ShAdEs Of LoVe..A SaJaN SS(COMPLETED) - Page 16

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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG...What an update yaar,
full of shockes...Seriouslyyy this sheena ...i tell u.kitni NEGATIVE hai...
AND !!!! Precap ????? what did sammy told to sheena ke
"Pyaar kabhi khatam nahi hota "OMG...What was that ???
i hope ke main jo soch rahi hu,
woh galat ho...No...noo..no...it can't happen...
I m eagerly waiting for ur next update...

cont soon

Sarah

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Posted: 13 years ago
omggg..yeh toh aur bhi confussing thaaa
arnav,dia n lavanya r fake...???:s

gosh...wat z happninggg...
cont sooon
n
thnx 4 d pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey Meru...
now i have read all previouse parts. and all were very nice...👏👏
Sheena was so bad...apne hi pati ko maar dal money k lye...😡😡
Sajan meeting was beautiful...this scene was very nicely written.😳👏
poor Rohan...feeling very bad for him..and samrat too...
hmmm to is ka matlab sb hi cheaters hen..dia..Sahaam..Lavanya..avnav...😡
okk jaldi mystery reveal karna in sb ki...
thanks for the pm
continue soon the next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
@tia
hey tia thanks for ur comment...
mam extremly sory abhi next wala tou short he hai us sey agla long ho ga as it wil be only SAJAN...islea thora wait akr lo i am sure koi prob nai ho ge as sabar ka phal hmesha metha hota hai😉
@shaffoo
thanks for ur reply ge...abi tou kuch bhe nai hai sajan k next metting tou aur bhe confused karey ge.😛.baqi ka tou ALLAH he hafizz haii...😆
@hami
take ur tym gal...thanks for lyking the update n replying..thanku so much.
@pretty
thanks pretty for ur reply...yup its realy sad when people used to take advantage of honest people...😔..but dont wory agey agey dekho hota hai kiya😆
@saduf
thank u saduf for ur reply...
@lakshami
lolzz...abi tou aur bhe bohat kuch baqii haii...😉just wait hamrey SAJAN bhe kise sey kum nai hon gey...😆
@sampada
thanks sam for lyking tera comment gaps k baad he nazar ata hai..karam hai apka ge😆
@abhii
lo itna kush kuin ho rahe ho jasey mein ney bhe tmhara reply unres kar dena hai meri traf sey bhe RES he haii...🤣sustii k marii ladkiii😡
@manisha
thanks manisha for admiring 😛
@saniya
thank u saniya for ur reply...m glad u lykd update😳
@sam_princess
thanks sam for commenting
@princeess_sarah
hey sarah thanks a lot for ur reply...its not pyaar kbhi khatm nai hota its MUHABBAT KHBI RUKTI NAI...as per my view pehli muhbbat k bad bhe dosri bari muhbbat ho saktii hai😳..tm kya soch rahe ho mjhey beh batoo lolz..i hope jo tm nai chahtii wo na ho😆
@richa api
thanks api for ur reply...kiys confusing hai ab tou sab clear hai🤣😆
koi baat nai bus aik do update tak ho he jaye ga clear...
@anjali api
RES😆
@rija api
thanks rija api finaly apney bhe comment kar he dala lol..thank u ge...yup this world is full of cheaters😆😡lets see agey kiya hota hai😆
THANKS FOR ALL OF YOU FOR PRESSING LYK BUTTONS...
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Posted: 13 years ago
PART NINE.
Samrat enterz in sheena s house..he saw a cake there and she was waiting for him...she smiles at him...
SHEENA:mjhy laga tm nai ao gey..
SAMRAT: Mein ny kbhe wada kiya ho aur mein na ao aesa khabi huwa hai kiya...
Both smiles and they seated. Shena blows of candles,cut cake and wshed rohan... Shena try to make samrat eat cake but he helds it n eat himself. He was feeling akward. As soon as posible, he wants to run from there...
SAMRAT:BAhir chal k behttey hain.
Samrat left outside. Sheena confusingly folows him.
SHEENA: tm diner nai karo gey?
SAMRAT: nai..
SHEENA: tm ny maf..
SAMRAT: mein sab kuch bhol chuka hon..
and he realy meant it...
SHEENA: kiya samrat phr sey sab pehley jesa ni ho sakta ,
SAMRAT:kiya mtlb?
he was confused what she wants??
SHEENA: mera matlb hai tum mein phir sey..
samrat tried to make himself calm as possible as he can...
SAMRAT: MUHABBAT KHABI RUKTI NAI HAI SHEENA.
sheena was confused...
SHEENA: tm kehna kiya chahtey ho Samrat ?
SAMRAT: sheena zarori nai hota pheli muhbbat k baad dubara muhbt na ho
SHEENA:tmhara matlab tm kise aur sey...
SAMRAT:han mein kise aur sey muhbt karney laga hon janti ho ab agar mjhy wo na bhe mili tou bhe mein jee lon ga kuin k tm ney mjhy sekha diya hai muhbt k bina bhe jiya ja sakta hai kbi kbi muhbbat ka ehsas he kafi hota hai...
SHEENA:tm gunjan sey pyar kartey ho ?
SAMRAT:han
SHEENA: par wo to...
SAMRAT:arnav par marti hai janta hon.
sheena was confused at his wierd smile...
SHEENA: phr bhe..?
samrat dont want to stay there long so...
SAMRAT:mjhy dair ho rahe hai. Bye.
He went away even she tried to stop him...
scene shift to dia-gunjan flat,
gunjan was in her room...dia came there...n saw her having make up...
DIA:Gunjan tjhey kiya huwa hai??
GUNJAN:kuch nai di...apney kiya socha hai apni behan ko ghar pe he bithaaye rakho ge.??
DIA:gunjan tu kehna kiya chahti hai
GUNJAN:di arnav bohat ghum lya azad aur wasey bhe hamri engament ko kafi arsa ho gya hai ab hmari shadi ho jani chahye...
DIA:shadi...gunjan tera mba...
GUNJAN:dii...reheny do na mjhey nai jana university ab...
DIA:Gunjan tu bhe na arnav khahin nai bhag k ja raha smjhii kar lon ge us sey baat abi tu ja k face wash kar ley
gunjan smiles
GUNJAN:acha abi kar k atii hon...
mjhey kuch bhe kar k jald he gunjan ko manana he padey ga usey samrat sey shadi karni he ho ge...jis k lea mein ney apna pyar ussko sonpa mjhey ab apna pyar wapis lena hai...arnav merey elawaw kise sey shadi nai kar sakta
Dia was standing in balcony when gunjan came dre caling her...
GUNJAN: DI kab sey bula rahe hon apko...
DIA:kiya ho gya ab pari ?
GUNJAN: wo na sheena...
DIA:sheena? Aye the aj ofice sory bol k gae..
GUNJAN:phr to acha huwa. Mjhy bhe mili the mein ny us sey sory bol diya
DIA:what?
GUNJAN:han aur wo ghar bhe aye the. Hum ny coffee pe... Hm ab dost hain..
DIA:tm pagal ho gae ho?wo aur dost ? Us sey zyada ghatiya kon ho sakta hai..
GUNJAN: di par usney sory bola na...
DIA: Wo sirf samrat sy shadi karney k lea yeh sab kar rahe hai.. Takey 200 crore hasil kar ley...
GUNJAN:di yeh tmhari nafrat bol rahe hai. Aur agar samrat aur sheena k shadi ho bhe jaye to acha hai samrat ko uska khoya huwa pyar mil jaye ga aur usey sahara..
anyone who always thinks about others had said it...
DIA: gunjan!
GUNJAN: di..mjhy tou us par bohat tars ata hai wo bechari ab akeli...
DIA:tm pagal ho. Mera damag mat karb karo.
GUNJAN:di bhol jao ab wo wasi ni rahe. Tekh hai? Bhol jao ab k kuch bhe huwa tha...acha yeh btao Maa k tasver khahn padi hai ? Mjhy bohat yaad a rahe hai unki..
Dia smiles at her and made her hug her.
DIA:mein ho fir bhe?
GUNJAN:di..ap world k best di ho..
DIA: aur tm bhe world k best sis ho meri har baat manti ho.
GUNJAN:hmm wo tou hai. Acha chalo btao na?
DIA: room mein han dhond ley kudhi ja k
GUNJAN: ok. Ab ap bhe so jana jaldi ok gud n8...
Gunjan left the place n comes in dia s room thinking to herself...
asey thodi na hota hai di bhe na asey he shak karti rehti hai...koi jhota kasey ro sakta hai..aur kiya asey nai hota jhot bolna buri baat hoti hai sab ko pata hai tou koi kuin boley ga...hmm..di bhe na...kham kha mein he gusa hai...oh ho yeh di ney khahn rakh di hai pic...
gunjan removes the pillows n find a pic..it was back of pic...she smiles...n take its...
yeh rahii chalo pari room mein chal k mom ko hug kar k soein...
she was just lyk a child n moves to her room...she was smiling n lyed on bed...n as she turn up the pic...she was still...

