Originally posted by: Chinky_RPattz
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First of all... I read the warning later 🤣
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Hey Tanzie, ryt ? yeap... should I call you Chinky or something else? 😳
Got to know your name from one of the comments.. 😳
Beautiful update yaar.. Amazingly described each and every part. Thanks a lot... im glad you liked it 😳
"Abhay was determined to compel only the doctor but ended up compelling 2 ward boys, 1 doctor and 1 nurse." Yeh abhay kabhi sudhrega nahi. Par koi baat nahi. Piya ke liye kuch bhi ! 👍🏼 🤣 this is just starting 😉
Haha..poor doctor,! got hipnotised by abhay and worked like a robot... pehle hi chup chap apna kaam karta toh kya bigad jata ! 😆 Phir bhi kya kare... he cant remember any of them na... 😛
"I'm terrible about dealing with girls so you will take care of her until she's here." come on abhay ! Just penetrate your eyes into theirs and the work is done ! 🤣 the girls will also get hipnotised without any therapy. 😆 no need to do anything... his eyes will do all the work 😍
"yea..cause girl's are always ready to DEAL with you for whatever it is!! so you don't have to do anything!!" bingo aryan ! Great minds think alike.. 🤗 😆
I am with you yaar.. Yeh sadu raichand ko thoda thoda apna brain transplant bhi kiya karo.. 😉
I loved jay-allina bond. The way they care about each other is adorable ! But are they all wolves ? 😲 So finally piya is back to her senses and saw her angel !! Waiting for this only.. He pulled her close to him and she felt safe ! Awww.. 😍 Yeap... wolves just as the show 😉
" Abhay was speechless with the rail of questions. This is exactly why he likes to stay away from human, they talk too much. She's been conscious for nearly 5 minutes and asking so many questions already!!" hahahaha.. abhay, tum piya ko nahi jante kya ?? Number of questions asked by her in one min is more than a normal human's pulse rate.. 🤣 🤣 you are too funny and did I mention I love your comments 😳
"The eyes and the words don't match at all. The softer the eyes, harsher the words!!" I so loved these two lines.. ❤️ Thanku so much 😳
Lol..aryan jan muj ke late kar raha hai sayad ! Love him for this.. Par bechara pitne wala hai abhay se 🤣 Oh gosh..the same girl on phone ! What a mystery yaar. I hope in the next chapter,you replace "the female voice" by her name ! 😛 Sorry... i'm afraid you have to wait 😛 and Abhay will bash Aryan right, left and center for being last though it wasn't intentional 😳
Loved the way abhay carried piya in his arms to her room and took care of her.. He is falling for her. He has to, or else we will smash his head. 😆
"Kya musibat apne sar le liya maine!!"
it was damn good yaar 🤣 🤣 aage aage dekho abhay, humari piya kaise tumhari band bajati hai 😆 yes... i love it when Piya abhay ki band bajati hai... sabka band bajane ki theka Abhay ne akele jo liya hai 🤣
"temptation !" sounds very tempting 😉
As I have already read and commented, you are allowed to post 6th chapter !
I order you to do it at the earliest. 🤣 🤣 Thanks for the permission 😆 😛
And sorry for such a TINY comment. I promise to make a longer one the next time..😆
Love you hun.. 🤗 I would be hpy to write an essay in return as well...no worries... luv u too dear 🤗
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