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kya yeh milenge(a mayurff)

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                            mayank and nupur both are orphanage both live in anath asharam . both are very good friends  agar ek khana nahi khat to dusra bhi nahi khat tha agar ek ko chot lagti thi to dard dusre ko hota tha .
mayank ne nupur ko ek dil shaped locket diya tha jisme undono i snaps thi .or khas baat ye thi ki uske do tukde kar sakte the nupur ki snaps wala part mayank ke pass or mayank ki snaps  wala part nupur ke pass.
but destiny ko kuch or hi manjoor tha
at the age of 6 a very rich couple come and adopted nupur and take her with them .pehle to nupur chup chap se rahte thi but dhere dhere samay ke saath wo bhi badal gayi.
but doesn't forget mayank . or mayank after 14 mayank ne part time job karne ke sath sath  I.S.C complete ki ab next week se excel join kar raha hai jaha nupur bhi hai .

one thing i forget to tell you gyus bachpan mein mayank nupur ko chuhia or nupur mayank ko bandar keh kar bulati thi . so the only thing jo un dono ko milane wali thi wo thi wo locket and that locket plays a vital role in their  life. mayank aur nupur ko wo naam unke juda hone ke baad mein milen .

actually i have written this ff long time back but due to my study and now due to my hectic job i am not able to give update . and know my last topic is banned and i am not able to post update .

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pehle pehle nupur bahut udas rahte thi  thik se khana nahi khati thi kisise bhat nahi karti thi hamesa apne bandar(mayank) ko yad karti thi . but shasi bhushan and ratna bhushan are best human and parents in the world unke pyar or apne pan se nupur dere dere waha adjust karne lagi or unhe mom dad bulane lagi . apne dad ki wo ladli thi agar use fever ho jai to uske dad pure city ke doctors ki line laga dete the . and mom ki dulari . and nokro ki malkin hamesha unhe tang karti thi but uski masumyat par sab ka dil aa jata tha . agar use gusa aa gaya to phir to pura ghar ka halat khrab kar deti thi.she is the most famous girl in the school and now in college doing engineering in b.tech from excel college of engineering  mumbai . and now she is in second year .

or uske sab group member jo uske saath bachpan se the samarat,gunjan,dia,benji,uday,and rahul are also in same and gues what she is the daughter of college trusty jaha jaha wo jati thi uske dad wo kharid late the thats why se is their .

and don't ask me uday (dodo) waha kaise pauch gaya .

now gyus ab bari aati hai apne hro ki 

nupur ke jane ke baad mayank bahut udas rahne laga tab orphanage ki made ne use samgaya ki agar use nupur ko dhundna hai to use padna phadega kuch banna padega   tab wo nupur ko  dhund sakta hai. fir kya tha aap to apne mayank bhai shab ko to jante hi ho kuch than le to chodata first mein jaha usne first aana suru kiya phir kya tha second wo aata hi nahi tha. after tenth he did diploma in IT and doing part time job side by side and after giving a scolership and topping it now from tomorrow he is going to join excel tomorrow jaha par uski chuhia hai .


kaha chale gyus abhi kaha part 1 to padhte jao jara cursor niche jumha or padh lo
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                                                                           PART1
NU-NUPUR, MA-MAYANK,SA-SAMARAT,GU-GUNJAN, BE-BENJI,DA-DIA, DO-DODO,RA - RAHUL. SORRY GYUS I AM GOING TO WRITE A HINDI +EMGLISH VERSON FF BUT MOSTLY HINDI
SO GUYS MY FF GOING TO START.WISH ME LUCK .

