ABHIYA OS "A MEMORABLE EVENING" completed - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice update! Abhay and Piya's shopping trip was cute and I'm glad that they'll be matching at their engagement! Looking forward to Abhiya's engagement, hopefully everything goes smoothly and no problems creep up! Eagerly waiting for the next update! Continue soon 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey its really great👏👏👏... awesome OS dear😳... i love it☺️... plz plz plz update soon and pm me😛...
LOVE ABHIYA❤️🤗❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow awesome part
best scene was abhya fighting 4 pia's lehnga color ...lol
black purple black purple ...lol
great work
continue when u can
see yaaa =)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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guys!

 to all of you for liking it. i'm really sorry for not reply anyone. now, here is the third and last part of this os. hope u all like it. plz read and leave ur precious comments.😊

Edited by abhiyarockz - 12 years ago
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THAT WAS THE EVENING WHEN ABHAY AND PIA HAND IN HAND WALKED WITH EACH OTHER. BEFORE 2 WEEKS THEY GOT ENGAGED AND MARRIAGE SHOULD BE HELD AFTER 2 MONTHS. THEY WALK IN A JUNGLE SUDDENLY THEY HEAR THE HAWLING OF WAREWOLF. PIA GET SCARED AND ABHAY WORRIED FOR HER. ABHAY CLOSES HER AND HUGGED HER TIGHTLY.


ABHAY: YOU HAVE TO GO PIA! HERE IS A DANGER.


PIA: BUT WHERE ABHAY?


ABHAY: MY HOUSE IS NEAR FROM THIS PLACE YOU KNOW THAT. YOU HAVE TO GO THERE.


PIA: AND WHAT ABOUT YOU ABHAY?


ABHAY: PIA! DON'T WORRY ABOUT ME. I SHOULD HANDLE THIS. YOU JUST GO.


PIA: NO ABHAY! I CAN'T LEAVE YOU ALONE IN DANGER.


ABHAY: PLZ PIA! JUST GO. WE DON'T HAVE TIME. DON'T WORRY ABOUT ME.


PIA: NO WAY! I CAN'T GO ANYWHERE. I'M STAYING WITH YOU AND THAT IS FINAL.


ABHAY: WHY YOU ARE SO STRUBBON?


PIA: BCOZ YOU DON'T LISTEN TO ME.


AGAIN A WAREWOLF HAWLING SURROUNDING THEM AND THIS TIME IT IS NEAR FROM THEM. ABHAY GIVE UP.


ABHAY: O.K! BUT YOU HAVE TO HIDE SOMEWHERE.


ABHAY LOOK HERE AND THERE TO FIND A PLACE FOR HIDE PIA. HE FIND A THICK TREE AND HIDE PIA BEHIND IT. ABHAY MOVE FORWARD SUDDENLY JAY COMES AND BLOCK HIS WAY.


JAY: OH HI ABHAY! FINALLY I FOUND YOU ALONE.


ABHAY: WHAT THE HELL YOU WANT JAY? WHY YOU FOLLOW ME AGAIN AND AGAIN?


JAY: YOU SERIOUSLY DON'T KNOW WHAT I WANT AND WHY I FOLLOW YOU AGAIN AND AGAIN?


ABHAY DIDN'T ANSWER HIM.


JAY: O.K! LET ME TELL YOU WHAT I WANT AND WHY I FOLLOW YOU! I WANT PIA.


ABHAY CATCHES HIM FROM COLLARS.


ABHAY: DON'T YOU DARE TO SAY HER NAME FROM YOUR DIRTY TONGUE.


JAY FREE HIS SELF FROM ABHAY.


JAY: COOL DOWN ABHAY! JUST RELAX!


ABHAY: YOU LEAVE DEHRADHUN THEN WHY YOU COME BACK AGAIN?


JAY: BCOZ OF YOU! BCOZ OF MY SISTER! SHE LOVES YOU ALOT AND WHAT YOU HAVE DONE WITH HER, YOU HURT HER AND REFUSES HER. JUST BCOZ OF YOU ABHAY SHE DIED AND NOW, I'M HERE TO TAKE REVENGE. I'LL KILL YOU AND PIA WILL BE MINE.


