing....
pakhi: i'll buy it then....i'll just change....
arjun: ok...(both arjun~pakhi buy their dresses..)
arjun: ooh....shall we check out the perfume shop?
pakhi: oh alrite...

(Next scene: Sujal~Tashu)

sujal: pata hai tashu...yahan phar ek party hoge..?
tashu: acha...tho?
sujal: tho...main soch raha tha...ki hum dono shopping chale....aur koi dresses buy kare...party ke liye...
tashu: theek hai...vaise....shopping mujhe buhut acha lagta hai...
(both go iside a shop)
sujal: vaise...tashu tumhe batao...ki party ki liye...mujhe suit lagana chahe ya phir ek polo neck wid jacket aur wid trousers...?
tashu: hmm....polo neck wid....trousers and jacket...u would luk better like that...
sujal: sach....acha...phir kaunse colour mein try karo..?
tashu: vaise...usually....black suits guys...black mein try karo...
sujal: ok..(goes 2 try the outfit...coms back)....kaisa laga?
tashu: wow....u luk really elegant....
sujal: really...?
tashu: more bbter...than in a suit...
sujal: if it is that gud...then i'll buy it...(goes 2 get changes..meanwhile tashu is luking 4 her own outfit)
sujal (gets back): done...acha...what about yur outfit?
tashu: erm...i need a little help...what do u think will suit me?
sujal: erm...normally...u wear somthign to a aprty...that is not worn every day...u no..sumthing different...
tashu: oh...like...erm...like what?
sujal: like...u wear trouser suits....churidaar and all that 2 school...so...try sumthing like a sharara?
tashu: hmm.....erm.....too tight
sujal: probably a gharara...?
tashu: erm...thats like a trouser style...i want sumthing thats....
sujal: girly...feminine...erm...try a sari
tashu: a sari? r u serious?
sujal: erm...not exactly serious....but....not joking either...
tashu: but i neva tried a sari...i dont no how 2 put it on..
sujal (smiles): i'll help u wid it..
tashu: in yur dreams....Mr. Sujal Montague...
sujal: uff...thats the problem wid u girls...always complaining...
tashu: i'm not one of those girls that complain....
sujal: i no....thats what i like about u...
tashu: hmm.....sweet...now what colour should i wear?
sujal: hmm....red....red is beeautiful and atractive...
tashu: hmm..ok....then red...chalo...lets buy the outfits...(both go 2 the counter)

(Next scene: Romeo~Juliet)

Juliet: ok....romeo..(knocks)...hey u there?
romeo: yes...i'm just changing...
juliet: oh ok..i'll be waiting downstairs...we need 2 go shopping...
romeo: why....?
juliet: theres going 2 be a party...and we need new outfits...
romeo: oh ok...abhi aaya....
(juliet is downstairs in the lobby..romeo comes)
romeo: tho...wassup?
juliet: oh there will be a party in shimla...and..so i thought that we can do some shopping....
romeo: ok..then..lets go....
(both go 2 a shop)
juliet: so...what will u choose?
romeo: i'm thinking of wearing a suit.....
juliet: kool...what colour?
romeo: black...black always makes a guy luk attractive...and vaise girls luv guys who wear black...
juliet: wow...u no what girls like...hehehe...
romeo: hmm....its hereditary....my dad tells me such things...so what will u choose...?
juliet: a black lengha....(picks up the dress)
romeo: kool....(both buy their outfits...)

Precap: Pakhi catches a cold and Arjun unable to control his emotions and Pakhi's pain, hugs her tightly. Sujal saves Tashu from a bunch of bullies, and hugs Tashu, unable to see her fear and pain. Meanwhile Romeo is unable to control himself when he is close to Juliet.

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Posted: 18 years ago
Episode 15

(Pakhi and Arjun r out hanging in switzerland.....)

arjun: ooo.....switzerland...kitna...khoobsurat haina?
pakhi (shivering): yyeaah......ooohhh.....cold....
arjun: i luv it...
pakhi (sneezes): atchooo.....
arjun: oh...tumhe sardi lage hai...yeh lo...(gives her his jacket..)
pakhi: nahin....tumhe bhi sardi lage gi...aur...
arjun: arre...main kuch nahin suna chahta...tum yeh jacket lo...
pakhi: ok..(arjun gently wraps the jacket around her..)
arjun: chalo..wapis hotel mein chalti hai...
(both go 2 the reception and get their keys..they reach the rooms..)
arjun: chalo..main bhi tumhare saath jaoga...tumhare health theek nahin hai...
pakhi: sach...arjun main theek ho....atchoooo....
arjun: acha...theek ho...varna aise atchooo...nahin karte...
pakhi: lekin....mera itna care kyun karte hoo tum?
arjun: kyunki tum mere buhut achi aur pyaari dost hoo... 😳 πŸ˜› πŸ˜‰
pakhi (smiles): acha....so chhwweett....
arjun: i no....buhut chhwweet hoo main haina?
(arjun goes and gets warm tea 4 pakhi and wraps blankets around her and sits closely next 2 her)
pakhi: thanx...
arjun: hey...koi baat nahin....aur dosti mein no thanx ya phir no sorries...ok?
pakhi: ok...(smiles)
arjun: heek hai..main jaa raha hoo....kuch chahe tho phir u know...call me...ok?
pakhi: theek hai...(arjun leaves)
(pakhi switches on the tv...and gets lost in arjun's thoughts....suddenly she sees that arjun is sitting next 2 her)
pakhi: arre arjun...tum yahan...?
arjun: haan....main yahan...tumhare dil mein..(comes more close and whispers) tumhare maan mein....tumhare yaadein mein...
pakhi: lekin....tum jao yahan se....
arjun: kaise....tum mere baari mein sochti hoo..iss liye aata hoo...(gently puts pakhi on the bed and goes over on top of her...)
arjun (wid pasion in eyes and whispers): sirf main aur tum...aur koi nahin...(hugs her...and pakhi can hear a slap..the slap came from Kyunki Saas Bhi Kabhi Bahu Thi..)
pakhi: uff....yeh ekta ki serials bhi na...baar baar thappar ki awaz mere sapno ko disturb karti hai...lekin...aisa sapna phirse kyun...main arjun ki taraf kyun aise....why am i getting attracted to him?

