New FF: Till the End of Time(Book1 DONE)note pg149 - Page 8

Originally posted by: Artemis678

Chapter 1 Was Great. I Like Your FF The Most. (:

Originally posted by: purple_shadoz

hey tanzie...beautifl wrk ...asm i mst say...tho i m nw hr i av rd ur ff d beautiful strangr bfr...😛..so abhay savs pia??...its pia rite...??lvd d intro n lukng 4wrd as 2 hw d story of our epic jodi unfolds...lv ur gftd writng skils...findng aryans char also ntrstng...so pia gtng married 2 jai bt nt cnvncd...hmmm...lovng it thoroly...hope abhiya lv story starts soon...waitng eagrly 4 ur updates...cn u plz pm me??...lov u loadsss...😃p.s.i hope shrish n heena di dnt kl me 4 cmntng b4 dm...hehehe...😃lolzzz...😉

Originally posted by: abhay4piya

Oh my...!!! wht an ff..😲...i was totally lost into it..😳..really marvellous job👏...abhay is just like sid in the ff...hungry n ready for prey..😆..good one..eager to know how he will fall for her..continue soon n thnx for pm..😊..keep pm-ing me..

Originally posted by: heena_mehta

omg omg omg omg
tanzie man u r superb gal!!... thanks a lot darling 🤗
rocking start...update was fabulous, fantastic, mindblowing, awesome
d way u av written it ...i m speechless, it was like i was watching a perfect episode... thanku...thanku...thanku 😳
poor pia!!😭
i m still wondering wat happened at sudden dat she left her home n reached  dat cliff...??? will know in next chpt and to clear all the confusion..no rape.. ok?
bt d way u av defined dat particular scene where abhay saved pia...dat was mesmerizing... glad you liked it... i spent hours on writing that particular scene 😳
cn't wait for d nxt part...plsss update soon
n tanzie u always keep so suspense just like abhay, dats y i always put so many questions just like pa😆  hahahah...well said...me and suspense comes in same package 😛 so in my story jhelo suspense...

love u n a big hug to u🤗 same to you darls 

Originally posted by: cuteshrishti

wow tanzie awesome update .U r superb gal.I mean somebody raped her or wht?Ohh tht's gud Abhay saved Pia & she is already pulling him 2wards her.Poor Pia his mama & all r so bad wht happened 2 her cant wait 4 more now update soon.Now u have 2 handle 2 FFs dear.Jaldi update karo I cant wait😆

 

Luv u🤗

my name s nidhi...n ya ...u r rite...m quite familiar wd d forum...bt ws nt a membr b4...😊

HEY TANZI😃

AWESOME UPDATE DEAR👏👏👏👏...

AS U TOLD JAY N PIA ENGAGEMENT ANNOUNCEMENT  I THOUGHT KI I WILL NOT READ THIS PART...BUT I DONT KNOW WHAT HAPPEN TO ME...I THINKMUJE KAHI NA KAHI LAGA KI TU MERA TOUTURE SE DAR GAYI HOGI AUR ABHIYA PART UPDATE HOGA...I REALLY HAPPY KI TUNE DONO KI SAGAIE NAHI KI...AS U KNOW NA I HATE JAY AS HE IS AYING  BETW ABHIYA...

POOR PIA😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

OMG PIA TRIED TO SUICIDE...THNK GOD ABHAY SAVED HER...

PLZ UPDATE SOON HAA...N DONT FORGET TO PM ME HAA...

HAV A NICE DAY

LUV U

SUNITA

Originally posted by: Selinapiya

Wow..Tanzie...

u are an awesome writer...1st chapter was mindblowing...

update soon...

Originally posted by: Sanjha

HEY TANZIE ... i  must say thar u r a amazing writer👏...  from where u get all this ideas yar... fantastic story👍🏼... so, the story begins with a tragedy...  waiting for d nxt...

luv 

SANJHA😊

Originally posted by: Akshi0019

awsum dr...

chapter is superb...

is dat girl pia??

n who raped her???

cont soon