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TODAY ABHAY'S PROPOSAL GOES FOR PIA IN DOBRIYAL HOUSE. IN EVENING MADHU DOBRIYAL ARRANGE A DINNER FOR RAICHANDS.
IN RAICHAND MANSION:
HASEENA BUSY IN PREPARATION OF GIFTS FOR DOBRIYALS AND SHAGUN FOR PIA AND ALSO SHOUTING ON SERVANTS. SID ENTER IN HALL AND RELAXED HASEENA AND SAID.
SID: CALM DOWN MOM! WHY R U SO HYPER? PLZ RELAX KAREN SAB HOJAYEGA.
HASEENA: KAISE RELAX KARUN? ITNA KAAM PARA HUA HAI AUR YE SAB(SERVANTS) PATA NAI KAHAN HAIN. EK KAAM KAHA THA GHANTA LAGA DIYA. AISE HI KARTE RAHE TO KAISE TIME PAR DOBRIYALS K GHAR POHNCHENGE.
SID: MOM! R U SURE K HUMAIN DOBRIYALS K GHAR DINNER PAR JANA CHAHIYE?
HASEENA: YA! I'M SURE.
SID: BUT MOM ITS DINNER. HUM EXPOSED B HOSAKTE HAIN.
HASEENA: I KNOW! HUM IS BARE MAIN DISCUSS KARCHUKE HAIN. ABHAY K LIYE YE SAB KARNA PAREGA AND I KNOW THAT WO SAB SAMBHAL LEGA. BY THE WAY WO HAI KAHAN?READY HUA YA NAHI?
SID: MAIN DEKHTA HUN.
SID MOVE TOWARDS ABHAY'S ROOM.
IN ABHAY'S ROOM:
ABHAY IS IN WASHROOM TAKING SHAWER AND SIN A SONG LOUDLY.
"BACHNA AE HASEENON
LO MAIN AA GAYA
HEY BACHNA AE HASEENON
LO MAIN AA GAYA
HUSN KA AASHIQ HUSN KA DUSHMAN
APNI ADAA HAI YARON SE JUDA
HEY HO"
SID ENTER IN ROOM AND KEPT HIS FINGER IN EARS. SID KNOCK THE BATHROOM DOOR AND SAID.
SID: ABHAY!
NO REPLY. KNOCK AGAIN.
SID: ABHAY...! ABHAY!
AGAIN NO REPLY.
SID(SHOUT): O BE SUREY KI OULAD! KITNA TIME LAGE GA?
ABHAY TURN OFF THE SHAWER AND SAID TO SID.
ABHAY: BHAI! AAP MUJHSE KUCH KEH RAHE HAIN?
SID: NAI TUMHARE BHOOT SE BAAT KAR RAHA HUN.
ABHAY: KYA MATLAB?
SID: KUCH NAI! YE BATAO KITNA TIME LAGE GA? MOM WAIT KAR RAHI HAIN.
ABHAY: GIVE ME 15 MINUTES BHAI.
SID: O.K! JALDI KARO.
SID LEAVE FROM ROOM AND ABHAY START SINGING AGAIN.
IN DOBRIYAL HOUSE:
MADHU DOING PREPARATIONS FOR DINNER AND SHE ALSO SHOUTS ON SERVANTS, MISHA AND ARNAB.
MADHU TO COOK: TUMHARI SAMAJH MAIN AAJ RAAT KA MENU AA GAYA K KYA KYA BANNA HAI TO JAO SHURU HOJAO AUR HAN KOI GARBAR NAI HONI CHAHIYE.
SUDDENLY SHOUT ON ANOTHER SERVANTS.
MADHU: AREY IS VASE KO TO YAHAN SE HATAO WAHAN SAMNE DUSRI TABLE PE RAKHO AUR TUM YAHAN KHARE SHAKAL KYA DEKH RAHE HO DHANG SE SAAF KARO. TUM SAB KAAN(EAR) KHOL K SUNLO AGAR ZARA SI B GARBAR HUI TO TUM LOGON KI KHAIR NAI.
MADHU TO MISHA: MISHA! TUM YE KYA KAR RAHI HO?
