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Posted: 12 years ago
Tc ko maska..contd....πŸ˜†...

Naina; opens her eyes; looks at TC
Daksh' Ticket maangrahe hain..dikhado?
Naina; ticket? woh tumne apne jeb mein rakha tha.😲.
Daksh; woh train mein aane se pehle.lekin.baad mein tumne apne hand bag mein rakhaπŸ˜†
Naina; nahi daksh..tumhare paas hain πŸ˜‰
Daksh ; acha dekhne do.. gets up searches his pocket mere paas tho nahi hey
Naina; haan yaad aaya...mere paas hain.looks at TC.sry aapko wait karvana pada..takes her handbag and starts searching..;says; milgaya aur acts as if taking out..
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Daksh with TC; meri biwi hamesha kuch na kuch bhool jaati hein..pata hain aap ko ekbaar isne...suddenly he holds his hr8 πŸ˜†, acts as if he is lil uncmofortable and sits into seat..

Tc; aap teek tho hain'😲??

Daksh; ya..I am fine..naina ..mera tablet dona...thoda dard ho raha hein..hr8 mein🀣
Naina; daksh..kya hogaya tumhe..phir se dard ho raha hain kya? tum teek tho ho? main abhi tablet n searches for tablet..

TC is impatient 😑 as he is getting late..he says; aap pls apni ticket jaldi dikhayiye, mujhe baaki tickets bhi chek karna hain

Daksh ka dard aur thoda badh gaya( acts as if he is in lot of pain).πŸ˜†.

Naina (gusse se_😑; yaha mera husband dard se tadap raha hein aur aap ko ticket ki padi huyi hein..thoda tho humanity dikhayiye..aapka ticket dhoondo ya mere pati ki dawa..(tears in eyes)πŸ˜­πŸ€£πŸ˜†

Meri pati ki jaan ki kheemat..ek tickt se kam heinπŸ˜†..looks around others..aap hi batayiye..kya ye teek hain??😭

Phir passengers comes down aur TC ko lecture dena shuru karte hain maanvata ke baare mein..πŸ˜†

TC ko aakhir haar manna pada;I am sorry. iss halat mein aap ko ticket ke liye tang kiya...aap pls apne pati ka khayl rakhiye..agar kuch serious ho tho bulayiye..next station bas aata hi hoga..

Naina; tho ticket?ek min rukhiye dhoondtha hoonπŸ˜†

Others; Ticket baad mein dhoonda beti... pehle apni pati ki dawa tho dhoondo.bechara..ab tak teek tha...πŸ˜•

Daksh ab thoda shaanth hogaya..naina rubs his hr8

. Naina sits near daksh; tumhe kuch nahi hoga..main hoon na.hum doc ke pass jayenge daksh.puts daksh's head on her shoulder starts searching medicine again..
TC leaves from there
Naina; comes near daksh's ear; chala gayaπŸ˜‰
Daksh opens his eyes lil bit.πŸ˜‰.and winks at her..and closes them again , Station aagaya.All others help naina in getting daksh down...

Naina; bahut bahut shukriya...AAP SAB KA...
Others get back into train, train shuru honewala hain.
Jo doosra couple bete hain..unnmein se husband bolta hain train se; agli baar aap apni pati ki dawa yaad se rakhiye ga..bhooliyega nahi

Naina about to answer.daksh forgets his act 🀣and gets up and says; dekha,jab main kehtatha ki tu,he bhoolne ki bhimari hain..meri baat nahi maanti..ab sab log bhi...looks at others and stops..πŸ˜†.

He realises..what he had done.😲.everybody shocked to see daksh speaking normal
.
Lekin good news ; train shuru hogaya..picks up speed

TC ka tho kya kahu; gusse se paagla ho raha hain,😑 leki khood nahi saktana...sab shock mein hi hain

Daksh holds naina's hand and says; naina, ab kya karna hain?

Naina; bhagna shayad teek hoga...πŸ˜†.

THey both look at ecah other aur phir bhagambhagπŸ˜†
                                                                                                                Contd...

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: lucky.m

Tc ko maska..contd....πŸ˜†...

Naina; opens her eyes; looks at TC
Daksh' Ticket maangrahe hain..dikhado?
Naina; ticket? woh tumne apne jeb mein rakha tha.😲.
Daksh; woh train mein aane se pehle.lekin.baad mein tumne apne hand bag mein rakhaπŸ˜†
Naina; nahi daksh..tumhare paas hain πŸ˜‰
Daksh ; acha dekhne do.. gets up searches his pocket mere paas tho nahi hey
Naina; haan yaad aaya...mere paas hain.looks at TC.sry aapko wait karvana pada..takes her handbag and starts searching..;says; milgaya aur acts as if taking out..
.
Daksh with TC; meri biwi hamesha kuch na kuch bhool jaati hein..pata hain aap ko ekbaar isne...suddenly he holds his hr8 πŸ˜†, acts as if he is lil uncmofortable and sits into seat..

Tc; aap teek tho hain'😲??

