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"Crazy bitch," he growled and made the phone call; the one that would dampen Maan's grand plans.
"What happens when you achieve what you wanted?" Geet asked. Maan looked at her helplessly not wanting to answer and hurt her. Geet chuckled mirthlessly.
"Congratulations Maan, today you proved that you truly are a Khurana." She said and turned to walk away.
"Geet..." Maan started.
"You truly are your father's son," Geet said without turning around and walked away towards crowed.
This was rather unexpected. Geet is one smart woman to react that way. And KIKI??? Vaidehi is such a classy name and she calls herself KIKI? I would have truly believed Maan's judgement of Kiki's intelligence had she preferred to use her own name.
I liked that Maan took responsibility for his actions and didn't go into"kismat ne mujhe ye karne pe majboor kiya" bullshit.
Coming to our business plot, its awesome!! Maan is smart, no doubt. But I would love to see him prove it to Vikram. After all, I need a very smart antagonist so that I can truly appreciate the antagonist.(another weird thought)
Nice UD. Keep up the good work!!!
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