MISHA: GAME KHEL RAHI HUN.
MADHU: UTHO! BAND KARO ISKO AUR JA K READY HOJAO AUR INSANON WALE KAPRE PEHANNA NAI TO...
MISHA: KYA MOM! AAP HAMESHA MUJHE DHAMKI KYUN DETI HAIN KAPRON K MAMLE MAIN?
ARNAB SMILES ON MISHA'S QUESTION. MADHU SAW HIM AND SAID.
MADHU: YE TUMHARE DAANT(TEETH) KIS KHUSHI MAIN BAHAR NIKAL RAHE HAIN. MAINE JOKE NAI SUNAYA HAI.
ARNAB: NAI MA... MAIN TO AISE HI. CHORO B KYUN BECHARI K PICHE PAR RAHI HO. WO JAISE B TAYYAR HOGI ACHI LAGE GI.
MISHA: I LOVE YOU PAPA!
MISHA RUN TOWARDS ROOM.
MADHU: AREY MISHA LISTEN...! TUMHARE HI LAAD PYAR NE BIGARA HAI ISE. AB KYUN HANS RAHE HO?
ARNAB: RELAX MADHU! WAQT K SAATH SAATH KHUD HI SUDHAR JAYEGI.
MADHU: I HOPE SO!
BOTH SMILES.
IN RAICHAND MANSION:
HASEENA MOVE HERE AND THERE IN HALL AND CALLING CHAND.
HASEENA: PICK UP THE PHONE CHAND.
SID READY HO K HALL MAIN AAYA AND SAID TO HASEENA.
SID: HEY MOM! I'M READY. WOW, U LOOK GORGIOUS BUT WHY R U SO TENSED?
HASEENA: BCOZ OF CHAND! MAINE CHAND SE KAHA B THA K DOBRIYALS NE DINNER PAR INVITE KIYA HAI ISLIYE JALDI AANA BUT LOOK WO AB TAK NAI POHNCHE AUR MERI CALL RECEIVE NAI KAR RAHE. WE ARE LATE.
SID: RELAX MOM! DAD AATE HI HONGE.
SUDDENLY CHAND ENTER IN HALL.
SID: LOOK MOM! DAD IS HERE.
HASEENA: KAHAN THE CHAND? KAB SE PHONE TRY KAR RAHI HUN RECEIVE KYUN NAI KAR RAHE THE? JANTE HO HUMAIN DOBRIYALS K HAN JANA HAI PHIR B...
CHAND: RELAX HASEENA! EK MEETING MAIN PHANS GAYA THA. NOW, I'M HERE. BY THE WAY WHERE IS ABHAY?
SID: DAD WO...!
ABHAY ENTER IN HALL. WEARING BLACK DINNER SUIT.
ABHAY: HEY EVERYBODY! I'M HERE. KAISA LAG RAHA HUN?
SID: JAISE HAMESHA LAGTE HI, KHARUS.
ABHAY: WHAT?
SID: MERA MATLAB HAI K...
HASEENA CUT HIS SENTENCE AND SAID.
HASEENA: STOP IT U BOTH! HUM ALREADY LATE HO CHUKE HAIN AB AUR ZIYADA DAIR MAT KARO.
HASEENA TO SERVANTS.
HASEENA: YE SAB SAMAAN GARI MAIN RAKHO.
CHAND: LETS GO.
THEY ALL LEFT THE HOUSE.
IN DOBRIYAL HOUSE:
AFTER ATTENDING HASEENA'S CALL. MADHU SHOUTS.
MADHU: ARNAB, PUNCHI, MISHA, PIA! KAHAN HO TUM LOG? JALDI AAO.
ARNAB, MISHA AND PUNCHI ENTER IN LOUNGE.
ARNAB: KYA HUA MADHU? KYUN CHILLA RAHI HO?
MADHU: RAICHANDS YAHAN K LIYE CHAL PARE HAIN ABHI HASEENA KA PHONE AAYA THA WO LOG KISI B WAQT YAHAN POHNCHTE HONGE. OH GOD! PATA NAI DINNER READY HUA YA NAHI AUR DINNING TABLE AUR...