venu - juhu most posh area of mumbai
7:00 am
The seen starts from exterior of big house a very big house in which their are almost 20 big rooms and in one of that room a very beautiful girl is sleeping her mother came and open the cutains of her room through which early morning sunlight is coming . and after that har sleep is disturbed .
nm;beta galdi utho aaj coolege khul raha hai na .
nu; mom please sone do na ;
nm; as u wish agar tum late ho gayi to tumhare papa jo gift lae hai wo wapas chala jayega .
nu; whatever ,and then suddenly what gift mom pehle kun nahi bataya i am at brekfast table in 20 minutes .(ab ladkiyon ko itna to time lagega hi na).
nm;OK we both are waiting jaldi aana .
nd;meri beti kaha hai
nm; aa rahi hai

the n they both turn towards stair where our nupur is standing wearing and wearing ablack geans and black top looking most beautiful .
and comes to her dad .
nu; dad mera gift kaha hai.
nd; first you eat youre then i am going to give you your gift .
nu;ok
afterr breakfast
nu;so tellme dad where is my gift
nd; uske liye tumhe apni chair se uthna padega ghar se bhar aana padega
or dekhna hoga apna gift .
after seeing the gift nupur ka muh to khula ka khula hi reh jata hai
it's a red farrari wich seen rarely in india .
nu; thankyou dad you are the best dad in the world .
nd; anything for my princesses . and here are the keys go and enjoy it.

now cut to excel college 
7:55
everybody is standing and waiting for nupur

dia; ye nupur kaha reh gai
gu; haa yar bell bajne mein sirf 5 minute bache hai.
sam; chill gyus wo aajagi wo nupur hai the great nupur bhushan .

and now everyone in the campus seeing a red farrari (farrari is a very very costly carr) freeze jo jaha khada tha wahi khada reh jata hai and when it stops everyone is eager to know who is sitting in . and now everyone sees that she is none other than our nupur .
 

everyone goes to her
sam; hey nupur farrari   nice .
nu; dad ne aag hi mujhe gift diya.
dia ; so nupur hame drive kab milengi.
gu; hold on gyus class mein sirf 2 minute bache hai pehla lecture shukla ka hai .
sam; no yarr chasmish koi bhi lecture lagva lo but uska nahi .
gu; par semester ka pehla lecture hai we have to atend it.
nu;ok,ok hum sab class mein jaa rahe hai final  and sees a boy is standing at some distance hey akshay park my car . she loves her friend thats why she doesn't give key's tothem to  park a car .
ak;ok nupur. no student in the college say no to her .

thats is our nupur.(bossy ,loving, and januable)
8:00 am
in class room of fourty student +their are going to be three more from leads

sukla; suprabhat vidhyartio .
asss;good morning sirand  pressing their noses
sukla; so aap sab second year mein pauch gaye .aap logo ke sath teen student or jud gaye hai . they are
tue studennt stands up
first; suhani
second adhiraj
sh;ok. aaplog beth jaiye aap logo se mein kuch prashn puchna chata hu.
     semiconductor kya hota  hai.aur iska gawab denge mister uday.
after thinking almost five he give the answer
do;sir jab samarat yani apna samy koi basket karta hai to use kehte hai
samy con ductor.
afte hearing the answer
su; mujhe samjh mein nahi aata aapne fist year kaise paas  kar liya . nalayak.
or sab hus rahe th e man hi man mein
9:00 am next period free period
sab jaa rahe hote hai tabhi nupur do nai student ko bulati hai .
nu; tum do ho wo tisra kaha hai . aaj aaya nahi kya .
su ; sayad .
sam; acha aaj pehla din hai to tumhe kuch to karna hi padhe ga
.
and then they take their intro little bit where suhani has to sing a song where adhiraj has to dance.
and this is seen by principal but he doesn't said anything and goes to his cabin
now
everyone goes to canteen for brekfast but peon comes and told nupur principal is calling her .
nu ; ok gyus mein principle sir bula rahe hai mein dus minute mein aaye
 
at principal cabin
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                         part2
9:10 am

nu; guys tum canteen chalo mein principal sir se mil ke aati hun
all;OK
nupur ke jane ke baad
sam;so gyus chale .
gu;par samarat canteen to us taraf hai idhar to principal sir ka office hai.
dia;babes chill yar todhi masti ho gaye.
ben; you are always right dear.
 
allwent to principal office and try to listen what they talk .