Daksh; ya..I am fine..naina ..mera tablet dona...thoda dard ho raha hein..hr8 mein🀣
Naina; daksh..kya hogaya tumhe..phir se dard ho raha hain kya? tum teek tho ho? main abhi tablet n searches for tablet..

TC is impatient 😑 as he is getting late..he says; aap pls apni ticket jaldi dikhayiye, mujhe baaki tickets bhi chek karna hain

Daksh ka dard aur thoda badh gaya( acts as if he is in lot of pain).πŸ˜†.

Naina (gusse se_😑; yaha mera husband dard se tadap raha hein aur aap ko ticket ki padi huyi hein..thoda tho humanity dikhayiye..aapka ticket dhoondo ya mere pati ki dawa..(tears in eyes)πŸ˜­πŸ€£πŸ˜†

Meri pati ki jaan ki kheemat..ek tickt se kam heinπŸ˜†..looks around others..aap hi batayiye..kya ye teek hain??😭

Phir passengers comes down aur TC ko lecture dena shuru karte hain maanvata ke baare mein..πŸ˜†

TC ko aakhir haar manna pada;I am sorry. iss halat mein aap ko ticket ke liye tang kiya...aap pls apne pati ka khayl rakhiye..agar kuch serious ho tho bulayiye..next station bas aata hi hoga..

Naina; tho ticket?ek min rukhiye dhoondtha hoonπŸ˜†

Others; Ticket baad mein dhoonda beti... pehle apni pati ki dawa tho dhoondo.bechara..ab tak teek tha...πŸ˜•

Daksh ab thoda shaanth hogaya..naina rubs his hr8

. Naina sits near daksh; tumhe kuch nahi hoga..main hoon na.hum doc ke pass jayenge daksh.puts daksh's head on her shoulder starts searching medicine again..
TC leaves from there
Naina; comes near daksh's ear; chala gayaπŸ˜‰
Daksh opens his eyes lil bit.πŸ˜‰.and winks at her..and closes them again , Station aagaya.All others help naina in getting daksh down...

Naina; bahut bahut shukriya...AAP SAB KA...
Others get back into train, train shuru honewala hain.
Jo doosra couple bete hain..unnmein se husband bolta hain train se; agli baar aap apni pati ki dawa yaad se rakhiye ga..bhooliyega nahi

Naina about to answer.daksh forgets his act 🀣and gets up and says; dekha,jab main kehtatha ki tu,he bhoolne ki bhimari hain..meri baat nahi maanti..ab sab log bhi...looks at others and stops..πŸ˜†.

He realises..what he had done.😲.everybody shocked to see daksh speaking normal
.
Lekin good news ; train shuru hogaya..picks up speed

TC ka tho kya kahu; gusse se paagla ho raha hain,😑 leki khood nahi saktana...sab shock mein hi hain

Daksh holds naina's hand and says; naina, ab kya karna hain?

Naina; bhagna shayad teek hoga...πŸ˜†.

THey both look at ecah other aur phir bhagambhagπŸ˜†
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Haha!!!ROFL this is sooo funny!! Naina is so typical with her tricks!!! poor dakshu!! he had to spoil everything but good thing they were outta the train!!! good one lucky!!πŸ˜†πŸ‘
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Posted: 12 years ago
@niksidfan
cute FF yaarπŸ‘ but rohini and sanket shouldnt have disturbed them!πŸ˜”
 cant wait for the nxt partπŸ˜† wanna see daksh go super duper jelous!! poor dakshuπŸ˜›
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Posted: 12 years ago
lucky...hilarious..loved the prank yar...dat was sooo NainaπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† nd Daksh bechara to🀣...
too good yar, too goodπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lucky  πŸ€£  πŸ€£  πŸ€£ too good yaar πŸ‘ u bought my mood back... Thats so so so Naina I used to enjoy... πŸ˜ƒ Bechara Dakshu πŸ˜‰ atleast he tried his best πŸ˜› 

Heart pain  πŸ€£  πŸ€£  πŸ€£ kya idea hai... couldn't control my laughter...  πŸ€£  πŸ€£ 