PUNCHI: RELAX MOM! SAB READY HAI. JUST CHILL.
MADHU: PIA...! PIA KAHAN HAI? AB TAK AAYI KYN NAI? WO READY HUI YA NAI?
MISHA: MOM WO...
PIA ENTER IN LOUNGE WEARING RED CHORIDAAR PAJAMA, LONG SHIRT WITH OPEN HAIRS. SILVER BEATS AND EMBROIDRY ON LONG SHIRT, LOOKING VERY BEAUTIFUL. MISHA FREEZE FOR A SEC, ARNAB SHOCK WITH HIS OPEN MOUTH, MADHU AND PUNCHI SMILES. PIA COME TOWARDS THEM.
MADHU: BUHAT PIYARI LAG RAHI HAI MERI BETI. NAZAR NA LAGE(MADHU NE PIA K KAAN K PICHEY TIKA LAGAYA.)
PUNCHI: WOW PIA! YOU LOOK SO PRETTY.
MISHA: BECHARA ABHAY! AAJ TO GAYA KAAM SE.
ISSE PEHLA ARNAB KUCH KEHTA DOOR BELL RINGING.
ARNAB OPEN THE DOOR, RAICHANDS ARE THERE. MADHU, PUNCHI AUR MISHA WELCOME K LIYE AAGE BARHE. CHAND, HASEENA AND SID ENTER IN LOUNGE. ABHAY ENTER HONE HI WALA THA K USKI NAZAR PIA PE PARI AND HE FREEZE IN BETWEEN THE DOOR AND STARRING AT PIA. AN EYELOCK BETWEEN THEM. TIME MOVE SLOWLY. SID NE ABHAY KO PUKARA BUT HE DIDN'T LISTEN. SID NE ABHAY K SAMNE CHUTKI BAJAYI PHIR USKO HILAYA.
SID: ABHAY! KYA HUA?
MISHA: O HELLO! GHAR K ANDER B AATE HAIN.
ABHAY NE APNE AAP KO DEKHA PHIR EXCUSE KIYA.
ABHAY: OH! SORRY.
ALL ARE SMILING. ABHAY ENTER IN LOUNGE. AFTER ABHAY SERVANTS ANTER IN LOUNGE CARRY GIFTS AND SHAGUN.
MADHU: AREY YE? IN SAB KI KYA ZARURAT THI?
HASEENA: COME ON MADHU! YE SAB KUCH NAI HAI. BAS GIFTS HAIN TUM LOGON K LIYE AUR SHAGUN HAI SPECIALLY PIA K LIYE.
ELDERS MOVE TOWARDS HALL AND YOUNGSTERS SIT IN LOUNGE. ABHAY AKELE MAIN PIA SE BAAT KARNA CHAHTA THA BUT WO USKI TARAF DEKH HI NAI RAHI THI ISI LIYE ABHAY KO GHUSSA AANE LAGA.
MISHA: ABHAY! TUM KYUN ITNE CHUP BETHE HO?
ABHAY: TO TUM KYA CHAHTI HO, NACHUN?
SID: SORRY! BUT HUMAIN BANDAR(MONKEY) DANCE DEKHNE KA SHOQ NAI HAI.
PIA STARTS LAUGHING. ABHAY GET MORE ANGER.
ABHAY: BHAI AAP...
MISHA: WO...OO! PLZ PLZ DON'T FIGHT! ACHA PIA KI TARIF HI KARDO.
PIA SMILE AND EMBARESSED.
ABHAY: NOT INTERESTED!
PIA KI SMILE GHAYAB HO GAYI.
MISHA: REHNE DO NOT INTERESTED! DOOR K BICHO BICH KYUN JAAM GAYE THE PHIA?
ABHAY: MAIN TO YE DEKH RAHA THA K TUMHARE GHAR MAIN NAYI(NEW) CHUDAIL KAHAN SE AA GAYI.
PIA IS IN SHOCKED. PUNCHI AND MISHA SHOUT.
MISHA: KYA MATLAB NAYI CHUDAIL?