inside the principal office
 pr; so nupur tumhara din kaise jaa raha hai.
nu; fine abhi to aaj ki surwat hui hai abhi pura din pada hai.
pr;aur din ki surwat mein hi masti chalu un dono ki ragging kar dala pehle hi din .
nu; sir humne ragging nahi ki just a formal intro.
pr; u no what ye formal intro hi ragging ban jata hai.
nu; sorry sir aage se nahi hoga .
pr; better waise tumhare class mein kal ek naya ladka aa raha hai.
    uske bahut charche sune hai . suna hai pure Maharashtra mein scholarship exam mein first aaya hai . jaha bhi jata hai first hi aata hai.
study ,extra curricular activity ya kuch bhi wo hamesa first hi aata hai.
nu; in low tone whatever .

pr; so uske sath no chaed khani ok.
nu; ok sir .
pr; waise nupur mere pass tumhare liye kuch hai.
nu; what sir .
pr;gift , and guess what.
nu; inspiron r5010 or who bhi i7
pr;you like it
nu; ya thanku sir
pr; meri kut si princess ke liye kuch bhi jao or masti karo or padhai bhi karne  chuhia .
nu; sir make an angry face first of all aap mujhe promise kijiye ki aap mujhe is naam se nahi bulange .
pr; ok baba ab nahi bulaunga kush
nu;bahut
pr;aab jao.

(gyus you must bhi thinking why principal mr saxena give nupur a laptop an called her chuhia then come with me in flash back.)

14 years ago

shashi bhushan and mr saxena are childhood friends .

sx;hey sashi yaha kaise aana hua suna hai tune ye school hi kharid liya.
sh; kuch nahi yaar apni bati ka admission karana tha .
sx to uske liye tune school hi kharid liya.
sh;mere jigar ka tukda hai wo usko aase hi kahi thodena dal dunga .
    ayr yaha tu rahega to mujhe tasali rahegi.
sx ;ok waise hamari beti hai kaha .

then hi sees a little girl around 5 comes in a pink frock look like an angle
sx;wo nanhi si bachi ko apni godi mein utha leta hai aur puchta hai
     aap ka naam kya hai.
little girl; chuhia.
sx what aap ka naam kya hai.
girl; chuhia.
 
saxeena apni dost ki tarf dekhta hai aur fir shashi use sari baat batata hai aur uska naam nupur likhwata hai.
sh; sakena ek promise karenga.
sx hukum kar yaar .
sh; meri beti ka khyal rkhna jab wo school mein hogi thik hai.
sx ; ok promise.

tabse mr saxena nupur ko apni beti mante hai.
 
flash back ends

gang sees that nupur is coming and they dissapear from their and march towards canteen.

10:30

in canteen

be; wow nupur new inspiron wo bhi i7 great.
sam; nupur special hai to special cheag hi milengi na.
nu; stop it gyus ab makhan lagana band bhi karo .
dia;waise princy us naye ladke ke bare mein kya bata raha tha   chuhia and winks.
nu; nupur give him a very amgry glare
(aisa nahi hai ki hamari nupur se koi majak nahi kar sakta tha but this time)
       and, holding diyas hand firmly ,diya tum meri best friend ho or mein nahi chahti ki kissi bhi wajah se tumhare or mere bich kuch anban ho gaye to main tumhe aaj ek baat bolna chahti hu mujhe aainda kabhi chuhia mat bulana majak mein bhi nahi tum uski gajah kissise bhi naam se bula sakti ho . but not chuhia kun ki uspar sirf ek insaan ka hak hai.
sam;kaun mr saxena
nu;nahi.
gun; nupur kya mein tumse ek baat puch sakti hun .
nu; tujhe mujhse permission lene ki jarrorat kabse pad gai.
gun; nupur tum kissie ka intajar kar rahi ho kya.
sam; ha nupur , i mean jabse hum tumhe jante tum kisie ladke  ko bhav hi nahi deti . aisa kun.
nu; hold on gyus mein bataati huntumhe sab kuch batati hun but yaha nahi hamare hangout place pai ok.
all ;OK.
after college is finished all are at their hangout place.

sam; so nupur start your story.
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gun; nupur kya mein tumse ek baat puch sakti hun .
nu; tujhe mujhse permission lene ki jarrorat kabse pad gai.
gun; nupur tum kissie ka intajar kar rahi ho kya.
sam; ha nupur , i mean jabse hum tumhe jante tum kisie ladke  ko bhav hi nahi deti . aisa kun.
nu; hold on gyus mein bataati huntumhe sab kuch batati hun but yaha nahi hamare hangout place pai ok.
all ;OK.
after college is finished all are at their hangout place.