ABHAY: DO YOU REALLY THINK THAT YOU KILL ME AND PIA WILL BE YOURS? IS IT SO EASY?


JAY: YAP! ITS SIMPLE BCOZ I'M HER FRIEND. SHE TRUST ME ALOT. AFTER KILLING YOU I GAVE SYMPATHY TO PIA AND MY SHOULDER TO CRY. SOMEDAY SHE FALLING IN LOVE WITH ME. I KNOW IT TAKES TIME BUT IT WILL HAPPEN AND THAT DAY MY REVENGE WILL COMPLETE.


ABHAY: BUT YOU DON'T LOVE PIA! YOU PLAY A DRAMA WITH HER TO FIND OUT ME.


JAY: YAH, ITS TRUE! BUT NOW I SERIOUSLY LOVE HER. NOW, ITS TIME FOR YOU TO SAY GOOD BYE.


SUDDENLY PIA COMES INFRONT OF JAY.


PIA: NOT SO SOON! MR. JAY KHURRANA.


JAY IS IN SHOCKED TO SEE PIA.


JAY: PP...PI...PIA! TT...TU...TUM YAHAN?


PIA: TUMHE KYA LAGA JAY K TUM ABHAY KO MAR K MUJHE HASIL KARLOGE? NEVER.


ABHAY: PIA! WHY YOU CAME OUTSIDE? JUST STAY OUT OF IT AND GO BACK.


PIA: NO ABHAY! LET ME TALK TO JAY. WHAT HE THINK? HE KILL YOU AND I NEVER KNOW. HE GIVE SYMPATHY TO ME AND I'M FALLING FOR HIM? NOT AT ALL. BUT WHY HE WANT TO KILL YOU? TELL ME JAY.


JAY: JUST BCOZ OF ABHAY MY SISTER WAS DEAD.


PIA: REALLY JAY? NO ONE CAN SEE HER DEAD BODY. HOW CAN U SAY THAT SHE IS DEAD?


JAY(FUMBLING): WHA...WHAT R U SAYING? I DON'T UNDERSTAND.


PIA: MEANS! YOU SAID THAT BCOZ OF ABHAY UR SISTER WAS DIED, RIGHT? MY QUESTION IS, IF SHE WAS DEAD THEN WHERE IS HER DEAD BODY?


JAY: PIA! YOU DOUBT ON ME?


PIA: YES! I'M.


JAY: PLZ! TRUST ME PIA! I'M NOT LYING.


PIA: TRUST? ON YOU, HUH! YOU SAID THAT YOU WANT TO FRIENDSHIP WITH ME I TRUST ON IT. YOU SAID YOU LOVE ME AND I TRUST YOU. BUT U DID IT ALL BCOZ U WANT TO FIND ABHAY THROUGH ME. U USE ME FOR IT, WHY?


JAY: I'M SORRY PIA! I DID ALL BCOZ MY MOM WANT ME TO DO THIS. I DON'T WANT TO HURT U PIA, TRUST ME.


PIA: TRUST INSANO PE KIYA JATA HAI JAY, JANWARON PE NAI.


JAY: WHY DID U SAY THIS PIA?


PIA: TUMHE KYA LAGTA HAI JAY K MUJHE NAI PATA HOGA K TUM EK WAREWOLF HO INSAN NAI.


JAY AND ABHAY BOTH R IN SHOCKED.


ABHAY(IN HEART): HOW DID SHE KNOW ABOUT JAY'S REALITY?


ABHAY TRY TO FIND OUT THROUGH HIS POWER. HE MOVE TOWARDS PIA, PUT HER FACE IN HIS HANDS, LOOK IN HER EYES AND READ HER MIND.


IN PAST:


BEFORE A DAY OF THEIR ENGAGEMENT RAICHANDS THROW A PARTY BCOZ THEY GOT SUCCEED IN A BIG BUSINESS DEAL. DOBRIYALS R ALSO INVITED. PARTY WAS GOING ON. EVERYONE ENJOYED. SUDDENLY PIA FIND THAT ABHAY IS NOT PRESENT. SHE EXCUSE WITH HER SISTERS AND FIND ABHAY HERE AND THERE. SHE FINDING HIM AND REACHED AT THE STUDY ROOM AND STOP COZ FROM INSIDE SHE HEAR THE VOICE OF ABHAY WHO TALKED WITH SID.