ABHAY: MATLAB YE K DO CHUDAILAIN YANI TUM AUR PUNCI TO PEHLE SE THIN YE NAYI CHUDAIL KA IZAFA KAB HUA MAIN YE DEKH RAHA THA.
PUNCHI AND MISHA HITTING ABHAY BY PILLOWS, SID LAUGHING LIKE MAD AND PIA WALKOUT FROM LOUNGE WITH MEIST EYES. ABHAY SAW THAT AND FOLLOW HER. MISHA US K PICHEY JANA CHAHTI THI MAARNE K LIYE BUT PUNCHI STOP HER. PIA IS IN GARDEN. ABHAY US K PAAS AAYA AND HE HOLD HER FROM WAIST.
PIA: LEAVE ME ABHAY! I DON'T WANT TO TALK.
ABHAY: PLZ PIA! DON'T CRY. I'M SORRY.
PIA: JUST LEAVE ME ABHAY! TUMNE MUJHE CHUDAIL KAHA, AB KYUN AAYE HO MERE PAAS?
ABHAY: MUJHE TUMSE AKELE MAIN BAAT KARNI THI ISI LIYE MUJHE YE SAB KARNA PARA.
PIA: IS TARAH ABHAY? KOI AUR RAASTA NAI THA?
ABHAY: TUM MERI TARAF DEKH HI KAB RAHI THIN. WELL, SO SORRY! PLZ FORGIVE ME AND STOP CRYING.
NOW, PIA START TEASING HIM. PIA NE APNE AAPKO ABHAY SE CHURAYA AUR MAIN GATE KI TARAF BHAAGI AUR PHIR GHAR SE BAHR NIKAL GAYI. NOW, PIA RUN TOWARDS JUNGLE AND ABHAY AGAIN FOLLOW HER.
ABHAY: STOP PIA! KAHAN JA RAHI HO? PLZ STOP I'M SORRY. LISTEN TO ME.
BUT PIA DIDN'T LISTEN HIM AND RUN. NOW, SHE IS IN THE MIDDLE OF THE JUNGLE. ABHAY RUN FAST AND FINALLY CATCH HER AND SAID WITH ANGER.
ABHAY: WHAT THE HELL PIA! YE TUM HAR WAQT JUNGLE MAIN KYUN BHAAG K AATI HO? KYA BUHAT PYAR KARTI HO IS JUNGLE SE?
PIA: AGAR MAIN KAHUN HAN PYAR KARTI HUN TO?
ABHAY: TO MERE BAJAYE IS JUNGLE SE HI KYUN NAI SHAADI KAR LETIN.
PIA: WAISE IDEA BURA NAI HAI.
ABHAY(ANGRY): FINE! MAIN JA RAHA HUN. RAHO IS PIYARE JUNGLE MAIN.
ABHAY JANE LAGA PIA STOP HIM BY HUG HIM FROM BACK.
PIA: YE TO PUCH LIYA K MAIN IS JUNGLE SE PYAR KARTI HUN WAJA NAI PUCHI KYUN KARTI HUN.
ABHAY(WITH OFF MOOD): KHUD HI BATADO.
PIA: IS LIYE K ISI JUNGLE MAIN MUJHE MERA JUNGLI MILA THA.
ABHAY JHATKE SE USKI TARAF PALTA.
ABHAY: U CALLINS ME JUNGLI?
PIA: YES! I'M CALLING U JUNGLI. JAB TUM MUJHE CHUDAIL BOL SAKTE HO TO MAIN BHI TUMHE JUNGLI BOL SAKTI HUN.
PIA NE PHIR ABHAY KO JUNGLI BOLA AUR BHAAG GAYI ABHAY RUN BEHIND HER SUDDENLY PIA FALLING DOWN COZ USKA PAUN(FOOT) MUR GAYA THA. ABHAY US K PAAS AAYA AUR PAUN KO HAATH LAGANE HI WALA THA BUT PIA STOP HIM.
PIA: NO, ABHAY! ITS PAINING. DON'T TOUCH.
ABHAY: DEKHNE TO DO
PIA: NAI PLZ!
ABHAY PUT HER INTO ARMS AND MOVE TOWARDS DOBRIYAL HOUSE.