sam; so nupur start your story.

nu; as all of you know that i am adopted but mom and dad never ever realige me that.
     gyus jab maine orphanej mein thi to waha ek ladka thajise mein bandar keh kar bulati thi aur wo mujhe chuhia .hum log ekdusre ke bina nahi reh sakte the . and after that mom and dad come and adopted me . and that he promised me that he will find me one day and i am waiting for that day.
gu; uska naam kya hai.
nu;i don't know .
sm;what you don't know the name jiska tum intazar kar rahi ho .
nu;yaaa.
dia; acha yeh sab chodo wo dikhta kaisa tha.

so gyus ready for our hero entry hear goes .in nupur's word.

and we sees that a big car garage in front of us .

nu; wo dikhta kaisa tha uske nile nile akhein . and we sees a man under a car repairing it . aur wo jab hasta tha to by god galo par dimples pad jate the .now we see the young man comes out from under the car and seeing something spreading his smile  and dimples are on his face .aur jab uske balo ko haath lago to ek hi baat kahta tha " balo ko haath mat lagao"
now we sees the face of the person and guess what he is none other than our ...

all of them to aisa tha tumhara rajkumar
di; par uske body.
be; dua jab nupur ne use dekha hoga towo sirf panch ya 6 saal ka hoga .
di;ohhh.

sa; tum nupur sure ho wo tumhe milega .
nu; usne mujhse wada kiya hai our wo apne wade kabhi nahi todta.
gu; mujhe tumhare wishwas par pura wishwas hai.
sa; to ye reason tha tumhara kisi ko bhav na dene ka .
nu;yaaa
ben; bichara rahul ab uska kya hoga .
nu ;shut up.

now its late and all proceed towards their home.

                                           part4
nu; wo dikhta kaisa tha uske nile nile akhein . and we sees a man under a car repairing it . aur wo jab hasta tha to by god galo par dimples pad jate the .now we see the young man comes out from under the car and seeing something spreading his smile  and dimples are on his face .aur jab uske balo ko haath lago to ek hi baat kahta tha " balo ko haath mat lagao"
now we sees the face of the person and guess what he is none other than our ...

ma ;ok pajji toda kam hogaya gadi thik ho gai.
ka; gindo re putar jish chij ko bhi chuta hai sona ban jati hai bhagwan teri sari khawaish puri kare .
ma; pajji sari nahi wo sirf ek hi puri kar de to bahut hai .
ka; kon si putar
ma; hai ek khawish jiske liye mein jee raha hoon .
ka; god is great wo teri wish jarror puri karenge .
ma;acha pajji kal se mein sirf teen ya char ghante hi kam par aa sakunga.
ka; oye hero koi jarrorat nahi hai kam par aane ki tu apni padhai par dhyan de tera kharcha mein dunga .
ma;pajji tusi mainu jante ho mein ye ehsan nahi le sakta .
ka;oye khote tu itna bhi nahi samjha main business ka bada paka hu jab kama lena to de dena with 15% intrest .
ma;but pajji.
ka;chup .acha chal saturday or sunday aa jaiyo or hargadi thik karne par 500  le lena.
ma. acha thik hai.
ka;acha ab jaa kal subha tujhe college bhi jana hai na.
ma;ok pajji mein chalta hun .

kartar sing kissed on mayank forhead .and said.
ka;joinda  reh putar hamesha awal hi rehna.

mayank left from their and thinking
ma; chuhia mein aa raha hun mein janta hun tu yahi kahi hai isi liye to delhi se yaha aaya hun tujhe dundhne . bhagawan se yahi dua hai ki tum mujhe bhuli naa ho.

now next day at excel .

all gaing are sitting at the stairs
be ;ye nupur kaha reh gai .
di;aa gayegi don't worry .
ud;gyus aaj class mein ek naya ladka aa raha hai suna hai topper hai .
be; topper hai to kya hua bina ragging ke thodi hi na jayega .
gu;but prince ne to mana kiya hai na.

at that that class bell rings and all of them proceed towards classes.