Aur Akhir main Dakshu ka muah kholna πŸ˜†πŸ˜† Accha hua train chalu hogi nahi to... πŸ€£  πŸ€£  πŸ€£
Aage aur bahut kuch aacha hone wala hai lagta... Thanks bud πŸ€—Loved it...πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 12 years ago
lucky.. all are good... not just good.. superb.. funny bhi hai... πŸ€£
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Posted: 12 years ago
niksidfan, 
it is too good... 
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Posted: 12 years ago
k.. now i am trying to continue my FF... 
in the morinig Daksh was in hurry rite?? in the evening.. Daksh comes after office... Ayi looks tensed... Daksh sees ayi but not Naina.. usualy she is with Ayi while he returns from office. 
D: Naina kaham hai..?
A: voh shaam ko ek client ko milne ke liye gayi.. abhi tak ayi nahi.. 
D: ha.. muje pataya tha.. kya abhi tak vapas nahi aya..?
A: ha beta.. uska phone bhi nahi lag raha hai.. 
Daksh becomes tensed but not showin.. : tu chinta mat kar.. voh abhi ayegi...
he waits in the office room.. he looks at the clock then mobile.. he tries to call but no luck! time is getting too late.. he is definitely out of mind... he cannot sit.. he walks from here to there.. ayi-baba look at the door.. in daksh's mind flash backs of goons theft is coming.. he is too much tensed.. he runs to the car... haavoo... 
Ayi: lo.. naina aa gayi...[nainalooks tnsed...] 
daksh feels better but not telling anything... he stands behind ayi.. 
n: ayi... ane ke samay bus break down ho gaya tha.. mera phone ka battery bhi khatam ho gayi thi.. aaspas koyi shop bhi nahi thi.. bohot tension ho gayi thi.. 
A: koyi baat nahi.. tum ayi gayi hai na..? chal... haath moof wash karo.. khana hai na.. 
Naina looks at Daksh but he is silent and looks like Kp... without telling anything he goes to room.. Naina follows him
in room: she sees her daksh standing near window looking outside... 
N: Daksh... i am sorry... kal charge karna bhool gayi thi.. battery empty ho gayi thi... isliye min phone kar nahi sakthi.. doosrre bus pakdne ke chakkar me thi.. 
Daksh is still Kp... not telling anything.. not looking at her even.. naina feels bad... she about to hold his shoulder.. [chitu.. naina... ayi calls... ]
they leave for dinner... naina keeps nticing daksh.. he is still silent.. after having food.. daksh goes to room.. Naina and ayi in kitchen for final works.. ayi keeps asking abt the meeting and naina answering but still her mind is near daksh.. after finishing the work they leave for their own room..
Naina gets in the room and closes the door... hearing that daksh who was standing near windw comes to the wardrobe and takes his night dress and starts change the dress. Naina also comes to the shelf and takes her gown and gets in the wahsroom... by getting out she see daksh is asleep.. naina feels too bad. daksh is too angry she undertood. eh didn't tell anything to her.. ???!!! naina goes to the other side of the bed and tries to sleep... she cannot sleep.. his silence disturbs her a lot. he lies with this side and with other side. not.. no blessing of sleep.. she gets up and goes near window and looks into the darknes.. meanwhile, daksh stretches his hand and finds bed is empty near him.. he opens eyes and looks around... ah.. finds Naina stands near window... he gets up and walks near her.. 
D: Naina.. kyu.. sona nahi hai kya..?[no answer she is deep in her thoughts...]
Daksh puts his hand on naina's shoulder... Naina wake up and looks at Daksh.. he finds drops of tears in her eyes... oh.. you know he cannot suffer it.. 
D: kya.. tum ro rahi ho.. naina? [dakshundertands the matter]
Naina does not anser and she hugs Daksh ans asks: tum mujse naaraz ho daksh? 
D: nahi naina.. naraz nahi.. bus bohot pareshan ho gaya tha... tum hamesha laparwa ho.. eha mei kitna pareshan ho gaya tha tumhe pata? pata nahi tha... kaha toondoo... phonoe bhi nahi lag raha tha..!!! muje us gunde logo ka kidnapwala incident yaad ayi thi... bohot tension ho gaya tha isliye.. 
n: daksh.. tum iss tarah.. chup chap math rahna.. tumhara eh silence mei bardash nahi kar pathi... pls Daksh... tum tumhara gussa mujpar nikalo.. lekin iss tarah... silent mat hona.. bohot bura lagta hai.. 
Daksh lifts her face and and tells... : mei naraz nahi hooo.. kaha na.. tnsion ho gaya tha... [naina tries to smile.. a tear drops down from her eye and rolls on her cheek] 
Daksh takes her face in his hand and: ab yeh aasoo bahana band karo naina.. tumhe pata haina.. mein eh bilkul bardash nahi kar payi.. 
Naina smiles... daksh wants to whip the tear.. he comes closer to her... slowly... naina closes her eyes.. he kisses on her eyes.. then cheeks. then... they look each other... love waves in their mind. they are lost in their love... Daksh lifts naina in his arms and takes her to the bed... 
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naina with shy... smiles.. Daksh is in his love kisses on her foreheard.. daksh moves his fingers through her face... forehead... thru nose then lips to her hand.. naina closes her eyes... he kisses on her eyes then... their eyes are stuck.. slowly daksh's finger stuck on the tie of the gown. he is abt to untie the outergown of naina [hey.. inner gown is there πŸ˜ƒ]... oh.. naina holds Daksh's hand suddenly... Daksh doubtfully look at naina only i2i conversation..[d: kya huva...?]
nains does not answer but simply looks at the bed lamp... [arre light to off karona]
daksh looks at it and looks at naina... and smiles. . naina bhi sharamake smiles... daksh leans and truns off the light.. [hey ab kya.. ab tum kuch nahi dekh payega.. they switched off their lights... hi hi hi..πŸ˜†] scene fades.. 

to be continued... πŸ˜‰

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Posted: 12 years ago
thnks sweetish,ntsindia,lucky,ladymistique,dakshnafan.for encouraging me to continue...i will try to come up with the next part asap
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Posted: 12 years ago
@ntsindia...it was soo romantic yr...in fact i cud imagine the soft love gestures of daksh...