ON THE OTHER HAND:
MADHU NE SABKO KHANA LAGNE KA BATAYA. RAICHANDS LOOK AT EACH OTHER AS AB KYA KAREN. MADHU AGAIN CALL THEM. MAJBURAN UNHEN UTHNA PARA. THEY ALL MOVE TOWARDS DINNING TABLE. ABHI RAICHANDS SOCH HI RAHE THE K KYA KAREN SUDDENLY ABHAY PIA KO UTHAYE ANDER AAYA. ALL RUN TOWARDS THEM.
MADHU: PIA! TUM THEK TO HO? ABHAY! YE SAB KAISE HUA?
ABHAY: PIA K SHOQ KI WAJA SE.
ARNAB: KYA MATLAB? SAAF SAAF BATAO.
ABHAY TOLD THE STORY WITH LITTLE CHANGES.
HASEENA: AGAR PIA KA PAUN MUR GAYA THA TO TUM THEK NAI KAR SAKTE THE?
ABHAY: YE HAATH LAGANE DE TO KUCH KARTA. MAINE DR. KO PHONE KAR DIYA HAI WO AATE HI HONGE. TAB TAK MAIN PIA KO US K ROOM MAIN PUHNCHA DETA HUN.
IN PIA'S ROOM:
DR. CHECK PIA, SAY FORMAL WORDS AND GO.
HASEENA: ACHA MADHU! HUM CHALTE HAIN.
MADHU: AREY AISE KAISE! ABHI DINNER TO KHAYA HI NAHI.
HASEENA: DON'T B FORMAL MADHU! PHIR KABHI KHA LENGE. YE SAB TO AB CHALTA RAHEGA AUR WAISE B PIA KO IS WAQT REST KI ZARURAT HAI. PIA K BINA DINNER MAIN MAZA NAI AAYEGA.
HASEENA MOVE TOWARDS PIA. HUG HER AND SAID.
HASEENA: O.K PIA! APNA KHAYAL RAKHNA. HUM CHALTE HAIN, BYE.
PIA: I'M SORRY AUNTY! MERI WAJA SE...
HASEENA: DON'T B SORRY PIA!(WHISPERING) INFACT U SAVE US.
PIA: AUNTY U KNOW THAT K MAINE YE JAAN BUJH K KIYA HAI?
HASEENA: YA PIA! I KNOW THAT. THANK U FOR THIS.
PIA: NO AUNTY! MAIN ABHAY K LIYE KUCH B KARNE KO TAYYAR HUN.
HASEENA: TAKE CARE, BYE.
PIA: BYE AUNTY.
ALL LEAVE THE ROOM EXCEPT ABHAY. NOW, HE UNDERSTAND Y PIA HURT HERSELF. HE MOVE TOWARDS PIA'S BED AND SIT INSIDE PIA.
ABHAY: THANX PIA! TUMNE AAJ HUMAIN EXPOSED HONE SE BACHA LIYA AND SORRY ISKI WAJA SE TUMHE APNE AAP KO HURT KARNA PARA.
PIA: STOP IT ABHAY! DON'T SAY THANX AND SORRY. I DID IT BCOZ I REALLY LOVE YOU ABHAY AND CAN'T LIVE WITHOUT YOU. I LOVE YOU SOO MUCH ABHAY.
ABHAY HUG HER TIGHTLY, KISS ON HER FOREHEAD AND SAY.
ABHAY: I LOVE YOU TOO PIA.
AND LEAVE THE ROOM.
FLASHBACK IS OVER.
PIA SMILES AND SENT A MESSAGE TO ABHAY.
PIA: WHAT A DAY IT WAS! I CAN'T FORGET IT. IT WAS A MEMORANLE DAY OF MY LIFE.
ON THE OTHER HAND.
ABHAY ALSO SMILES AND REPLIED.
ABHAY: YES! IT WAS A MEMORABLE DAY FOR US. U MADE MY LIFE COLOURFUL. THANX AND I LOVE YOU, GOOD NITE.
PIA REPLIED.
PIA: I LOVE YOU TOO, GOOD NITE.
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