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hi! sorry couldnt reply to the last few parts , was busy.
as for the story- it was different , you handled it well but somehow i couldnt connect with either mayank or nupur. both seemed ...unreal? usually i get them but ...maybe the fault was in my timing of reading it. and plus i expected something so different perhaps.
i liked the concept ,didnt like nupur and finally ended up with not much change in feelings
as for your writing- this was one story which had a lot of underlying physical content which you wrote really well. like your other stories, i liked the way you wrote this too.thanks
come back with another one soon.
as for the story- it was different , you handled it well but somehow i couldnt connect with either mayank or nupur. both seemed ...unreal? usually i get them but ...maybe the fault was in my timing of reading it. and plus i expected something so different perhaps.
i liked the concept ,didnt like nupur and finally ended up with not much change in feelings
as for your writing- this was one story which had a lot of underlying physical content which you wrote really well. like your other stories, i liked the way you wrote this too.thanks
come back with another one soon.
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