ABHAY: KYA HUA BHAI? AAP ITNE PARESHAN KYUN HO?


SID: KUCH NAI ABHAY! BAS YE SOCH RAHA THA K JAY TUMSE BADLA LENE K LIYE KIS HADH TAK JA SAKTA HAI.


ABHAY: KYA MATLAB BHAI? KYA AAPKO US K PLAN K BARE MAIN KUCH PATA CHALA HAI? KIS BAAT KA BADLA LENA CHAHTA HAI WO?


SID: HAN ABHAY! PATA TO CHALA HAI. WO TUMSE ALINA KO DHOKA DENE KA BADLA LENA CHAHTA HAI.


ABHAY: WHAT? BUT MAINE ALINA KO KOI DHOKA NAI DIYA. I KNOW THAT SHE LOVE ME AND I REFUSE HER. YE BAAT PIA KO B PATA HAI AUR US DIN K BAAD ALINA KAHAN GAYI KOI NAI JANTA SIRF SUNA THA K WO MAR GAYI HAI USKI BODY B NAI MILI THI AND AFTER THAT JAY ALSO LEAVE DEHRADHUN.


SID: YEHI TO BATANA HAI THAT ALINA IS ALIVE.


ABHAY: WHAT? TO PHIR WO SAB...


SID: WO SAB RUMOURS THE JO JAY NE KHUD PHELAYE THE COZ HE WANT PIA. HE WANT THAT PIA SHOULD HATE YOU BUT IT CAN'T HAPPEN BCOZ OF A DEAL WHICH WAS B/W VAMPIRES AND WAREWOLVES. THAT DEAL FORCE HIM TO LEAVE DEHRADHUN AND BCOZ OF IT HE CAN'T TELL PIA ANY WRONG WORD. NOW, HE COME BACK TO FULFILL HIS DREAMS. YOU HAVE TO B CAREFUL AND ALSO PROTECT PIA. EVEN U HAVE TO MAKE SURE THAT SHE DIDN'T KNOW ABOUT JAY IS A WAREWOLF AND HE IS BACK.


ON THE OTHER SIDE PIA IS IN SHOCKED TO KNOW ABOUT JAY'S TRUTH.


ABHAY: YAH BHAI! I'LL TAKE CARE. WHERE IS ALINA AND HOW COULD U KNOW ABOUT ALL OF IT?


SID: JAY HIDE HER SOMEWHERE IN THE DARK AND I KNOW ABOUT IT THROUGH MY SOURCES AND POWERS.NOW, SHALL WE GO? HAMARI ABSENCE KO FEEL KAR K WO DETECTIVGIRI KI DEEWANI(PIA) DHONDNE NA AAJAYE.


ABHAY(SMILES): BHAI AAP B NA! LETS GO.


PIA SHOCK SE BAHAR AAYI AND RUN TOWARDS HALL. SHE CONTROL HER EXPRESSIONS AND TRY TO SMILE. SHE DON'T WANT TO HURT ABHAY THAT'S Y SHE DIDN'T TELL HIM ABOUT KNOWING THE TRUTH.


IN PRESENT:


ABHAY STILL IS IN SHOCKED SUDDENLY JAY PUSHED HIM HARDLY. HE CRUSH WITH TREE AND FALLS. PIA MOVE FORWARD AND STOP INFRONT OF JAY AND SLAPPED HIM FORCEFULLY THREE TIMES, CATCH HIM FROM COLLARS AND SAID.


PIA: HOW DARE YOU TOUCH MY ABHAY?


JAY(ANGRILY): YOUR ABHAY! NOW, YOU WAIT AND WATCH WHAT I HAVE DONE WITH UR ABHAY.