sa; nupur tum yaha class mein bathi ho aur hum log tumhe kaha kaha dhund rahe the .
nu;actuall mein abhi abhi ayi thi to directly yahi aa gai

be;dodte hue aata hai gyus devdar aa raha hai everyone rush towards their seat sajan sit together and same as benia and nupur and cj together and uday on front seat alone.
de; good morning class hope you all are studing .

at the same time a boy come and ask
b;may i come in sir ;
de; yes,
b;sir new admission .
de;you are late .
b;sorry sir actually i got difficulty in finding class .
de;ok this is first and last time ok .
b; thank you sir

the new boy go and sit beside uday because that is only left.

de; today i have no mood to teach you .

now all are relaxing

be; thank god aaj to bach gaye .
de; no mr bengi you are worng i have no mood to ask teach but today i am going to ask some questions which you have studied till today .ok.

all are tensed now because they know strictness  of devdhar .

de; ok what is semi conductor ,
all are standing on by one and no one is giving correct answer  .

and its stops at gunjan.
gu; semiconductor is ametal whose conductivity lies between metal and non- metal.

and so own devdher asking question and gunjan and some time cj giving answers and else standing every time nupur and sam also give answer of two or three question.

now devdher sak a very tough question whose answer is not given by any one .
de; so no one is able to answer this . what do yo mean by cro .

all are standing one by one keeping their head low .

and now almost all are standing .
and it time for new boy to stand .
de; no need to stand up ,it is our first class .
b; sir i am not standing because i don't know the answer i am standing to give answer of this question may i.
de;yes off course .
b; cro stands for'cathode ray oscilloscope' and explain about it .

and he gives almost all the answer asked by devdhar
de; welldone this is your first class and you impress me so much kuch sikho isse.

de; so what's your name.
b;mayank sharma;

de; well done and keep it up ;

at that time bell rings and devedhar leave the class and next period is free because shukla sir is not present .

so all are going to canteen and nupur passing through desk at very moment benj legs comes between and she is going t fell but our hero is their   to save her

and in this process their is beautiful eyelock between them .
and wich is broken buy benji.
be; aap logo ka yeh khatam ho gaya ho to kya hum jaa sakte hai.

nu; after coming to her sense  .
      how dare you to touch me.
ma; oh hello madam i have no intention to tuch you .are ye to acha hai hai tahkyou bolne ki bajaye mujhe hi suna rahi ho .
nu; oh hello sayad tum mujhe jante nahi ho .
ma;jana na bhi nahi chahta ,jhansi ki rani .

and he left from their

nu; jhansi ki rani usne mujhe jhansi ki rani kaha main use nahi chodungi .
di; wo chala gaya chalo canteen

now cut to canteen

all are eating something but nupur is in anger mood
nu; uska to kuch karna padega .
be; par nupur college mein to hum kuch nahi kar sakte na prince ne mana kiya hai.
sa; college mein mana kiya hai to kya hua bhar to nahi;
ud; oh hello bhai shab bhar use kuch kiya to pollice case ho gayega .
nu; but agar pura college waha mojood ho to kuch nahi hoga understanding samarat point
be;but hum log pure college ko ikhata kaise karenge .
nu;thats no problem ,
i have a plan tonight 

standing  on the table

 i am going to give huge party on my farm house . so all of you are invited .
nu; gunjan tera kam hai ki wo sadu waha pachuh jai and ud&be arrangments tumhe dekhni hai
all are excited for tonight party specially nupur
nu; dekhte jao sadu tumhara kya haal karti hun tumne galat panga le liya .
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Wao amazing dear
great FF i love the concept
and mayur encounter
Cont soon and thanks for pm
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veryyy ibteresting story
all the parts r fabulous-specially part 3
plz plz do cont it aachal

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thanks guys last time i started this ff but couldn't able to give regular update but this time i am prety much determined to give regular updates to you .

so iski surwath karte hue ye chota sa promo.

Gu: mayank you know we have same branch .aur is liye main tumhe invite karne aai hun.

Ma: kis khusi main .

Gu :now it gunjan turn to get heart attack what was the occasion  after lot of thinking  BIRTHDAY hai mera .



so party ke liye tayiar hai aap.
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