sometyms some moments came which shattered ur whole lyf in seconds...which broke ur trust in just a moment...which make u relize that u were the biggest fool of the world...u reminds of the beautiful moments which had always cherishes u...but sometym they feels lyk the most painful moments...sometyms even u dont want to cry...still tears fell from ur eyes...coz ur heart wasnt able to bear the pain u were feelings...it happens when ur heart breaks into millionare pieces...its seems ur lyf came to an end...but in real it doesnt happen..u have to face the bitter reality WHEN UR LOVED ONES TO WHOM U TRUSTS BLINDLY N LOVES CRAZILY STAB IN UR BACK...BATRAYES YOU...CHEATS YOU...
the pic was shouting itself to her...the moments circles around u to which u had ignored just to prove ur faith n believe rytt...
di arnav tmney bohat buraa kiya bohat buraa...


gunjan throw all the things on floor...n start crying lyk heell...might be for the last tym...

the night was truly very dark covered with black heavy clouds...n it rains heavily lyk fate is too crying with her...why it happens with those who used to be extreme faithful to their loved one...n when they get betrayed world used to same them fool...but why they dont understands...love is all about faith..believe...trust...some are used to be very inocent...they used to belive what people say not what they thinks...who s fault is this?the one who is betraying even themselves...or the one who is as plain as flat land...?? somethings are always unanswered...or even we have an answer...we dont want to relay on it...
PRECAPE:
SECRET...lolz...update ka intezar karo coz i dont want to spoil the moment...
if u lykd then cooment
thanks
meri
note:might be i may not able to update soon as its going to be last ASHRA (TEN DAYS) of ramdhan n secondly my college is going to start from monday ...so hope so i get tym to update it...n i wil make sure next update must be full of sajan n long one too...till then bye take care...
Edited by mars14 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
tht was soo nice update
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update yar cont soon nd realy knw whts the secret?

love
sam
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey merii
i read both the parts 8 n 9
awesome update loved it
feeling bad for gunjan
do cont soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
FABULOUS UPDATE.
TOOO GOOD.
Poor gunjan...very sad for her.

plzzz try to update the nxt part sooon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
heyyy meerriii

awwsum update
jus lovvved it
poor gnjn
bt am glad dat gnjn came 2 knw bout dia n arnav being togther..
try n cont sooon
waitng to read ahead
thnx 4 d pm..:))

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