HE PUSHED PIA IN A SIDE, SHE CRUSH WITH TREE AND FAINT. SEEING THIS ABHAY FANGS OUT AND JAY TARANSFORMED INTO A WOLF. THEY BOTH JUMPED IN THE AIR AND START FIGHTING. THE FIGHTING WAS TOO FAST. ITS REALY HARD TO UNDERSTAND WHAT'S HAPPENING. ABHAY POUNCED JAY AGAIN AND AGAIN HARDLY. THEY BOTH FALLING DOWN. JAY WOUNDED BADLY AND HE CAN'T MOVE FOR A WHILE ON THE OTHER HAND ABHAY STAND UP AND RUN TOWARDS PIA AND TRYING TO WOKE UP. SHE OPEN HER EYES SLOWLY AND HUG ABHAY.


ABHAY: PIA! R U O.K?


PIA: YAH! I'M O.K.


SUDDENLY SHE SAW JAY COME WITH WOODEN STICK TO HIT ABHAY, SHE SHOUTS.


PIA: ABHAYYY!


ABHAY LOOK BACK AND STOP WOODEN STICK AN INCH AWAY FROM HIS CHEST. ABHAY SNATCH IT AND THROW IT DOWN. PUSHING JAY BACK, HE STOP WITH A TREE. NOW, ABHAY AND JAY AGAIN RUN AND WANT TO JUMP IN THE AIR SUDDENLY JAY FALLING DOWN AND ABHAY CONFUSED TO SEE THAT WOODEN STICK CROSS JAY'S CHEST. HE TURN BACK AND SHOCKED THAT WAS PIA WHO DID THIS. PIA READ A QUESTION "WHY" IN HIS EYES. PIA HAD TEARS IN HER EYES. SHE HUGGED ABHAY TIGHTLY AND HIDE HER FACE IN HIS CHEST.


PIA: I'M SORRY ABHAY! I DON'T WANT TO DO THIS BUT IF I DIDN'T THIS HE KILLED YOU.


ABHAY: THAT'S NOT UR FAULT PIA! ITS O.K! IT HAPPENS AS THE WAY IT WROTE. U STOP CRYING.


ABHAY CARESSES HER HAIR AND CONSOLING HER.


FLASHBACK IS OVER:


ABHAY ENTER IN ROOM AND SEE PIA WHO (WEARING A FOOT LENGTH NIGHTY IN BLACK COLOUR) STAND IN WINDOW BUT TOTALLY LOST IN PAST. ABHAY KNEW THAT WHAT SHE THINK. BEFORE 10 MONTHS THEY GOT MARRIED. ABHAY TURNS PIA INTO A VAMPIRE. ABHAY MOVE TOWARDS HER AND HOLD HER FROM BACK. SHE CAME IN PRESENT. ABHAY SAW TEARS IN HER EYES HE FEEL BAD AND SAID.


ABHAY: PIA! TUM PHIR US RAAT K BARE MAIN SOCH RAI HO?


PIA: NAI AISA TO KUCH NAI HAI.


ABHAY: DON'T MAKE ME FOOL. PIA! HOW MANY TIMES I SAY THAT, EK SAAL PEHLE US RAAT KO JO KUCH B HUA US MAIN TUMHARI GHALTI NAI THI. THEN Y U THINK ABOUT IT SO MUCH?


PIA: TO PHIR KYA KARUN ABHAY? YE BAAT MUJHE CHAIN NAI LENE DETI THAT I WAS KILLED SOMEONE.


ABHAY: I TOLD U MANY TIMES JUST FORGET THAT BUT U NEVER LISTEN TO ME AND BELIEVE ME THAT'S NOT UR FAULT. U HURT ME AGAIN AND AGAIN TO THINK ABOUT THAT NIGHT.


ABHAY GET ANGRY AND LEAVE FROM ROOM. PIA GET TENSED BCOZ HER LIFE ANGRY WITH HER. AFTER FEW MINUTES ABHAY AGAIN ENTER IN ROOM WITH A BOOK AND MOVE TOWARDS BED (WHENEVER ABHAY GET MORE ANGRY WITH PIA HE USE TO READ BOOK AND IGNORED HER). PIA COME AND SIT BESIDES ABHAY.


PIA: ABHAY! I'M SO SORRY.


HE IGNORE.


PIA: PLZ ABHAY! FORGIVE ME.