(Next scene: Sujal~Tashu)

(tashu has just brought some flower...some for herself and some for sujal..)

tashu (smells the flowers): ooh....buhut khoobsurat...arre sujal..
sujal: haan tashu...arre flowers...tumne buy kiye hai..?
tashu: haan....koi mere liye...aur yeh sab tumhare liye...
sujal: mere liye....flowers..(smells them)...ooh...buhut..zabardast....aur khoobsurat....pehle baar kisi larki ni mujhe flowrs diye hai...
tashu: hehehe....acha...aur...erm...chale...erm sujal..?
sujal: haan?
tashu: kyun na..uss ride phar chale?
sujal: kaunse?
tashu: that one...(points to the vampire ride..)
sujal: theek hai...lekin ek minute...
tashu: kya..?
sujal: games...stall...i luv them...
tashu: uff...abhi bachi ho tum...
sujal: i no...i'm taking advantage of my youth years...
tashu: hehe...tum bhi....
sujal: chalo...na...
tashu: nahin...main yahee theek hoo...
sujal: ok..(goes 2 the games stall)
(a gang of gangsters come and start bothering tashu)
guy 1: hey...luk at her...kool gal...
tashu (getting annoyed): erm...if u dont mind...can u leave my way plz..? (about 2 go...but another guy grabs her hand)
tashu: let go of me...
guy 2: how can we...u r one in a million...
tashu (luking angry): this is the limit now....let go of me...
guy 2: kabhi nahin...
tashu (slaps him): how dare u?
(another guy coming towards tashu...tashu backing off...screams)
tashu (screams): SUJAL!!!!!!!
(sujal turns around and sees the guys bothering tashu...)
sujal (luking angry): ooiii.....son of a idiot....
guy 1: kaun hoo tum?
sujal: tumhe kya....? let her go..
guy 2: neva....over my dead body...
sujal: ooi...until now...874 guys ended up in the operation thetare after having a taste of my knuckles...(preses his fists together0
guy 3: whateva...over my dead body....
sujal: ok...yur wish...my command...(sujal and the gangsters start a fight.....the gangsters run off)
sujal: ha-ha...see....no one can compete over Sujal Montague....
tashu: hey....thanx 4 saving me....
sujal: hey...no worries...
tashu (sees sujal's hand): hey...u r bleeding...
sujal: oh..this...oh...just a minor wound...
tashu: no..no..u saved me...and...(shivers a little)
sujal: r u ok?
tashu: yeah....its just that i got scared a little..(eyes filling up)
sujal: hey..it's ok....(gives her a hug...)

(Next scene: Romeo~Juliet)

romeo: so...r u enjoying shimla?
juliet: hmm...course i am....what about u?
romeo: having the time of my life...(takes a sip from his coke..)
juliet: hmm...its such a chhwweet place....and...(stars snowing...)....it;s snowing....
romeo: wow....it's snowing.....wooooooo-hooooooooo...snow...i like snow...
juliet: lekin...its cold as well......
romeo: come on juliet....snow is not that bad....
juliet: yeah...but i will catch a cold....and...(starts stepping back...and trips over and falls down the hill in the garden)
romeo: juliet....what happened...r u ok....(goes down...but falls as well)
juliet: oh....i wasnt watching carefully....and i slipped...
romeo: r u ok....not hurt r u?
juliet: no...but....my head...has a little pain...
romeo: oh...dont worry...lets go back 2 the hotel....u need some rest.....
juliet: no..i'm ok...
romeo: i dont want 2 listen 2 anything....come on...
(both go back 2 the hotel.....and juliet is taking a little rest in her room)
romeo: how r u feeling? (gives her water 2 drink)
juliet: a bit better....
romeo: gud...erm...i'll be next door in my room....u need anything....just give me a call
juliet: ok..(romeo leaves)
(juliet in in her room...sleeping she turns around...and feels someone behind her...she turns around and sees its romeo..)
juliet: romeo....u here.....i thought u were gone...
romeo: i'm only here..bcoz u think of me....(comes more close...)
juliet: erm....u should go....(is about go but romeo catches up behind her..and puts his arms around her)
romeo: why r u nervous juliet? it's only u and me....sirf tum aur main...(hugs her tightly...juliet wakes up from her dream)
juliet: uff......this is scary...why am i gettign these kind of dreams...?

Precap: Arjun luks after Pakhi and feels more close 2 her than ever. Tashu is alseep, Sujal drops her off at the hotel in her room,and strokes her hair. Meanwhile Romeo and Juliet get more closer together.

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Posted: 18 years ago
great
i think i am out of this ff
Posted: 18 years ago
wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww kya baat hai πŸ˜› ........busy ho fir bhi kya scene likhti ho shirley πŸ˜‰ ........main to fida ho gayi.. 😳 😳 plz write soon. πŸ˜ƒ

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Fan fiction that imitates the style of the original (e.g. Mahābhārata)

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