AGAIN IGNORE.


PIA: ABHAY! LOOK AT ME PLZ. I'M SORRY PLZ FORGIVE ME.


HE IGNORED AGAIN AND BUSY IN READING. SUDDENLY PIA SNATCH THE BOOK AND THROW IT ON SOFA.


ABHAY: WHY THE HELL YOU DID THIS?


PIA: KABSE SORRY KAR RAI HUN SUN HI NAI RAHE THE.


ABHAY GOING TO PUT THE BOOK BUT PIA STOP HIM AND SAID.


PIA: KAHAN JA RAHE HO?


ABHAY: BOOK UTHANE, JAUN?


PIA: NO!


ABHAY: KYUN?


PIA: BAS KEH DIYA NA NO!


ABHAY: YA TO TUM UTHA K LAO YA MUJHE JANE DO.


PIA: NA MAIN UTHA K LAUNGI NA TUMHE JANE DUNGI.


ABHAY: O.K! FINE.


ABHAY AGAIN WANT TO GO BUT PIA STOP HIM.


ABHAY: WHATS UR PROBLEM? BOOK KYUN NAI UTHANE DE RAHIN?


PIA: TUMHARE LIYE MUJHSE ZIYADA WO BOOK IMPORTANT HAI?


ABHAY: HAN HAI! BILKUL ISI TARAH JIS TARAH MUJHSE ZIYADA TUMHARE LIYE WO RAAT IMPORTANT HAI.


PIA: AISA NAI HAI ABHAY! MAIN BUHAT TRY KARTI HUN BUT NAI BHOOL PATI.


ABHAY: AUR ISI LIYE MUJHE AUR APNE AAPKO HURT KARTI REHTI HO. SOMETIMES I THOUGHT K US RAAT MAIN MAR GAYA HOTA TO IS TARAH TUMHE APNE AAP KO HURT KARTE HUE TO NA DEKHNA PARTA.


PIA(WITH TEARS): WHY U SAY THIS ABHAY?


ABHAY: BCOZ U FORCE ME TO SAY THIS.


PIA: PLZ ABHAY! DON'T SAY THIS AGAIN I CAN'T TOLERATE IT. I PROMISE ABHAY I NEVER THINK ABOUT THAT NIGHT.


PIA HUG HIM AND ABHAY CARESSES HER BACK.


PIA: I'M REALY SORRY ABHAY! I HURT U ALOT. SO SORRY FOR IT.


ABHAY WIPES OUT HER TEARS WITH HIS FINGER TIPS, PUT HER FACE IN BOTH HANDS AND SAID.


ABHAY: PLZ PIA! STOP CRYING. I CAN'T SEE U LIKE THIS AUR AAJ JO B HUA USEY BHOOL JAO. JUST REMEMBER ME AND URSELF. I LOVE U PIA! I LOVE U ALOT.


PIA: I LOVE U TOO.


ABHAY HUGGED HIM TIGHTLY. FIRST HE KISS ON HER FOREHEAD THEN EYES AND SLOWLY SLOWLY ON WHOLE FACE. PIA GIVE IN.THEY BOTH KISSING EACH OTHER PASSIONATELY. THEY COMPLETELY LOST IN THEIR LOVE WORLD. OUTSIDE THE WINDOW MOON IS ALSO HAPPY WITH THEM.


THE END.


THIS IS IT GUYS. THANX ALOT TO ALL OF U FOR LIKING AND COMMENTS. A VERY SPECIAL THANX TO PEEHU AGAIN WITHOUT HER HELP I CAN'T CONTINUE IT AND END IT.  ALOT DEAR.

THIS IS FOR YOU 🤗 

  HAVE A NICE DAY!

Edited by abhiyarockz - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
Wonderful ending thanks for d PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
wow lovely update👏and wonderful ending .  very well written  update 
 thnx 4 pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome ending! 😊 Piya killed Jeh to save Abhay! I'm glad Abhiya got married! 😛 Good job with this OS! 👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
i am gone missed this story ...
but awesome ,awesome ,awesome end 
piya and abhay conversation are funny (in present )

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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
awesome update and ending...loved it...beautifully ended..thanks for pm..